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Jose-Ramiro β Mahr, Bleet and Minerva
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Published: 2011-05-02 05:18:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 14424; Favourites: 130; Downloads: 109
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A little beach comic starring Mahr and Bleet, guest starring Minerva Mink, with Alvin Seville and Brittany Miller in cameos.Related content
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Alvin *grins* I know. I'll show Brittany how good I am.
Brittany arrives already in her boxing outfit.
Brit- Okay, Alvin, nice to see you arrived early. As I said, I'll not beat you up full force, but I'll still throw some hard punches.
They start Round 1... and even with his training, Alvin is getting pummeled; Brittany trained a lot this week too. Even with her holding back her punches, and Alvin having a decent defense, she's still too good for him.
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I say to Marh:
- You did a good work,but seem that Alvin even need improve more his defense.
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Mahr- I know, and I told him that; the problem is, Alvin is a natural athlete, but not a natural fighter, while Brittany is a very natural fighter; in a week, she can learn and train better than Alvin would do in a whole month.
Round 1 finishes; Brittany goes to her corner for the one-minute-break, while Alvin gets attended in his own corner.
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- This is a critical problem,because create a big and dangerous unbalance between them! 
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Alvin *attended* Nnnngh... even with the protection and my training, Brittany is just too strong for me.
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- Well,Marh said that she is a natural fighter,and you isnΒ΄t!Seem that this cause a big unbalance!
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Alvin- I thought I'd get some edge here since, well... I'm the guy and she's the girl.
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- I think that she wait see you showing your full force at arena!Keep in mind that you both are with safety equipments.So,you really no will wound her.Now,back there and hit hard!
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Alvin nods and, this time, he fights full force. He actually gives Brittany a few good hits, but she still dominates him; what makes it more impressive is that Alvin is using all his strength and skill on a girl with no protective equipment, and still she is winning, despite Alvin being protected and Brittany going easy on him.
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On the chair,I down my head,saying:
- Oh,my!Alvin is misfortuned boy,convicted become the BritannyΒ΄s private punching bag!
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Mahr- Unfortunately, he is responsible for this; it was because of his lack of control that Brittany got this angry on him.
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- I know,but I think that she are overdoing on the punishment!
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Mahr- Uh... actually, she's going easy on him.
Bleet- Yes, according to my calculations, Brittany is using only 10 percent of her whole capacity.
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Puting my head between the hands,I say:
- Alvin is really fucked!
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Alvin goes down, and this time he doesn't stand up. The match is over.
Brittany *helping him stand up* Well, you made it to round 2; it's not bad for a first one. *pause* You still think you can resist a whole year of this?
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I say to myself:"This way,I think that Alvin no will survive not three months!I guess that I need about this to Valerie.Maybe she can find a solution that I cannot see."
(Note:The words above are a idea of my OC,that the others characters cannot listen!)
Worried,I ask to Bleet and Marh:
- So,you both think that Alvin can stand all this time?
(However,them can listen the second sentence.Put the Bleet and Marh opinion and also,the AlvinΒ΄s answer. 
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Bleet- I think he can if he gets stronger... and Brittany doesn't go for the whole year.
Mahr- I agree; I think Brittany only wants to see how much he's willing to work on this relationship.
Alvin *in pain* Uh... look, Brit... I wish I wouldn't need to do this... but I'll take it again and again if you forgive me.
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- Listen him Britanny!Because if the situation keep going this way,soon you will see Alvin in a Intensive Unit Care!
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Brittany smiles and kisses Alvin. He gets a happy face.
Brit- Okay, if you keep doing a good job... maybe, just maybe... you'll not need to be my sparring partner for the whole year; maybe just a couple of months. *shrugs* Too bad; I never find a good sparring because I beat them all.
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- Well Britanny,if you really wanna a good sparring partner,I can talk about this with my girlfriend Valerie.SheΒ΄s a black belt in three different karate styles,and nobody won her in a fight!
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Mahr- Or I can spar with you too.
Brittany *grins* Okay, how about a spar right now? I didn't get tired with this match.
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- Okay Marh,go spar with Britanny,while Alvin rest. 
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Bleet helps Alvin get down the ring while Mahr puts on her fighting gear.
Brittany- I already warmed up for this. You need time for that?
Mahr- Just a few moments. *stretches, does some shadow boxing* How many rounds you wanna fight?
Brittany- Mmm... I think, five. I suppose Bleet will be your second; Alvin can be mine, and Tanuki can be the referee.
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- Thanks a lot by your trust in me,Britanny!
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(Hey dude,whatΒ΄s a "second" in a box match? 
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(The 'second' is the boxer's assistant; the one that helps him/her between rounds)
Brittany- You're welcome. *grins at Mahr* I warn you; my record is 40 wins, no loses, 40 knock outs.
Mahr- Heh, my record is 60 wins, no loses, 60 knock outs.
Brittany *smirks* Mmmm... then, prepare to lose for the first time.
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- Okay,young battle babes!GO!
I look the match begin.Britanny and Marh are young and through. 
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Brittany throws some strong punches; Mahr blocks them all and replies with her own hits. Brittany dodges or blocks them all.
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IΒ΄m in a sensitive situation. 
(Note:This is a though of my OC,that the characters cannot realize.)
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(Ok)
Brittany throws a hard hook at Mahr's body but the wolf resists and replies with a strong one of her own.
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I say to Bleet and Alvin:
- You both have thoung girls!I cannot foresee how this will finish!
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Bleet- Guess it depends on who's stronger and has best stamina, because they both have good skills.
In the ring, Mahr corners Brittany; the chipette, however, has a very good defense so doesn't get that hurt.
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- Well Bleet,sometime ago,my girlfriend Valerie(a fox)fought against a dog girl called Brandy.After 15 rounds,a result was a draw,because both had the same strenght and stamina,and the skills also were on the same level.
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Round one stops. Brittany goes to her corner and Alvin attends her, while Bleet attends Mahr.
Brittany- This gal is strong... I'll need to keep her from cornering me again.
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- Well Britany,Marh fought 20 matchs more that you!This mean more experience...
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Brittany- Yes, you're right. *grins* Still, I know I can defeat her.
Next round starts. Mahr throws some strong punches; Brittany blocks and hits back.
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Without look away of the macth,I ask to Bleet:
- Tell me,lamb boy:now them are fighting with full force?
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Bleet- Whoa... almost; they're over 70%, that's for sure!
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- So,this round will be awesome!
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Brittany punches Mahr several times, but the powerful wolfette resists and replies with excellent combos.
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I ask to Bleet:
- Who are been better now?
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Bleet- Mahr is getting the upper hand, but Brittany isn't done yet.
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- Yeah!She isnΒ΄t a girlΒ΄s kind that give up easily!
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Brittany throws a strong uppercut but Mahr dodges it and replies with a right hook that stuns Brittany.
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Surprised,I say:
- This should had hurt a lot!
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Mahr punches Brittany again, sending her down. Brittany stands up in 7 and then realizes she has a large bruise on her face.
Brittany *growling* Okay, now I'm upset.
Brittany attacks with a lot more power than before.
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Looking the BritannyΒ΄s reaction with worry,I say to Alvin and Bleet:
- This is bad!Once,I listen a kung-fu master say that the rage disturb the reflex!So in a fight,the winner will be of that the keep the cool,because can find the faults on the opponentΒ΄s defense to do a counter-attack!
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Alvin- Yes, but you don't know Brittany when she gets this angry; she gets furious, yes, but she keeps enough control to use her rage. She once defeated a full gang on her own.
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- Well,letΒ΄s see if this will work against Marh!
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Mahr starts having problems fighting Brittany; the chipette then hits her so hard she falls down. Mahr stands up in 7 and the round ends.
Mahr- Good. *serious* From now on, 100 percent of power.
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- Well Marh,seem that you found a good opponent!
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