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They prepared for the assault. Three heavy duty Heliglider’s landed as the doors to the Regis opened.A new type of capturing device had been specially built for the Regis, a normal Pokémon (though could easily hold them) wouldn’t be strong enough to keep them in the ball. So the new device was made called the Poke cube, like the master ball it was an extreme locking device.
"Sir, the co-ordinates are coming through now...its location has been clarified" said the major
"Good major, get them in the PokeCubes and let’s move out!" shouted the general.
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She ran up to the side of the pool grabbing the pole that cleans out the leaves. She dropped to her knees pulling off her slippers in case she had to jump in.
She had never seen anything like this Pokémon... or seen pictures or anything.... she knew to be careful, it might be dangerous... but she couldn’t let it drown.
Using the pole she pulled its lifeless body towards the edge of the pool. When it hit the side she grabbed hold of its arms, it was heavy for a little girl but surprisingly light for anyone else. The water had soaked its thin fur and she got her nighty very wet.
She pulled as hard as she could, pulling it onto the side.
She sat there and panted for a second, wiping the water from her arms.
She leant over to see it was ok. It moved! it was still alive!
She shook it and it started to cough. water poured from its mouth and it began to breathe.
She looked at it and slowly it opened its eyes.
"You’re ok, oh thank goodness" she said smiling.
Mewtwo didn’t know what had happened, or who this child was. A fear began to build inside him but he was still too weak... the image of the girl began to blur.
A strong gust of wind blew by.
"Your shivering, you must be cold" exclaimed the girl,
"Let’s get you inside" she smiled.
Before Mewtwo could say anything he passed out, feeling himself slowly being dragged.
Hope you like it
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Comments: 218
JoshuaDunlop In reply to smashmaniac2008 [2009-05-02 17:51:53 +0000 UTC]
yep they are, you mentioned that its just my interpriation
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smashmaniac2008 In reply to ??? [2009-05-01 01:42:09 +0000 UTC]
P.S. why is his scleras black?
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smashmaniac2008 In reply to ??? [2009-05-01 01:40:01 +0000 UTC]
it's been 2 years are you going to make a page 11?
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JoshuaDunlop In reply to smashmaniac2008 [2009-05-01 09:22:30 +0000 UTC]
lol didnt realise it had been that long, yer ill get into it soon
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Achellion--1 In reply to JoshuaDunlop [2009-04-28 23:08:24 +0000 UTC]
This is what Pokemon NEEDS to be, if it was like this id watch it every single day. Keep it up.
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LiquidLifeEternal In reply to ??? [2009-04-14 02:06:06 +0000 UTC]
Wow I just started reading this and I'd really like to see more. You have a real good story going here.
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EvilCopepod [2009-01-26 00:30:14 +0000 UTC]
It's amazing!
*waits for next one*
Gwahhh!
I CAN'T WAIT!
*gets in time machine*
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JoshuaDunlop In reply to EvilCopepod [2009-01-26 09:02:32 +0000 UTC]
lol i need to get on n finish these, they just take a long time, but i will when i have the time
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Boo--Xo In reply to ??? [2008-10-25 15:17:16 +0000 UTC]
This is amazing, I wish you would do more.
You're a very talented person. :I
Well done! ^^
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JoshuaDunlop In reply to Boo--Xo [2008-10-25 20:56:32 +0000 UTC]
thankyou very much im flattered, i will one day, but at the moment im very busy
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JoshuaDunlop In reply to Onimusha-Soukon [2008-11-11 08:43:15 +0000 UTC]
lol read it in the end then more is coming, but not yet, patience
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Boo--Xo In reply to JoshuaDunlop [2008-10-26 22:54:34 +0000 UTC]
You'd better. I'll keep poking you else. o_O
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bakura-sama18 In reply to ??? [2008-09-17 02:33:59 +0000 UTC]
This story is just amazing.
It's breath taking and wow, I'm not really sure what to say D:
I do hope you'll eventually do more of this.
<3
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JoshuaDunlop In reply to bakura-sama18 [2008-09-17 08:20:55 +0000 UTC]
i will eventually its just getting round to it thats the problem ]]
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bakura-sama18 In reply to JoshuaDunlop [2008-09-17 14:35:50 +0000 UTC]
I can understand that.
I too find it hard to get around to one of my stories, just gotta be in the right mood. :]
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JoshuaDunlop In reply to bakura-sama18 [2008-09-18 07:49:23 +0000 UTC]
exactly, and colouring comics take so long, ther like really big complicated pictures! lol
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bakura-sama18 In reply to JoshuaDunlop [2008-09-18 14:06:39 +0000 UTC]
lol
joy joy joy xD
well, the comic is amazing and there's no rush. :]
keep up the good work <3
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Fayzbub In reply to ??? [2008-08-29 12:09:30 +0000 UTC]
Hi again Josh. Please continue this story, I find it intriguing and can't wait to see where it goes next. (As you know already, I'm a big Mewtwo fan, hee hee!)
Alison
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JoshuaDunlop In reply to Fayzbub [2008-08-29 12:40:16 +0000 UTC]
you wrote the mewtwo love story right?
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Fayzbub In reply to JoshuaDunlop [2008-08-30 14:05:11 +0000 UTC]
Yes, that's me! Did you read the rest of it?
BTW, I love the way you draw Mewtwo's eyes in your graphic novel - very expressive.
Alison
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JoshuaDunlop In reply to Fayzbub [2008-08-30 18:26:34 +0000 UTC]
I LOVED your story. Im really not a big reader, it takes a lot to get me gripped and every opportunity i could, i read a chapter more. At first i found the (almost) bestiality was a lil strange but after a while i just stopped thinking of him as an animal and it became an amazing love story. I loved the small bits where you talked about the real pokemon world, putting them into our world and how you described them etc really added to how i think people should see pokemon. I think if we worked together we could come up with some amazing stuff, i mean if you wanted to?
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Fayzbub In reply to JoshuaDunlop [2008-09-01 10:41:46 +0000 UTC]
Hi again Josh! Sorry I've taken so long to get back to you, I've been flat out busy this weekend.
I'm so glad you got around to reading the rest of the story, and thanks for your nice comments about it.
I love your art, and am very flattered about the collaboration idea, but unfortunately I prob'ly won't write another pokemon fic. I work full-time, plus on the side I write professionally. I write fanfics as a hobby, and then only when I've got the time to spare from everything else.8D
Most of my fanfics are shorts, but with this one the Muse grabbed me and wouldn't let go until I'd explored what would happen if Aiko and Mewtwo met as adults.
Once again, I'm pleased you enjoyed it, and I'll be watching your site for more artses; your interpretation of Mewtwo is brilliant!
Bests,
Alison (who is really *not* an obsessed Mewtwo fan, despite all evidence to the contrary ... well, not much anyway ... )
Oh, BTW, my email address is:
venugoban@ozemail.com.au
Just in case you want to contact me direct.
Ciao!
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JoshuaDunlop In reply to Fayzbub [2008-09-01 11:56:58 +0000 UTC]
We dont have to do a pokemon fan fic colab, i love the way you write and if ever you would like an illustrator then i would be happy to work with you. Surprisingly im not the hugeest pokemon fan... dont get me wrong i think their great but thats not all i draw if you get me Ill be sure to contacty you
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el-chinito-mexicano In reply to ??? [2008-07-29 20:36:30 +0000 UTC]
I love this xD
Hey since Giovanni and Mewtwo r in it are u gonna have Ash appear? Or r u gonna tell 2 wait and find out? lol good stuff
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JoshuaDunlop In reply to el-chinito-mexicano [2008-07-30 15:37:37 +0000 UTC]
i can say ask is not in it, sorry, giovanni was the leader in the original pokemon games and comics before the anime came out, so that is why i used him
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el-chinito-mexicano In reply to JoshuaDunlop [2008-07-30 16:20:25 +0000 UTC]
Oh okay
was just wondering xD
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JoshuaDunlop In reply to el-chinito-mexicano [2008-07-30 16:47:10 +0000 UTC]
no wories, ask as many questions as you like
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el-chinito-mexicano In reply to JoshuaDunlop [2008-07-30 16:58:34 +0000 UTC]
lol Oh okay ;D
I'll think of more later x3
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Firekitsune2z In reply to ??? [2008-07-24 03:08:12 +0000 UTC]
I am not trying to rude but are you going to finish this? And i so will there be some romance in it but not with Mewwo and that little girl right? Also you have get artistic skills.
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JoshuaDunlop In reply to Firekitsune2z [2008-07-24 08:56:30 +0000 UTC]
Yer i will finish it, i have a few of them done but i have decided to finish it first, then post them all at the same time
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Mastermond In reply to ??? [2008-07-19 21:32:16 +0000 UTC]
Please, for the love of god, tell me there's more.
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JoshuaDunlop In reply to Mastermond [2008-07-19 21:45:34 +0000 UTC]
lol more coming soon no worried, just need to be bothered
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JoshuaDunlop In reply to Mastermond [2008-07-19 21:43:24 +0000 UTC]
lol yes ther is more coming but i havnt actually gotten around to doing them, i will soon tho
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roleplay4life In reply to ??? [2008-07-11 13:31:22 +0000 UTC]
Oh!!! It would be so fantastic if you continued this... The whole doujin-thing is so amazing. ^^
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Fayzbub [2008-07-11 12:24:44 +0000 UTC]
Oh, very nice story to accompany the wonderfully detailed pictures! Have you got any more of this posted somewhere? I'd love to see what happens next with the story!
As it happens, I've also written a fanfic on Mewtwo which has had a number of very favourable reviews so far. If you're interested, the link is:
[link]
Thank you so much for sharing your artwork, it's lovely!
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