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Published: 2007-07-11 15:38:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 26008; Favourites: 238; Downloads: 235
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They prepared for the assault. Three heavy duty Heliglider’s landed as the doors to the Regis opened.A new type of capturing device had been specially built for the Regis, a normal Pokémon (though could easily hold them) wouldn’t be strong enough to keep them in the ball. So the new device was made called the Poke cube, like the master ball it was an extreme locking device.
"Sir, the co-ordinates are coming through now...its location has been clarified" said the major
"Good major, get them in the PokeCubes and let’s move out!" shouted the general.
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She ran up to the side of the pool grabbing the pole that cleans out the leaves. She dropped to her knees pulling off her slippers in case she had to jump in.
She had never seen anything like this Pokémon... or seen pictures or anything.... she knew to be careful, it might be dangerous... but she couldn’t let it drown.
Using the pole she pulled its lifeless body towards the edge of the pool. When it hit the side she grabbed hold of its arms, it was heavy for a little girl but surprisingly light for anyone else. The water had soaked its thin fur and she got her nighty very wet.
She pulled as hard as she could, pulling it onto the side.
She sat there and panted for a second, wiping the water from her arms.
She leant over to see it was ok. It moved! it was still alive!
She shook it and it started to cough. water poured from its mouth and it began to breathe.
She looked at it and slowly it opened its eyes.
"You’re ok, oh thank goodness" she said smiling.
Mewtwo didn’t know what had happened, or who this child was. A fear began to build inside him but he was still too weak... the image of the girl began to blur.
A strong gust of wind blew by.
"Your shivering, you must be cold" exclaimed the girl,
"Let’s get you inside" she smiled.
Before Mewtwo could say anything he passed out, feeling himself slowly being dragged.
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Comments: 218
JoshuaDunlop In reply to ??? [2008-07-11 13:03:05 +0000 UTC]
I would love to read it and thankyou very much for your lovely comments, i am afraid that it still remain unfinished, but as so many people are asking for it i will continue soon
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Fayzbub In reply to ??? [2008-07-11 12:23:55 +0000 UTC]
Oh, very nice story to accompany the wonderfully detailed pictures! Have you got any more of this posted somewhere? I'd love to see what happens next with the story!
As it happens, I've also written a fanfic on Mewtwo which has had a number of very favourable reviews so far. If you're interested, the link is:
[link]
Thank you so much for sharing your artwork, it's lovely!
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Headsquasher In reply to ??? [2008-07-05 19:29:43 +0000 UTC]
is mewtwo scared of the girl or does he plan to kill her later? im going with the first option...
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JoshuaDunlop In reply to Headsquasher [2008-07-05 20:20:25 +0000 UTC]
lol i think hes just tired and scared of everything
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Water-Fang In reply to ??? [2008-06-24 11:20:28 +0000 UTC]
awww "write more write more" (jumps up and down flapping arms) this story is so great. i feel sory for mewtwo in the lab.
when r u going ta post the next one up?
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JoshuaDunlop In reply to Water-Fang [2008-06-24 19:51:50 +0000 UTC]
OH well thats ask, i havnt posted one for a year an a half but im going to TRY and finish it this summer
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Water-Fang In reply to JoshuaDunlop [2008-06-25 06:12:05 +0000 UTC]
your welcome, yayces.(yay-sees)
i cant wait to see how it ends.
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Shanko5 In reply to JoshuaDunlop [2008-06-15 22:32:03 +0000 UTC]
Me: Do you like anything besides pokemon?
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JoshuaDunlop In reply to Shanko5 [2008-06-16 08:48:38 +0000 UTC]
oh yer love loads of things, fantasy, dinosaurs, ben ten, love making my own stories, marvel, etc etc, just pokemon are in high demand on my site lol
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Shanko5 In reply to JoshuaDunlop [2008-06-16 16:56:55 +0000 UTC]
Me: You are the only person I've talked to who likes Ben 10.
Leo: Who doesn't like fantasy of some form?
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JoshuaDunlop In reply to Shanko5 [2008-06-17 10:11:26 +0000 UTC]
lol, yer, fantasys a given, ben 10 is a great concept, i reckon the storys in the cartoon could be better written tho :S
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Shanko5 In reply to JoshuaDunlop [2008-06-17 17:49:06 +0000 UTC]
Me: True, but it's funny.
Leo: Have you seen Ben 10 Alien Force?
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JoshuaDunlop In reply to Shanko5 [2008-06-17 20:37:32 +0000 UTC]
nope? whats ben 10 alien force?
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Shanko5 In reply to JoshuaDunlop [2008-06-17 22:04:00 +0000 UTC]
Me: It's like the second season of Ben 10. Ben is 15 now, and he teams up with Gwen and Kevin to find Grandpa Max. Ben also has ten new aliens.
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JoshuaDunlop In reply to Shanko5 [2008-06-18 08:22:23 +0000 UTC]
just seen it, looks pretty cool
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Shanko5 In reply to JoshuaDunlop [2008-06-18 18:45:45 +0000 UTC]
Me: That's coolo, though I hope Ben gets his old aliens back.
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JoshuaDunlop In reply to Shanko5 [2008-06-19 12:26:07 +0000 UTC]
yer defo, wonder why the others went?
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Shanko5 In reply to JoshuaDunlop [2008-06-19 20:17:04 +0000 UTC]
Me: What?
Leo: What does that mean?
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Shanko5 In reply to JoshuaDunlop [2008-06-19 20:21:14 +0000 UTC]
That last comment you sent.
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JoshuaDunlop In reply to Shanko5 [2008-06-19 20:25:50 +0000 UTC]
oh, i meant if ben has 10 new aliens, where have the other aliens gone?
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Shanko5 In reply to JoshuaDunlop [2008-06-19 20:28:41 +0000 UTC]
Me: I wish I knew, however, in one of the new spisodes, they meet a kid who has alien blood in him, and can turn into a Heatblast. So the aliens still, but not in the omnitrix.
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Shanko5 In reply to JoshuaDunlop [2008-06-19 20:46:21 +0000 UTC]
Me: Yeah, I'm going to try to find a site that shows Ben 10 and Ben 10 Alien Force episodes.
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JoshuaDunlop In reply to Shanko5 [2008-06-20 08:39:28 +0000 UTC]
im good, but can i ask (so not to fill up the comments on this pic) can you send me a note if you wanna chat?
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JoshuaDunlop In reply to Shanko5 [2008-06-18 08:16:44 +0000 UTC]
lol oh ill check for it on the net
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DarkKitsunegirl In reply to ??? [2008-04-21 00:12:16 +0000 UTC]
Ooooh, I can't wait to see more!
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