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Published: 2008-08-21 21:38:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 1411; Favourites: 33; Downloads: 0
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This poor fox's plan has backfired...found a nice photograph background that compliments the action.
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Not bad but here's a few things I noticed...
You have a habit of wanting to draw the "multiple" image, in this case his legs. I understand that you're trying to show how quick he's moving but it just doesn't work for a still image. It just looks like he has a third leg. Now in animation of course you don't see this image because it is only exposed for one frame so you feel the quickness and not see it. The speed lines you used are fine.
Also the fox has a pretty bland look on his face. What's the story you're trying to tell? If he's about to fall into a pit I would think he would react much differently. It doesn't have to be a wild take but in this case anything would do. He's just looking blankly in front of him. Always remember to push attitudes and emotions in animation. It's clear you like cartoony animation so don't be afraid to really push your ideas. Don't limit yourself. Tell you what, check out my page in the next few days and I'll post some helpful pics.
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Thanks for the crit! Never really received that much feedback before on a drawing, it helps alot.
I'll be checking your page then!
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Can't beat a good ol' cartoon situation. The photo really adds a nice touch
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Thanks. It was hard to find a low-to-the-ground shot of a forest.
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