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jsivaizduoti β€” Life on Display
Published: 2011-02-15 12:17:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 327; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 11
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Description uniqueness is sparse in years, models
of the modern generation have
activated the assembly line

where hollow molds, filled with defects, rejects
are the mirror images of a masterpiece

we're dolls on display, clichΓ©s
in glass cases

waiting to be bought, sought
out for affection, but brought to your attention
is the peculiar attraction to the art of alteration

surgically corrected masquerades become maidens
of invention and models of impression, passions
become exceptionally apathetic, it's pathetic
how aesthetics come with a factory seal
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Comments: 7

Lovely-Stitches [2011-02-15 21:23:38 +0000 UTC]

Its a really interesting view on the world and how fake it has become in the years. Brilliant.

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jsivaizduoti In reply to Lovely-Stitches [2011-02-15 21:29:33 +0000 UTC]

I'm really appreciate it.

I don't consider myself a poet, but it's relieving to see my message/views properly conveyed.

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Lovely-Stitches In reply to jsivaizduoti [2011-02-15 21:35:25 +0000 UTC]

Well weather you consider yourself a poet or not you do certainly have a way with words, and can put them in a way that flows nicely when read.

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sixteenthseason [2011-02-15 19:48:55 +0000 UTC]

Great piece!

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jsivaizduoti In reply to sixteenthseason [2011-02-15 21:30:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! It really means a lot.

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murdokdracul [2011-02-15 15:09:25 +0000 UTC]

verrrrrrrrrrrry good

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jsivaizduoti In reply to murdokdracul [2011-02-15 21:31:50 +0000 UTC]

I'm very pleased you think so, especially since I think the outcome is moderately mediocre.

Thanks.

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