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JubilationTree — Reverse Fate OC Sketch
Published: 2010-01-07 02:24:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 288; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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This is the first time I've ever drawn something with a pencil instead of relying on Paint. XD Long ago, that was my thing, but I decided to give it a shot. And the thing is, I rarely draw. RARELY. So I think I got serious last night.
I made some more corrections this morning, but I still want to fix the unfixables. I want to fix that right eye for the umpteenth time, correct the clavicle position, change her body structure, do something about that hair, make that harpoon look like a convincing harpoon, and fix those goddamn fingers of hers! x_o
And no, I'm not gonna clean and color that, as much as I want to, but I don't have the talent. ...Chriiiiiis? Emilyyyy?
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I would color that if I knew how with photoshop o=
If it was in colors, I would try it
One comment: Make the harpoon a bit more sharp at the tip
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The harpoon is seen from the topside. It's sharp if you could see the whole head.
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I like how creative you can get with the clothes design which is a good thing, and you got some of the curves right as well, but the boobs are a little too big? maybe flat even? and the face shape is a little distorted-ish. like, one side of the face is good but the other side is a bit too big? like she has a bump or something. idk what to call it. where you placed the thumb is very well put, but the other fingers are a wee bit too small so you can't really tell if she's holding it or not.
And the shoulders, as well at the elbow. XD its a bit too high. it makes her seem stiff that way. She's a girl so she doesn't need to have too broad shoulders.
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Thanks!
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you asked the wrong person to color stuff for you. ;A;
I AM HORRIBLE AT COLORING
I CHOOSE THE STUPIDEST COLORS EVERRR
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Lol! It's not like you're going to color her skin yellow
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XD the skin coloring is fine, since I got palettes for that.
MAKE ME COLOR THE HAIR, CLOTHES AND ETC, AND YOU GET A COLOR EXPLOSION
color explosions from me are not good.
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Wow, a rainbow of fantasies. I just pictured that
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