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Published: 2018-01-23 16:54:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 1723; Favourites: 40; Downloads: 4
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Page 22 is here just 5 days after the release of the last page, phew I am on FIRE with these pages. I really want yo keep this rate up and make more as frequent as I can. I hope you guys like it. Tell me what you think.'............',
'you are not very talkative are you?'. What are you remembering about, Toriel?
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Well, just read through the entire comic in one day.
I'm enjoying it, and I'm intrigued about where it will go. I like your art style a lot. It's very pleasing to the eye-- you seem to be working without preliminary sketches since it's all in pencil and there aren't any discernible eraser marks, and that kind of drawing is always extremely impressive to me. The pages are detailed, and always seem to have some kind of background, but they're not 'busy' or overcrammed with things. It's easy to tell what you're meant to focus on, and still feels simple in a pleasant way.
I like how this version of the Underground is more futuristic and advanced, but not so much that it's the 'gimmick' of the AU. In some AUs, the only major change is that everything is super cyberpunk or high-tech, and it's the main thing that affects the designs of the characters. However here, while it does affect some things(Frisk's outfit, the existence of a train), it's not the only thing about this story that can draw a reader in. There's how Flowey's personality is more sympathetic and kind rather than being a sociopath, how he seems haunted by Chara in a way, and how he seems to actually want to return to his old life instead of treating the Underground like his toybox. There's the mystery of why the Save Point is black, why it injured Frisk when they touched it. There's how we seem to be going to learn a lot more about the former fallen children, particular the Soul of 'Justice', who in this comic seems to have lacked their trait.
Also, I haven't looked at many of your other drawings and sketches of this AU yet, but I did glimpse Gaster's design. And I freaking love it.
All in all, consider one more follower gained. I don't care if it takes months for you to update sometimes, when you do update it'll be a pleasant surprise, and when you don't I have my own story to tell to keep me busy.
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Omg, this common has made my day. Thank you so much for such a brilliant comment <3
First of all, yea I try to draw the main story comic as clean as possible. Doing so, it takes me awhile to finish
You really indulge yourself into my AU and that really thrills me. And Yea I'll try my best to update the series, lol. I've been busy with a lot of things XD
If you want to read the other side comics, you can go here: lukeandziky.deviantart.com/gal…
You can start reading from the very bottom, tho these side comics are as clean as the main comic. They're most to tell a story XD
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Yeah, I can definitely imagine.
Yeeeeeees, enjoyed the side comics a lot, where Fuku and Mako met was really cute, and I really enjoyed what you have of Anomaly!
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××71 Chara arrived fell down frisk 20th century get it this is true by the way I'm sure toriel has it somewhere but chara says if anyone asks you didn't see anything !?😊
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Lol, what are you talking about XD?
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Omg, thank you OwO This means a lot to me. Yes, I will around next week. I've been busy lately, lol
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... nextweek? there isnt a link atleast
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Uhhh, I've been really busy with college work nowadays QwQ Idk when I'll upload the next page
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The justice soul...
...is it still justice?
I remembered BXtale now. Bex was originally going to be a corrupt justice soul.
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Who knows, probably Injustice OwO
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vengence perhaps
i like the idea of Justice/Vengence being the Yin/Yang type dualism
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Ooooo, I like the idea of vengeance. But is vengeance really the opposite of justice?
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well not necessarily "opposite" more just... twisted/corrupted sense of the same concept, both for making whats wrong right.
Justice is more lawful, like court cases/criminal trials, helping others who have been wronged even though it may have NOTHING to do with you, being good and nice etc
Vengeance is more selfish, dirty, righting wrongs in your OWN world not necessarily caring about the big picture, where the person getting vengence actually MAY have deserved their original comeupance nonetheless BUT they STILL want pay back (YOU wronged ME, *I* hurt YOU)
*spoilers i guess*
is this far enough idk
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just making sure SPOILERS UNDER THIS
think like batman and joker (though more specifically 'the killing joke" joker)
Batman/ commissionor,,, Gordan i think (?) pretty obvious in its own sense
Joker is more like
" oh you were simply doing your job putting me away? well.... thats a nice kid you got there Gordan.... shame if something were to happen to her.... 
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Well, I guess i understand what you're trying to say and its a good idea. Tho I have no idea about all that batman and joker stuff XD (don't try to explain about it tho)
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This frisk is why is it sooo cute?CUTE and CUDDLY BOys😎 cute and cuddly😑😊
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lol, i got the reference XD
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How old are they-DON'T TOUCH DA FIRE!!!
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Oh, okay, so, that suit she's wearing, when she grows, does it stretch to accommodate the gradual increase in size?
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We'll find out and see. I can't tell you everything ^w^
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OOooooh, Is frisk gonna grow up?
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(yes, slowly, as the story progresses)
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I'm guessing the yellow soul was the last one that came through.
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Yes, and boy that human did some chaos during that time.
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Yea she is, but Toriel doesn't look so good tho.
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yeah, seems like she's worring about something
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