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*Read left to right*Page 7 of 7
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This wraps up the story. I hope you guys enjoyed it, although i must say so myself that there is plenty of room for improvements. Some pages might be a tad bit confusing but i hope by not much. Thank you for all the comments and feedbacks.
And so everyone, live your life to the fullest and make careful decisions on the crossroads you meet in life before you discover you screwed up later.
Thank you so much for reading and i hope you enjoyed it.
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Comments: 101
Shattered-Nightmares [2012-12-13 02:05:41 +0000 UTC]
She died by just a few slits on her wrist?
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Litriu In reply to Shattered-Nightmares [2013-10-24 00:45:47 +0000 UTC]
... Well, if she did nothing she could bleed out like that reasonably easily.
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Shattered-Nightmares In reply to Litriu [2014-01-25 02:04:21 +0000 UTC]
heh forgot about this comment...
Yeah after i posted it i kinda started thinking of all the possibilities... xD
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Natsumi1122 [2012-06-25 20:22:00 +0000 UTC]
EEEE ;LAFKSDF (;w; ) The girl very cute LOL I like heterochromia eyes, heterochromiaaa BD
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Cosmic-Doop [2012-04-29 18:09:37 +0000 UTC]
whoa...extremely powerful story, *rubs arms* god, it gives me chills just reading this xD i had to read it twice cause it was a tad bit confusing, but the second time i understand what the rooms in the hall she was running through meant, you did WONDERFUL job on this~
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bouncyball67858 [2011-05-20 03:19:54 +0000 UTC]
wait so, she wanted to relive her life, did, but the same thing happened so she killed herself?? (am i right??) this was good :3
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tobago528 [2011-02-02 00:56:53 +0000 UTC]
wtF! >.> that's no fair! Otherwise, I liked the short manga
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ynne-black [2011-02-01 16:57:16 +0000 UTC]
it was cool... i mean, amazing colors and shading, interesting idea even if "so short", and just... cool! you're good. good luck in future!
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Onivale [2011-01-31 10:52:50 +0000 UTC]
I favorited all of these pages because they were all beautifully illustrated and told a very solemn but good story. You did an excellent job.
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lighttra [2011-01-31 01:24:09 +0000 UTC]
Damn... I`ll have you know death is a chick... but it`s whatever
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JohnLeaf [2010-12-27 21:03:33 +0000 UTC]
Wow, I wasn't expecting that... Good story; great art; surprising, heart-tearing ending. Amazing.
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isaloveanime [2010-12-24 13:13:43 +0000 UTC]
o.o
definatly a page turner, and OMG youre like m night shyamalan making twists!
except you don't get worse tru time... i hope so.
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Somvold [2010-12-23 02:04:33 +0000 UTC]
I certainly enjoyed it and I think you have done quite a job already.
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Mendicant-B1as [2010-12-22 17:55:47 +0000 UTC]
not to be depressing but to do it correctly its down the road not across the track
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Alter33 [2010-12-22 03:45:02 +0000 UTC]
I'm not gonna spoil anything with an analysis or anything like that. All I've got to say is this was an amazing short story with a powerful end. Fantastic work.
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DiardanRose [2010-12-21 07:00:59 +0000 UTC]
Extremely, extremely morbid... In a hopeful way.
It's gorgeous, and it made the reader/view really want to know what happened next, so good job... I still feel sad for her even if she's in a better place.
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Dasaru [2010-12-21 02:33:47 +0000 UTC]
lol that was tight! I wanna read moreeeee. This was really bad ass
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TaiyouKitsune [2010-12-20 20:06:44 +0000 UTC]
Wow, what a sad story. The art was absolutely gorgeous, and the comic panel techniques were very well done.
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ChampionNeko [2010-12-20 19:21:52 +0000 UTC]
So expected >.<
Because of the title.
Damn this story was nice, well drawn, but I really hate when a cute girl die.
It always break my heart
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Yokaimoon666 [2010-12-20 16:09:20 +0000 UTC]
....this made me sad... but it was a great little story ^_^
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Emerald-Glaceon [2010-12-20 14:15:48 +0000 UTC]
k this and last page really confused me but i still love it very nice job
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Pikiru [2010-12-20 08:26:04 +0000 UTC]
Ahhhh epic ;__; <333 So saddd I wish things could've been better for her T//A//T
But I loved it! Your art is so beautiful~ I really enjoyed it ;v;bbbb
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KetchupXD [2010-12-20 05:12:35 +0000 UTC]
i'm now officially a fan of your greatness. *bows*
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CoyoteTony [2010-12-20 05:03:14 +0000 UTC]
I new it was going to turn for the worst. Though it seemed death tried to offer her some peace.
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Zantetsuken15 [2010-12-20 04:58:15 +0000 UTC]
its was a good short story and hey its always room for improvement. I enjoy it very well but it was sad to she her die ( may her soul rest in peace) I like how you set up the story and everything but the message was very clear when I finish it up.
I will not comment on your style since the feel is everything but you know I just notice something from reading the whole story? what is the guy in the mask named? and the girl who'd died?
I really don't know about the sound effect's when your making the story I think it could of been more emotion when your making the sounds, its feels kinda dull when your input them... I not trying to say that your not doing it I would like to have more attention to your story, that way its looks a lot more better and has a better feel.
but still I like how'd everything plays out and well you deserve your credit. if your make a new comic please let me know. I want to see your work.
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cheridum In reply to Zantetsuken15 [2010-12-23 11:29:50 +0000 UTC]
your talking about the guy with the skull mask right? if so thats not a mask hes death
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Zantetsuken15 In reply to cheridum [2010-12-24 06:55:49 +0000 UTC]
actually I'm talking about the name of the guy in the mask.
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cheridum In reply to Zantetsuken15 [2010-12-24 07:54:56 +0000 UTC]
with the cigar? or mendicant b1as?
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Zantetsuken15 In reply to cheridum [2010-12-27 05:56:02 +0000 UTC]
okay they would of point that out.
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