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Published: 2010-12-19 16:33:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 10158; Favourites: 255; Downloads: 157
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*Read left to right*Page 7 of 7
Page 6 >> [link]
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This wraps up the story. I hope you guys enjoyed it, although i must say so myself that there is plenty of room for improvements. Some pages might be a tad bit confusing but i hope by not much. Thank you for all the comments and feedbacks.
And so everyone, live your life to the fullest and make careful decisions on the crossroads you meet in life before you discover you screwed up later.
Thank you so much for reading and i hope you enjoyed it.
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Comments: 101
what he says basicly explains who he is and he dissapears
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okay well at least it make's sense now. there wasn't a real screech description
about death.
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A wonderful piece of art and a beautiful message on it, awesome job!
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Wow... That's like a super depressing version of A Christmas Carol... The message is powerful, and for the most part it was executed well.
Critique: For example, when Past Self revealed herself, Present Self's expression seemed a little...staged, instead of conveying genuine shock. Also, in pg6, when she saw her Mumsy, it felt a little goofy, with her expressions. It's a personal preference of mine that in dramatic scenes like that, the cartoony expressions should be abandoned unless the rest of the universe you crafted is just as cartoony and over-the-top in which case such expressions add to the drama. Again, it's just personal preference. If that's your style, power to you!
Overall, despite my criticisms, I think it was a very well done piece, and in a weird coincidence coincides with my mood these past few weeks. In a weirder coincidence, as I write this, I'm listening to Les Mis.'s "I Dreamed A Dream."
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Crud, I posted and I still had something to say.
*ahem* Your Death is a pretty cool dude.
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This was quite the interesting series. Was a most enjoyable one too.
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im sorta confused : P So shes dead and her spirit is in her own world of what she wished her life would be like? or something like that
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damn death.... this is just like what he looks like.
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thats it?....it makes no snece if u stop now....u only wasted ur time...
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Confused?
She went through with the suicide thing. Everything she witnessed from her "youger self" showing up and on was all in her head, at the point of which she was technically dead/dying. Now she's permanently stuck in the artificial life she could've had (redo life) thanks to Pimp Daddy Death there. It's all in her head.
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I have to say, I'm impressed how you managed to fit the story in 7 pages. When reading pages 5/6 I wasn't too sure if the story could have a nice closure to it in just page 7, but you succeeded. 
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I have to agree with you on that! because when it got to near the end, it actually was a point of climax to see what really happen to her.
its was sad to lose her even though that was the life she decides to do, yet it was a peaceful death may her spirit rest forever more in solitude.
when the reaper came around Its was a fitting end even though the illusion that she was in was a good way that "hey I died peacefully? suck it up!" it could of been worst then just cutting her arm for blood loss but in this case its a lot better than her head being blown off or that her body was burn to a crisp.
but I can see that her death can influence others.
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that is the most awesome version of the grim reaper Ever
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he is *the* grim reaper, by definition hes a bad ass.
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But the suit and Ciggar adds bonus bad ass points 8D Hurray
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nothing like a little something to further the bad assery of something XD
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AMG I WAS RIGHT.
I was thinking that she killed herself , and that what she was thinking wasn't real - as in imagining she didn't die, but she did, and she's reliving her life inside an illusion as she wanted it to be in real life.
WAH THE ART WAS BEAUTIFUL. <33
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Oh oh death hahaha. Be praised, for that's the only ending for everything is this doomed world. That, and the thirsting laughter of the dark ones.
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Ah, somehow this last page just makes sense out of the whole story...Lovely art-style, simple yet profound story, 7 pages that make you question your own life-choices---great job and thanks for sharing (:
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Fantastic Ending!
Your style is very beautiful and this story is interesting
Well done
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Very amazing. Interesting story. To be honest I did expect an ending along these lines, yet it is still a surprise. Very bittersweet. I did not find it confusing at all. Overall excellent work. ^^
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It's a wonderful last page, but also a little creepy xD But I think the whole story was really great
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Yayz, i think my guess about the rooms meaning in the hallway was rigth >w< Fantastic work, loved it
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Oh wow. O.O Suprise ending!
I loved the story and art! I found it not that confusing.
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This last page wrapped up everything. Quite the bittersweet ending! :<
Nicely done!
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I loved the story. <3 And especially the art, the colours, the way you used the frames and text. Now I think about it, overall... I liked everything!
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Holy i did NOT see this ending coming....
awesome nonetheless
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