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Published: 2015-11-03 00:57:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 1130; Favourites: 32; Downloads: 0
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Sooo I'm pretty sure this character breaks some rules for Sparkwings but I'm happy with her.As you can see she mostly resembles a Long wing, appearing black in dim light when in actuality she is a deep red. She also has both files and spines giving her an extremely unique profile.
As far as her abilities go, she is extraordinarily large for a female easily as large as most males wich she uses to her advantage. Although she can fly she prefurs not to, with her large size and heavy fire retardant scals she is not a very graceful flyer. Ground baced claw to claw combat is more her style. She also has the ability to breath fire.
Mehh.. I might change/add some things later
Anyhow, if you like dragon comics go read Breakthrough
By: FireDragon97
Sparkwings also belong to FireDragon97
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Comments: 21
Xannador [2015-11-04 15:53:30 +0000 UTC]
Oh yes I love that comic as well! Nice character you made!
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Kal0wen In reply to Xannador [2015-11-09 16:32:44 +0000 UTC]
Thank you.
How's life by the way? We haven't talked in awhile.
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Xannador In reply to Kal0wen [2015-11-11 22:07:12 +0000 UTC]
not a problem.
Funny, I actually came across your profile and wanted to chat sometime ago, but I think that was right before my math exam so my brain was all over the place xD
But anyway, I'm good, ignoring that I'm having exams and that I'm failing them, I'm actually happy. I've gone to college and meeting tons of new people, I actually have motivation to study, because the content isn't fucking usueless. -Not that I do it now or anything. xD, But it's so different and better than highschool was. Plus I'm finally away from home. Not that I hate my family but they were getting on my nerves xD So all in all I have no rights to complain
How about you?
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Kal0wen In reply to Xannador [2015-11-12 20:06:02 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad to hear that your making new friends and having fun at school, not so glad you're not doing well in school. I know this may sound silly but.... quit trying so hard... I have a feeling we're a lot alike in this aspect. The harder you try the worse things turn out. I understand there are deadlines when it comes to school, but stressing out them only makes life miserable.
Because of this I've developed a veary lax personality, I don't let most things bother me.
But as far as my life, not much to note really. I moved in with my boyfriend on his farm. What I'd like to do is get my sewing machine going, and see if I can come up with a pattern for dragon plushies. Because everyone has a pony plush, so why not a dragon.
Drosera plush for the win! Oh or maybe Sirenous.... or BOTH!
I don't know maybe I'm getting ahead of myself. Hehe
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Xannador In reply to Kal0wen [2015-11-23 08:43:25 +0000 UTC]
I always reply so late, I'm so sorry.
And if you don't try hard in this school, you fail. But it's alright, the thing is that I wasn't trying that hard...I was slacking off mostly. I feel like this college is a good opportunity to test myself. And by trying harder I will improve more, right? So it's not easy, but that's ok.
cool that you could move in with your bf though. And a farm! I'd love to love there. With green and animals all around you. *sigh*
i grew up in the city, but I prefer such life way more. And you can make plushies? Dude you should totally show me those if you make them!
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Kal0wen In reply to Xannador [2015-11-23 12:23:00 +0000 UTC]
Ahh no worries. I figured you'd get to it when you had time.
And yes I do some sewing here and there, and although I've never even attempted somthing as complex as a dragon I figured it would be worth a shot. It will be my challenge. I also don't have an imbrodry machine so that wil make things even more of a challenge.
I have a feeling that if I can master it, I'll finally be able to make some money doing something I like.
I wish you the best of luck in school, I couldn't do it. Hell, I bearly made it out of high school, not because I couldn't pass the tests mind you. I always did great on those, I just always had a hard time focusing long enough to do my homework. Why does homework equate to more than tests? Isn't homework supposed to prepare you for the tests? If I can pass the tests then haven't they done their job of teaching? I don't get it.
Oh, and if by some crazy chance you ever find yourself lost in Nebraska. Look me up, you can come out and pet the cows. Lol
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Xannador In reply to Kal0wen [2015-12-15 17:43:15 +0000 UTC]
well there's a first time for everything. Besides you'll get better at it every time you make one It'd be cool to make money out of it too.
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Kal0wen In reply to Xannador [2015-12-15 18:10:10 +0000 UTC]
Yea it would. I'm actually going to dig my sewing machine out of storage today.
I'ma start with ponies, cuz' there easy and there's already a market for them.
*so don't be surprised if you see alot of pony crap from me for awhile.
I LIKE PONIES! OKAY! Don't judge me...
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Xannador In reply to Kal0wen [2015-12-15 18:15:15 +0000 UTC]
"there's already a market for them" XD
And I'm not judging, it's a nice show XD I haven't watched it yet though.
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Kal0wen In reply to Xannador [2015-12-15 18:23:35 +0000 UTC]
I think I missed somthing. I don't know if your being sarcastic or not.
Have you seen the kind of money people pay to have their characters done?
Maybe not if your not into ponies...
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Xannador In reply to Kal0wen [2015-12-15 18:26:11 +0000 UTC]
no, I wasn't being sarcastic. It's true! And it's funny because it's true
And no, I have not seen it but I sure can imagine it.
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LumeraLightstar [2015-11-03 22:18:39 +0000 UTC]
She looks super cool!! I have been debating on whether or not I should make my own Breakthrough oc! If I do make one it would be the Sparkwing because they are the representation of rebelling against evil rules, also they are the coolest!!
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Kal0wen In reply to LumeraLightstar [2015-11-04 01:53:13 +0000 UTC]
Thank you.
If you'd like to make one go for it! I highly recommend reading FireDragon97 's Guide: Designing a Sparkwing , and related pages on her Wikia pages. There super handy for making sure you make a character that follows the rules of Breakthrough.
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LumeraLightstar In reply to Kal0wen [2015-11-07 10:33:08 +0000 UTC]
I looked at the Wiki!! This is really cool!! I love all the detail about all of the species!!
Would you Sparkwing happen to be a Second Generation per chance?
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Kal0wen In reply to LumeraLightstar [2015-11-09 16:34:46 +0000 UTC]
She'd be 4th gen actually.
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LumeraLightstar In reply to Kal0wen [2015-11-09 23:02:30 +0000 UTC]
That is so cool!! X3 She looks amazing!!
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Rackiera [2015-11-03 14:46:58 +0000 UTC]
Always makes me happy to see people making fan characters!
Sooo I'm pretty sure this character breaks some rules for Sparkwings but I'm happy with her.
Not really, actually. She's fine if she's not first generation - looking at your description I'm assuming you read the wiki on it, but Sparkwings a few generations down with Longwing parents are darker and more Longwing-like. There's only one thing 'wrong' with her design overall, and that's that the dragons don't have markings on their frills. I need to update it/upload it somewhere, but you can see an old marking map here that still applies: firedragon97.deviantart.com/ar… (Top right) You did everything else right, though
I really like how her frills look mixed with her spikes - the little extra frill on the tail just looks really aesthetically pleasing to me, I've no clue why.
Thanks for taking an interest though and making such a pretty girl!
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Kal0wen In reply to Rackiera [2015-11-03 18:55:31 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad you like her!
And ya I kinda figured the eyespots were a "no" but I thought they are pretty. Hehe. I guess they could be "war paint". I was also unsure about having frills and spines, it didn't say I couldn't but I hadn't seen any examples with it either.
As far as her blood line gos, I did read the wiki first and never intended here to be a first gen. More like this.
Longwing
-----------Longwing (P)
Longwing
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Sparkwing (G2)
Longwing
-----------Sparkwing (G1)
Sparkclaw
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Altamara (G4) (yup I just gave her a name)
Longwing
-----------Longwing (P)
Longwing
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>Sparkwing (G3)
Sparkwing
-----------Sparkwing (G2)
Longwing
As you can see her blood line would be mostly Longwing dominant. Sorry for the whole blood line back story there, blood lines, and genitics were always my favorite in my biolagy class. Sometimes I go a little overboard.
That said she would most definitely have been born into the Red Claws, and been trained for battle. She's a tank! Nuf said. Lol
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Rackiera In reply to Kal0wen [2015-11-06 00:19:05 +0000 UTC]
She could always be some sort of oddity or mutation, too - not everyone follows the rules perfectly (though Lira is and always will be one-of-a-kind). Just mention it as being a trait unique to her or something that messed up with her genetics. I don't mind stuff that "breaks" rules as long as it's mentioned that it's abnormal and it's nothing huge (aka a perfect Longwing copy at gen 1)
As for her bloodline, it's awesome that you put that much thought into it I'm a bit of a nut with making societies, species, races, etc all biologically sound as I can, so I can understand the interest in genetics and such... and going overboard.
Just note that gen 4 is a bit down the line - I imagine Draekor and Nezrik to be gen six or so and they're the furthest it's gone. There's no issues with that, of course, just something to note.
Anyway she has my "seal of approval", haha Have fun
Oh! With spikes/frills, I did mention it as a "swap" gene but I'm probably going to change that around so that having both is rarer, but possible
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