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Description My 3rd attempt at practicing drawing faces, as it's not my usual thing. I was a bit too ambitious!

Viggo Mortensen as Aragorn from a really popular reference image – link below

For 'Middle Earth' competition.

Well I thought I'd have another go at portrait art to try and work on technique again as I have learned a lot since my 2nd attempt over a month ago! I took some measurements for the key bits to try and make sure it actually looks a bit like Viggo. I've tried to blend my shading a bit better and make sure my tone and contrast are improved from my last portrait. All my 'Work in Progress' pics are in my Scrapbook if anyone wants to see how I built up the drawing! [link]

Major thanks to the Tutorials, hints and tips from the DA community, especially Meks , Rick (make those blacks..BLACK) and Li .

A4 Bristol Paper, 2H – 8B, Eraser, Blending things, Time (lots!) and frustration!

As usual folks, I'm really trying to improve and I think I have over the last 9 weeks, since I started; however there is still so much to learn!

Please comment and criticise, as it's the best way I can improve!

So far for me...this is my masterpiece!!

Kal



Reference Comparison:

*Re-uploaded image, just spent 10 mins on a couple of minor changes to hair bottom left and right as it looked horrible. It's a present for my dad, so I had to tweak...now being sprayed *
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Comments: 374

Kalgoras In reply to ??? [2011-05-30 10:21:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot!

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duende01 In reply to ??? [2011-05-29 22:04:55 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely amazing.

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Kalgoras In reply to duende01 [2011-05-30 10:20:59 +0000 UTC]

Cheers

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duende01 In reply to Kalgoras [2011-05-30 13:01:54 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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acjub In reply to ??? [2011-05-29 18:38:54 +0000 UTC]

Lovely work!

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Kalgoras In reply to acjub [2011-05-30 10:20:51 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou

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AngeloDeCapuaart In reply to ??? [2011-05-28 00:34:45 +0000 UTC]

your very good

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Kalgoras In reply to AngeloDeCapuaart [2011-05-30 10:20:42 +0000 UTC]

Aww thanks!

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PakPolaris In reply to ??? [2011-05-27 21:51:59 +0000 UTC]

perfection work, 11/10

if you visit my gallery, you'll notice I've been trying to achieve this level of detail and perfection, but I am far from it.

Beautifully done.

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Kalgoras In reply to PakPolaris [2011-05-30 10:20:31 +0000 UTC]

You're doing great bud, I love the Star Wars stuff in your gallery! It's just practice and drawing what you see Thanks for the comment

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NordicLynx In reply to ??? [2011-05-27 21:05:27 +0000 UTC]

The eyes look amazing. They are so piercing

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Kalgoras In reply to NordicLynx [2011-05-30 10:18:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, yeh I love drawing eyes! Skin isn't too bad, but hair is not my favourite Practicing that on my next piece Thanks for the comment!

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startraveller776 In reply to ??? [2011-05-27 20:05:52 +0000 UTC]

HOLY @#$%!!!! *passes out*

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Kalgoras In reply to startraveller776 [2011-05-30 10:17:28 +0000 UTC]

Glad you liked it!

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SkekLa In reply to ??? [2011-05-26 21:09:20 +0000 UTC]

WHOA!!! "third attempt"????
I don't know if I can believe that! Your job is amazing!!!
Keep em' coming!!!

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Kalgoras In reply to SkekLa [2011-05-27 08:20:09 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Well third attempt at portraits...I've been drawing other bits in between which has helped me along Drawing is drawing

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SkekLa In reply to Kalgoras [2011-06-16 20:18:13 +0000 UTC]

AND YOU DO IT VERY WELL!!!

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Kalgoras In reply to SkekLa [2011-06-16 20:22:35 +0000 UTC]

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KW-Scott In reply to ??? [2011-05-25 16:43:23 +0000 UTC]

Wow!!! Great stuff here my friend!!! Very well done!!! My graphite work was never this good... Kudos!

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Kalgoras In reply to KW-Scott [2011-05-25 16:45:12 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Yeh this took me freaking ages Scaling back a bit now to try and improve my technique...especially on hair

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KW-Scott In reply to Kalgoras [2011-05-25 16:51:30 +0000 UTC]

Yeah the hair looks almost like ribbons I thought it was kinda cool though For me hair is easy in colored pencils just pick at least three colors and draw every strand LOL Keep your pencils sharp!

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Kalgoras In reply to KW-Scott [2011-05-25 17:10:58 +0000 UTC]

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TheJediClone In reply to ??? [2011-05-24 20:50:29 +0000 UTC]

Woa! problably the best artwork I ever seen from your gallery!!!!

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Kalgoras In reply to TheJediClone [2011-05-24 23:29:02 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou! Yeh it took me the longest by far!...but it was worth it

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cassandra-1994 In reply to ??? [2011-05-24 19:47:09 +0000 UTC]

omg that looks so real
i love it (L)!!

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Kalgoras In reply to cassandra-1994 [2011-05-24 23:28:45 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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knodim In reply to ??? [2011-05-24 15:01:01 +0000 UTC]

Like it a lot

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Kalgoras In reply to knodim [2011-05-24 17:16:42 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou!

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SXRXH-x3-XSHLEY In reply to ??? [2011-05-24 13:37:08 +0000 UTC]

oh my god. that is amazing. you should be very proud

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Kalgoras In reply to SXRXH-x3-XSHLEY [2011-05-24 17:16:35 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Yeh I'm pleased with it for the amount of work I put in

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LottaCharlene In reply to ??? [2011-05-23 19:26:43 +0000 UTC]

this is really amazing! the eyes and lips look very real and for me, they are the hardest parts every time (besides the hair, because ... why is there so much of it?!) But you did a great job!

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Kalgoras In reply to LottaCharlene [2011-05-23 22:07:45 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the comments! I actually really like drawing eyes, so don't find them too bad Lips are so-so and hair is a nightmare hehe! Thanks for the feedback though, much appreciated! I did put a lot of work into this one, but it's paid off

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JamesYoungArt In reply to ??? [2011-05-23 14:41:00 +0000 UTC]

tip - if you have a light box or if you're scanning your picture, every so often flip it over (or digital horizontal flip). Our eyes play tricks on us due to the direction we read. a picture that looks great left-right can suddenly have a glaring mistake right-left. it's a great way to improve on any future pieces.

no glaring mistakes here - far from it! - but try it out, and look again...

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Kalgoras In reply to JamesYoungArt [2011-05-23 14:44:29 +0000 UTC]

I've just been reading hair tutorials among other things and I just read that yesterday on a tutorial heh! To quote Darth Vader...'It is...too late for me...my son' for this picture! It's a great tip though, and I'll use it on the next one. This has some errors, I think the eyes are different sizes (the Iris) and the hair is horrible, but I'll try something else next picture

Thanks for the feedback and comment, always appreciated!

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Magic-is-in-you In reply to ??? [2011-05-23 14:38:36 +0000 UTC]

Amazing

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Kalgoras In reply to Magic-is-in-you [2011-05-23 14:39:39 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the kind comments

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MarieJaneWorks [2011-05-23 14:02:58 +0000 UTC]

woah i was about to come here and yell at you for making a picture black and white and calling it a sketch XD but full viewing makes me see it now that it is pencil indeed. Jesus its fantasticc.. i apoligize but i cnat think of a critique.. u even left a greate outline around the edges of the paper.. the shine on the htiny hes holding is even there.. great job. thats all i can sai

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Kalgoras In reply to MarieJaneWorks [2011-05-23 14:35:35 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for not yelling at me! Yeh I left about a 5mm gap around the edge so I could hold the paper sometimes while scribbling Stops me smudging everything so much!

Thanks for the kind comment heh! Glad you liked the picture

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MarieJaneWorks In reply to Kalgoras [2011-05-23 14:47:28 +0000 UTC]

LOL im glad i didnt haave to yell to xD
and YES i love it

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Kalgoras In reply to MarieJaneWorks [2011-05-23 14:51:23 +0000 UTC]

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Deborah-Valentine In reply to ??? [2011-05-23 03:47:56 +0000 UTC]

Is this Jesus?

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Kalgoras In reply to Deborah-Valentine [2011-05-23 08:23:50 +0000 UTC]

For Lord of the Rings Fans. Yes

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Deborah-Valentine In reply to Kalgoras [2011-05-23 15:23:47 +0000 UTC]

i always thought there was some sort of metaphore for jesus in lotr

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Kalgoras In reply to Deborah-Valentine [2011-05-23 15:25:35 +0000 UTC]

I'm not sure it works out in the same way Aslan in C.S. Lewis Narnia world is a direct metaphor however I don't think Tolkien had the same plan

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Deborah-Valentine In reply to Kalgoras [2011-05-23 23:58:11 +0000 UTC]

no, narnia and lotr are seperate in my brain

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desdainart In reply to ??? [2011-05-22 23:30:09 +0000 UTC]

oh, jonkal, i love it!! you've come a long way in just 3 portraits!

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Kalgoras In reply to desdainart [2011-05-23 00:52:32 +0000 UTC]

It's the expert help I've received

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desdainart In reply to Kalgoras [2011-05-23 09:26:49 +0000 UTC]

haha.. don't be so modest. it was all you, my friend.

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Kalgoras In reply to desdainart [2011-05-23 09:30:16 +0000 UTC]

I'll admit I helped

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desdainart In reply to Kalgoras [2011-05-23 10:05:31 +0000 UTC]

whateverrrr

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