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Kaly4 — animation tryout
Published: 2012-12-23 02:44:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 1616; Favourites: 56; Downloads: 13
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Description
really want to improve my animations :3It's Rusty fighting with Longtail from the book Warrior Cats o_o
hope you enjoy x3
frames: 39
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Comments and critiques are welcome (:
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update: Longtail seemed to fly away so I tried to correct them
firepaw/ rusty, longtail (c) Erin Hunter
art (c) me
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Comments: 25
This is actually incredibly well done. All I can advise is to add more layers to the animation to keep it less choppy. One other thing is that when the cat with the collar jumps it looks like he's flying because the animation is too slow for the actual speed of a jump and the way he takes off. When a cat jumps they crouch lower and their legs spread out more. They also jump quickly so next time you should try making the take off faster. Look at some videos of cats leaping to get the feel for just how they take off and how quickly they jump.
Other then that this animation is very well done ^^
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thanks for this critique ^^ There are some very nice advises
I realised this 'flying' moment after submitting 
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This is awesome! The only part that is a little weird to me is the jumping. Maybe you could have put some weight on his hind legs? Otherwise this is pretty awesome!
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I drew this one on sai and animated it on gimp.
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could i use this and draw onto of it with your permission
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do you mean credit and kaly4 made this first and yer i will if thats what you mean
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sorry I'm confused now... just leaf a comment in the description which says that "kaly4 did the lines" or somthing like that. or do you want to redraw it? Than you don't have to give credits because it's from a book.
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this looks amazing! ^^ all i would have to say about this is put some final outlines and color on it and you have a perfect animation for when these two were fighting!
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thanks :3
I think I'll color it xD
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Longtail and Rusty 
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I have no better words on how amazing this is.
I envy your skill.
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Wow! This is really impressive! ^^ Nice anatomy, and it flows pretty well too!
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