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FULL VIEW plzThis one is for sanne : D
My first succesful attempt of making a HDR picture ^^
I made it with one photo, because at the time I did not know yet how to use the bracketing on my camera
I think it worked out good :]
I am very open for some advice how to make my following HDR pictures better
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Featured your amazing photo here: [link]
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This is SUCH a fantastic photo...
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I like it ^^ but I don't really see the HDR effect in it. Perhaps that is also because most parts of the photo are vague and out of focus (which isn't a bad thing in itself; it only means that the foreground and background make up most of the image).
I'm not too sure about the background though. The wall at the end seems neither properly in nor out focus, it's somewhere in between, which confuses me as to what it's intented to be?
I also think you could crop a part of the top part off, since that part is lighter and sharper than the bottom, while the darkness and vagueness contribute a lot to the atmosphere of the picture. Especially the small white area above the wall at the end takes away from this, since it means a light and an escape for the person sitting there.
That's just advice which I think would further improve the picture, but don't get me wrong, I quite like it - I really like the mood, the atmosphere you set here. Good job
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Nice photo β thatβs my first impression. But right away I have to say that Iβm not very familiar with HDR photos, so I canβt really give you some advice on that. But I think I can concerning the rest of the photo β or at least I hope so! ^^
What draws my attention to it right away is that all the lines in the photo are not straight. The whole look of the image would improve a lot if they were. A lot of people think that straight lines are boring, but they really arenβt β theyβre very important in a good photograph. I can see that you tried to keep the horizontal lines straight β or at least I think that you tried. But the vertical lines should definitely be straighter than they are now. It just looks a bit confusing.
The placement of the girl in this picture is very good. You made a nice use of the rule of thirds β so the position of the focus of the whole image is in the half and on the left. This makes the look of the image a lot more interesting for the eye! Well done.
The colors are pretty nice and fit to the whole concept of the photograph. Itβs a mainly dark image, but not too dark in contrast and colors. I like the light spots like the jacket of the girl and the sky.
All in all the image is created very well β the only thing that really disturbs my view of it are the non-straight lines. Keep up the good work!
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all your terminology confuses me but its ok you take lovely photos nevertheless
i like how urban it is and she looks all emo! which is good 
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Gehe sorry for the confusing ^^
how sweet<3 thank you n__n
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Great subject and great picture. I love the perspective and the selective focusing. Nice light and coloring.
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Thanks you ^^
thats a great compliment to me!
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Thank yoou!
you have beautiful pictures yourself tooo ^^
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Your wonderful work has been featured here: [link]
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ah such an honour ;D between those beautiful works
thanks
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aww No problem xD
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