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Description          "Koru!"
         The young pikachu laughed with delight and hugged her brother, who had only just stepped through the entrance to her home in Energetic Forest. He was the only surviving member of her family, but he lived far away, in the outskirts of the Lightning Field. She rarely saw him.
         Koru grinned sheepishly and said "What, you expected me to not visit for my kid sister's birthday? Now, what kind of brother would do that?" He reached into a small pouch at his side. "I know your birthday's not for another week, but I can't stay that long."
         Koru produced a small parcel from his bag, which his sister took and ripped it open eagerly. Inside was a black scarf with a note that read "To Kay. Congrats on the Rescue Team! Love, Koru."
         Kay held the scarf in her paws and cried "Thank you, Koru!" She then surveyed it with a quizzical expression on her face. "But... what is it, exactly?"
         "A Vision Scarf. Wearing it lets you see hidden traps."
         "Wow! I can't wait to tell Olive!" Kay wrapped the black scarf around her neck and raced off. Koru sighed and turned to follow his sister, but then stopped. A gentle breeze had begun to blow through Energetic Forest, usually a welcome thing during the summertime, but this was different. There was something almost... unatural... about the wind, and it felt almost as though it was a physical presence. The breeze began to blow harder, and Koru ran after Kay as quickly as he could.
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          An eevee slept in a leafy tree high above a structure that resembled her own face, the Pecha Scarf she wore fluttering every time she snored. Olive was deep into what had been pleasant dreams, of successful rescues and exciting adventures. But the dream began to change, and it became a replica of the day she had to leave her friends and go back to her own world. Olive's consciousness  knew that she had returned, that she would live in the Pokemon world forever, but there was still that unbearable pang of sorrow when she saw Kay's tearful face. The dream changed again, this time to something Olive had never seen before. Somehow, the eevee knew that there was a force racing toward her, closer and closer, and when it struck she felt a pain far worse than the death she had suffered when Raquaza's Hyper Beam swallowed her. But Olive did not die, and the pain grew until she wished she WOULD die. The force came to attack again, but Olive could not fight back, because if she did terrible things would happen, and she knew that this was her end, and she braced herself for the worst-
         "OLIVE!!!!!"
         The eevee woke with a start and promptly fell out of her tree, landing with a thud. She shook herself and looked up to see Kay the pikachu running toward her. Normally Olive would have been angry at Kay for waking her like that, but she was grateful to have been released from that horrible dream.
         "Olive, you'll never guess what-"
         Olive was barely paying attention to what Kay was telling her, she still had her mind on what she had dreamt. She tried to tell herself that it had been a mere nightmare, nothing more, but it had been too real to just be that. Olive prayed that dreams would not trouble her again, for she feared what would have happened if Kay had not woken her.
         A strangely chilled breeze rustled the bushes, and Olive shuddered.  
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Comments: 38

nico-dies [2018-11-01 02:29:53 +0000 UTC]

HOW DO YOU WRITE SUCH LONG CHAPTERS?

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TeenTitansFangirl333 [2016-05-18 01:23:22 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE THIS!!!! YOU DO AN ASTOUNDING JOB!!

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PrettyWaterLilly [2015-08-30 16:37:09 +0000 UTC]

sigh why am I going to read this again

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EnduranceTheBraviary [2014-04-02 17:15:45 +0000 UTC]

This Happened To Me Once In Mystery Dungeon......O_o. RUN FROM THE FOREBODING WIND D:

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Pastel--Puppy [2012-08-09 13:40:02 +0000 UTC]

One time I was level grinding in a dungeon by staying in one spot and holding 'A+B'. And then wind. My team got blown out of the dungeon before we got to the stairs. -Tableflip-

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Tori-the-Eevee1234 [2012-06-26 19:26:42 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, yeah... WTF IS THE WIND?!

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ingramlunagrovyle4 [2011-05-13 11:47:30 +0000 UTC]

I like this story

and how do you do writeing here

___
You can awalys change the furture

Mars X Lancelot = <3

PMD Ever souls

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MistyDawnAmara [2011-04-27 11:19:10 +0000 UTC]

agh! i hate the wind! theres something similar in the undella bay temple in black nad white. drives me nuts!

(i was linked by unownace. thank him next time you can^^)

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thedeltalightumbreon [2011-04-09 02:59:53 +0000 UTC]

Koru spelled backward is Kuro.
im not gonna spoil it but, this is my second time reading, so i would know.

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dairymia [2011-01-11 00:42:31 +0000 UTC]

oh....my....god! U R AWSOME!

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KAC-N [2010-10-16 23:50:21 +0000 UTC]

oh, god... the foreboding wind... it was so horrible... good story btw

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Kii-Cat [2009-10-28 17:40:24 +0000 UTC]

This is a good stary so far! OoO

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TheForestRebel [2009-10-22 16:51:25 +0000 UTC]

AWSOME! PURE AWSOME! olive and kay rock! (iv'e serched,but I can't find the next chapter?!?! Were is it?)

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cheez-llama [2009-09-13 01:50:13 +0000 UTC]

epic... and BTW, how do you get text onto DA? I freaking kan't figure it out..

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ejrade [2009-08-23 21:34:58 +0000 UTC]

I love it but every time i try to show it to my friends they never read it, P.S please make the next one sorry this isn't meant to be pushy i just need to find out what happens next

--
karaskitty & twilighttheeevee rule

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karaskitty In reply to ejrade [2009-08-24 15:17:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I'm working on Chapter 18 as fast as I can, don't worry.

Uh, nice signature. ^^

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ejrade In reply to karaskitty [2009-08-25 14:24:18 +0000 UTC]

yay, sorry i just really like your art

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racingwolf [2009-07-10 06:45:50 +0000 UTC]

I found this story after seeing your video on youtube. =3

I like it so far. I've always wondered what that wind was as well-it freaked me out the first time it happened to me. xD

I'll read the other ones soon-I'm interested to see where this goes.

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dragonmasterkiumi In reply to racingwolf [2009-11-05 00:54:56 +0000 UTC]

That's the same exact way I found this one. (at first I thought it was the name of the band, then I looked at the info for the vid.)

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PlatinaSi [2009-05-12 08:46:10 +0000 UTC]

Whaaaa? A mysterious wind?! I've never encountered that before.... but there were times when I entered the stairs and suddenly it says I failed the dungeon. Usually you're supposed to land in a room, but I think it's because the game glitched up and landed me in the pathway.

I searched the net and I think the wind is there to prevent you from staying on one floor for too long.

Hmmmm, this makes me wanna go and experiment with my PMD1 game! *rubs hands together as if determined*

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Porridges [2009-04-01 05:03:57 +0000 UTC]

whaargh!! i made a new game on PMD red rescue team yesterday, and my partner was called Koru!! and I made another one this morning and I'm an eevee (but not called Olive) Uurrrgh, anyway, those winds are really scary....they make you feel so nervous....:s

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karaskitty In reply to Porridges [2009-04-04 00:18:42 +0000 UTC]

Wow, that's freaky.0_0

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Pikininja [2008-12-23 01:04:08 +0000 UTC]

I freaked out when I first heard the wind. I paniced and ran around the room. I died.XD

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elizabysmal [2008-09-23 21:31:39 +0000 UTC]

The first time he wind blew, I thought that something cool would happen.
Much to my angry disappointment.

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karaskitty In reply to elizabysmal [2008-09-24 19:23:29 +0000 UTC]

I tried numerous times to figure out what "The Wind" was. The first time was in Thunderwave Cave, and I stuck around until The Wind, of course, killed me. I was so scared that I didn't come back to the dungeon for weeks. I eventually figured out that The Wind came if you stayed on one floor for too long, so I packed 5 Reviver Seeds and left for Sky Tower, to see if I could survive it. I couldn't, and I lost all my Seeds. After that, I went crazy, surfing the internet, trying to find an answer. After a while, I gave up. A year and a half later, when I discovered and joined DA, I suddenly had the insane idea to write my own explanation for The Wind.

And here we are.

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elizabysmal In reply to karaskitty [2008-09-24 20:07:20 +0000 UTC]

I wasn't scared about the wind, but I got REALLY miffed off about it.
When it "blew me away" I turned the game off and pouted.
But seriously, this story is EPIC.
More epic than mine, anyway.

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karaskitty In reply to elizabysmal [2008-09-25 21:26:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!(I dunno, your story is looking pretty epic so far)^^

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elizabysmal In reply to karaskitty [2008-09-25 21:41:26 +0000 UTC]

Naww...

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karaskitty In reply to elizabysmal [2008-09-25 22:20:42 +0000 UTC]

Uh-huh.

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elizabysmal In reply to karaskitty [2008-09-25 23:26:23 +0000 UTC]

*blushes and hides face*

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Plaid-pichu [2008-08-16 04:11:18 +0000 UTC]

I once went to a dungeon just to see what the wind would do. What's it even there for?!?

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karaskitty In reply to Plaid-pichu [2008-08-16 04:39:27 +0000 UTC]

TO KILL US!

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French-Horns-Rock [2008-07-01 20:02:28 +0000 UTC]

I've only been caught by the wind once, and until then I had thought there was some sort of mega-boss that would come.

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karaskitty In reply to French-Horns-Rock [2008-07-01 20:03:32 +0000 UTC]

Me too! Curse my ignorance...

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PokreatiaForms [2008-04-22 02:31:56 +0000 UTC]

I always wondered about that crazy, mysterious wind, as well... It makes me think of all kinds of weird scenarios that may cause it. XD

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karaskitty In reply to PokreatiaForms [2008-04-24 12:20:21 +0000 UTC]

Ohhh man... the wind is evil! And it proves it in the next chapter.

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pokemonrules247 In reply to karaskitty [2009-09-11 19:00:09 +0000 UTC]

the part when olive was having that dream i got the shiver

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PokreatiaForms In reply to karaskitty [2008-04-26 00:20:03 +0000 UTC]

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