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Description
Masks.A different face
for every place.
Hiding
Disguising.
Plastic smile
Hollow laugh.
But inside
Secrets
Darkness,
Held in by chains
About to snap.
Locked away
Buried under
A glass floor
About to crack.
Smile pretty.
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Comments: 7
ShadowBrokenMirrors [2011-02-16 00:14:38 +0000 UTC]
Very well done. The indents and italics really add to it...I can relate to this. ^_^ Good job!
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KeepersKeep In reply to ShadowBrokenMirrors [2011-02-16 05:19:11 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I'm flattered.
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SilverPages [2011-02-15 20:17:09 +0000 UTC]
wow. i don't normally relate to this type of style, but i really really like this one.
great job!
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KeepersKeep In reply to SilverPages [2011-02-16 05:19:28 +0000 UTC]
I really appreciate hearing that! Thank you.
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Christmasbats [2011-02-15 19:45:41 +0000 UTC]
I can relate to this one, nicely written. I especially like 'held in by chains about to snap'
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KeepersKeep In reply to Christmasbats [2011-02-16 05:18:34 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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