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Published: 2011-02-15 19:03:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 448; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 5
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Description Masks.
A different face
     for every place.
Hiding
     Disguising.
Plastic smile
     Hollow laugh.
But inside
Secrets
Darkness,
Held in by chains
     About to snap.
Locked away
     Buried under
A glass floor
     About to crack.


Smile pretty.
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Comments: 7

ShadowBrokenMirrors [2011-02-16 00:14:38 +0000 UTC]

Very well done. The indents and italics really add to it...I can relate to this. ^_^ Good job!

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KeepersKeep In reply to ShadowBrokenMirrors [2011-02-16 05:19:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'm flattered.

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SilverPages [2011-02-15 20:17:09 +0000 UTC]

wow. i don't normally relate to this type of style, but i really really like this one.
great job!

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KeepersKeep In reply to SilverPages [2011-02-16 05:19:28 +0000 UTC]

I really appreciate hearing that! Thank you.

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SilverPages In reply to KeepersKeep [2011-02-17 20:19:21 +0000 UTC]

you're very welcome!

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Christmasbats [2011-02-15 19:45:41 +0000 UTC]

I can relate to this one, nicely written. I especially like 'held in by chains about to snap'

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KeepersKeep In reply to Christmasbats [2011-02-16 05:18:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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