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Description Pretty happy with how this came out...just wanted to practice some emotion
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Comments: 31

LionFig1999 [2011-03-18 23:28:40 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


Vision- I love art that tells a story but doesn't really explain whats going on which keeps them geussing. This is crucial becuase throughout the time they're guessing they're looking at your work. This is that kind of art. I saw this picture I started wondering what was wrong and I started thinking what might be going on.

Originality- Sure, there are lots of pictures of girls looking sad or depressed but what saved you was the tears and way she's sitting. Everytime a girl crys they want curl up into a ball but most artists portray that feeling.

Techinique- I love the technique. The first thing I saw were the tears so it was great that you made the tears so visible. Then I saw you the emotion in the girls face which was good because some artists might just draw the eye and then a tear on the cheek then leave it. Plus, the way you shaded really helped focus the attention the girl's face.

Impact- This picture impacte me emotionally. You know how people say things give off vibes? This drawing gives off a sad vibe. That's a good thing. When you pass by happy person the street with a huge smile, even if your in a bad mood you feel at least a little happier. That's what this drawing does.

Keep creating, nice work!

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keepsake20 In reply to LionFig1999 [2011-03-19 00:04:40 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much for your input. I had been thinking about doing a drawing of this for months but I originally wanted it to be front on but it just never worked...but the other night I thought...profile! So I gave it a shot.
I'm really glad that it gave off the intended vibe while being different

Thanks Again!

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LionFig1999 In reply to keepsake20 [2011-03-19 19:23:33 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome!

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Nealecoh [2015-09-08 19:43:20 +0000 UTC]

powerful

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keepsake20 In reply to Nealecoh [2015-09-19 22:49:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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HogwartsMarch [2014-02-03 21:15:32 +0000 UTC]

this is INCREDIBLE!!!!!!!!!!!!! <3 <3 <3 *-* 

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keepsake20 In reply to HogwartsMarch [2014-02-04 02:10:20 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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HogwartsMarch In reply to keepsake20 [2014-02-04 06:06:40 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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spittoonist [2012-01-30 22:58:20 +0000 UTC]

Great work, the emotion is undeniable. I like how close up she is,how pinched her face is and your color choices.

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keepsake20 In reply to spittoonist [2012-01-31 03:53:59 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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baleserhatun [2011-05-25 05:14:00 +0000 UTC]

it is really beautiful... beautiful... <3

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keepsake20 In reply to baleserhatun [2011-05-25 11:20:57 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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SlowMindedWalrus [2011-03-17 01:23:42 +0000 UTC]

looking at this made me sad! ;A;
because its so real and good! makes me believe in the emotion

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keepsake20 In reply to SlowMindedWalrus [2011-03-17 14:17:29 +0000 UTC]

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MidnightAvatArtist8 [2011-03-17 01:04:58 +0000 UTC]

Almost makes me sad.

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MidnightAvatArtist8 [2011-03-17 01:04:46 +0000 UTC]

Well, it SURE has it. Great work.

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keepsake20 In reply to MidnightAvatArtist8 [2011-03-17 01:10:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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MidnightAvatArtist8 In reply to keepsake20 [2011-03-18 00:53:05 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!!

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mazingenglishgrl [2011-03-16 19:31:59 +0000 UTC]

very well done

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keepsake20 In reply to mazingenglishgrl [2011-03-16 19:43:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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mazingenglishgrl In reply to keepsake20 [2011-03-16 23:13:27 +0000 UTC]

of course

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TheWriTer999 [2011-03-16 13:22:29 +0000 UTC]

I absolutely adore this, the amount of anguish is eerily visible on her face, and I also love the light hitting her, my imagination makes this out to be her hiding in a closet after witnessing something devastating

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keepsake20 In reply to TheWriTer999 [2011-03-16 15:16:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks yeah that was totally what I was going for...that moment of complete isolation where all your inhibitions disappear.

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TheWriTer999 In reply to keepsake20 [2011-03-16 18:52:36 +0000 UTC]

Well it was captured

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keepsake20 In reply to TheWriTer999 [2011-03-16 19:44:01 +0000 UTC]

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MiracleMili [2011-03-16 12:05:26 +0000 UTC]

Wow this is incredible. I love the sketchy lines and her hair is so pretty
Amazing

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keepsake20 In reply to MiracleMili [2011-03-16 15:16:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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edlingart [2011-03-16 10:21:00 +0000 UTC]

aww so sad great emotion, also great lightning in the picture awesome job

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keepsake20 In reply to edlingart [2011-03-16 15:16:15 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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lillith-of-the-rose [2011-03-16 08:04:52 +0000 UTC]

the emotion feels very real and raw, great job.

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keepsake20 In reply to lillith-of-the-rose [2011-03-16 08:05:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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