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Description
[Name] Jacques du Point
[Alias] The Strongman
[Species] Super-Human/Slender Being
[Gender] Male
[Sexual Preference] Unknown (too young to determine.)
[Age] 12 (for both versions.)
[Birthdate] October 29th
[Astrological Sign] Scorpio
[Birthplace] Seattle, Washington
[Blood Type] O
[Alignment] Unknown
[Affiliation] Slender Proxies
[Occupation] Unknown
[Figure] Skinny and slender (normal.) Bulky and heavy-set (monster.)
[Height] 5”7’ (normal.) 7”0’ due to his "gigantism" (monster.)
[Weight] 137lbs (normal.) 230lbs (monster.)
[Skin tone] Light tan (normal.) Pachyderma skin, same tan. (monster.)
[Hair] Bright blonde.
[Eyes] Olive green.
[Left or Right handed] Left-handed.
[Languages Spoken] English (obscured greatly with his heavy accent) and French.
[Favorite color] Orange, purple and silver.
[Fears] His strength | not able to protect others from harm | insects | confrontation | being seen as an idiot.
[Good or Bad] Jacques is a good guy, protective of children and other proxies smaller/shorter than him.
[Distinguishing Features] Missing one of his front-teeth (both sides.) Beauty (normal.) Large xenogeneic skin-graft under his chin and on cheek, large nose, underbite, baldness, and extreme height (monster.)
[Personality] Jacques is a very curious child that likes to explore and learn. He treks through the woods to look for hikers, thinking he could try and befriend some of them. He is an extremely slow learner, being mentally impaired (retardation) and doesn’t understand when someone is acting so scared when he’s being nice. When someone screams, witnessing his “Monster” form, Jacques bottles up and tries to hide. He wonders where his Mother has gone (only provided a single photo of her face,) usually mistaking some blonde-haired women for his Mother and tries to approach them.
Others believe he is not smart enough to understand their words towards him, but Jacques can process a few words, and many of them are always negative. Jacques is overly-protective of children who are vulnerable to attackers, not wanting them to feel the pain as he did. Jacques also loves stuffed animals, finding them as comfort to hug when he feels afraid or alone.
[Official Theme Song] A Beautiful Lie, by 30 Seconds To Mars.
Immense Strength.
Runs incredibly fast.
Able to jump 20 ft. into the air.
Can shout/yell as loud as an air-siren.
[Weaknesses]
Can be outsmarted.
Mental instability taking control of his actions.
Cares too much.
Jacques de Point is an experimental child of the National Genome Project. Mira du Point was chosen as one of the other hundred clients for this - she begged for a perfect angel. She wanted everything build to perfection – to be strong and beautiful, tall and given abilities like no other. But the day Jacques du Point was born, she had given birth to a horribly disfigured baby. She cried for another chance, handing Jacques over to the scientists that performed the DNA imbalance. Jacques was left to grow within a secluded observation home for the scientists, living amongst other failed experiments. He cried for attention, wanting a chance to be noticed, yet his ugliness made the adults disgusted or vile.
Jacques was continuously being observed for his immense strength, seeing that he was abnormally strong. The scientists had mixed with his DNA before his birth to try and make him strong, though there came a mutation within the mapping, giving Jacques the strength of 12 men. His retardation, however, questioned the scientists, to where they decided to uncap his head and research into his brain. His brain, they discovered, was smaller than average, which only meant he was mentally challenged for his future. They were able to recap his skull into place, but his skin wouldn't connect, having no choice but to cut out the hanging skin and cauterize the rim around the opening to prevent bleeding.
One day, to try and have attention drawn to him, Jacques purposely hurt himself for medical help. A fire broke out in the backyard, where Jacques burnt the underside of his chin and left-cheek. His skin was so tough and leathery, however, that the scientists had to use a xenogeneic skin-graft (the skin of a pig's dead-body) to replace his old skin. But the new flesh made him feel uglier, and he couldn't stand the thought of others fearing him for this. He then tried to grab one of the scientists to beg for another chance, but his strength was immaculate, to where he bruised the smaller woman in his hands. The other adults came to yield him, but Jacques fought back. He was so scared when they darted at him, that he just started to throw his arms around to block them. His strength was too much, hurting many of the scientists in the process.
Eventually, one of the professionals requested Jacques to be euthanize. After years of trying to make Jacques live normally, the professionals had enough of his inability to function normally, and deemed him unsalvageable. Jacques didn't understand these words, but after a long while of the adults discussing and finding their rights to do such an act, they were coming into Jacques' room with a syringe filled with a bright green liquid. The color suddenly made Jacques attack out of defense, but once more, he hurt too many of the adults. Scared of himself, Jacques ran out of the home, able to escape since there were no other scientist to stop him. Jacques ran into the woods behind the home, where his deformity scared away onlookers. He screamed out for help, but his distorted voice only made the strangers cry and run for their lives.
Defeated and alone, Jacques was in the middle of the dark woods, holding onto his last shred of hope as he wished for another chance. A hand touched his back, and Jacques turned to find a faceless man before him. Jacques thought the man was another runaway experiment, so he wasn't entirely scared. However, seeing no face made Jacques feel a little fearful, unable to distinguish a friendly or a harmful person before him.
The faceless man saw what Jacques looked like, and had watched his actions for months during Jacques' imprisonment within the secluded home. With Jacques' plea for help, the faceless man granted him the second chance he always wanted. The man changed Jacques into the perfect boy he always wanted to be, yet a curse was placed onto his puny soul. He was beautiful on the outside, yet the truth would always be exposed on the inside.
"I want to be perfect."
Parents: Mira du Point (estrange Mother.)
Siblings: Unknown (Mira had wanted to try for another child after disowning Jacques.)
Relatives: Unknown (never met them.)
Partner: None (too scared to love.)
Mentors: The Slenderman (S.M. admired the strength and endurance that Jacques had, as well as his strong will to continue living, and wanted him to become his Strongman Proxy, to be able to take on other strong enemies within his Woods.)
Likes to laugh to his own jokes quietly.
Has a small book of numbers, because he’s trying to count up to 200.
He has a mindset of a 9-year-old child, very curious and scared of adults.
[Interests] Running | playing | climbing trees | carrying his stuffed animal | colorful objects/flowers.
"One… two… three… nine…?"
“No! D-Don’t be scared!”
"Stop hurting them!"
“Do you share…?"
Jacques has pachyderma skin: leathery-thick skin that is as tough as a rhino’s or an elephant’s. This is used as an “armor,” however when he is hit, bruises or cuts do not heal properly, and may take a longer period of time to heal.
In Jacques’ “Liar Form,” his mental state does not change. He remains as excited and curious as a 9-year-old. However, his strength does not exist in his Liar Form, hiding it as he pretends to be a perfectly normal child.
When Jacques feels the want to protect a child from a suspicious adult, he changes into his Truth Form and scares the predator away.
Even though Jacques is the Strongman Proxy, he lacks intelligence greatly. He is quick, but not enough to catch up to his enemy’s secondary move to win a fight.
Jacques loves anything miniature, such as stuffed animals, children, and books.
If he is teamed with a Proxy who is very tall, or seems eligible to fight, Jacques sees no point in protecting them. However, if they do fall under attack and need help, he comes to their rescue.
Jacques has a massive underbite, but likes it because he can count his teeth.
Jacques is almost as tall as The Slenderman (though only halfway there.)
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Comments: 19
loganburns346 [2016-05-18 04:12:05 +0000 UTC]
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Overall, this character does have great potential and it seems to be very well thought out, though I do have some minor nitpicks. The first would be the piercings in his ears. Since he is so young, and his thought process is even younger than his age, I wouldn't see a reason for him to have any kind of piercing in his ears in the first place. Another one I would have is that it doesn't really explain why and how he decided to work for slenderman. I don't really see this character killing anyone whatsoever, thought it would be understandable since he is mentally incapable of interpreting what death actually is. I would like to say that this character has reminded me greatly of the the character Lenny from Of Mice and Men. He seems to be very similar to that character, and I quite like that. So, overall, this character is pretty damn good, other than the small nitpicks I have about him. I would suggest that you work on his actual motives, since every character needs them no matter what age or level of intellect.
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Somymatsu [2015-05-01 00:58:29 +0000 UTC]
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Dear god this child is beautiful. Yes I HATE "new" proxies but you put so much effort into making him not just a mary-sue. The story is SO creative and I know you did your research. He is a huge child though. I know there is a birth defect, like that guy from Princess Bride. The eye color is odd, but unless you find an explanation, then maybe change it. Last thing what are those things in his ears? It was never explained. Overall it is fresh, new, and good and I'm not saying that just because I'm your girlfriend.
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saiyantrash666 [2015-04-30 11:47:25 +0000 UTC]
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Really really good! The only problems I have with this character is the fact he's not creepy or scary in anyway. I feel pity for him instead of feeling fear of him. The only small thing I have is "Lime Green" eyes. I feel like this is supposed to realistic, and people just don't have lime green eyes in real life. I'd suggest olive green, maybe? Other than that, This character is really good! And your art is simply amazing! I can't critique one your art, but I can just say it looks freaking amazing.
Now I'm just typing to get the 100 Word Minimum... Okay there.
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Kerry-Sene In reply to saiyantrash666 [2015-04-30 12:14:02 +0000 UTC]
I definitely agree - I had no idea how non-scary Jacques was until I saw your critique and re-read the bio. I definitely redo a lot of things here.
And thank you so much for the critique!
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saiyantrash666 In reply to Kerry-Sene [2015-04-30 13:00:03 +0000 UTC]
Its no prob!! And I fuckin' love the name Jacques XD It makes me think of Tale of Two Cities. I can't wait to see what you do with him.
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SinQueenXX0 [2017-06-30 22:13:12 +0000 UTC]
This child needs protection
This child needs love
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YukiSane1001 [2016-07-26 13:27:39 +0000 UTC]
reminds me of frankesteins a lil bit BUT HE NEEDS HUGSSSSSSSSSSSSS this oc pretty goOD!
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NTSEFAN [2015-09-23 07:37:36 +0000 UTC]
I almost thought he could've been in his 40s or something, but 12, that really is a surprise.
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TheifysSoul [2015-05-03 10:24:28 +0000 UTC]
Awwwww he's just so so *3*
omg he's like an inch taller then my proxy Harley xD and a heck of a lot taller then my demon spirit thing Abyss (she takes the form of a young teen but is like 5' ) he needs so much love ;3;/)
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Dragonfear14 [2015-04-30 12:31:23 +0000 UTC]
I want to hug him more now.... would he kill me?
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GreatWolfAlpha [2015-04-30 12:16:38 +0000 UTC]
Oh, he is so awesome! And it is so well organized....
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