HOME | DD
KeyshaKitty β Jak and Dax dou. chpt1-pg1
Published: 2005-04-14 08:40:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 22084; Favourites: 266; Downloads: 2526
Redirect to original
Description
Next Page: [link]Yay! Got the first page of my Jak and Daxter doujinshi up.
Just for those of you who haven't gotten the clue yet - it's a prequel (ie - BEFORE the first Jak and Daxter game) and yes, taking off just a lil' while after younger Samos and the Kid arrive in Sandover (btw - NO crit. about Samos saying the Kid had no family...yes, we know about the issues at the end of Jak 3, but younger Samos DOESN'T know this! Whooo...time travel messes with the brain!)
Sadly, it's gonna be several pages before my fave lil' adorable bucked-tooth red-head shows up...but at least there will be lots of little Jak cuteness until then.
crud...I have to draw Samos from the next page on. XD
(And Nicki? Mah dear, I'm very happy to take you up on your offer to help with this in what ever ways you can...gawww, ya know I'm always VERY happy for your help...most of all when Dax comes into it, because I'd love you to help with the scripting of his lines.
)Tones: Pro Markers
Characters: Naughty Dog
Story and Art: *Keysha-chan
Related content
Comments: 59
Awww, thanks! <3 Good luck with your own comics!
π: 0 β©: 0
I've read this so many times and now it's time to read it on my new account *flails*
π: 0 β©: 0
Nice Work I love the Jak & Daxter series, I like the way you write this comic. And great art work, Will you be making this comic up to the events of Jak 3? Oh and I know that Jak & Daxter The Lost Frontier is a spin off but will you be adding the events from The Lost Frontier Into this comic?
I Love this comic and I hope this turns out to be better then it started out to be "Which it did start out great. I can't believe some on is making a Jak & Daxter Comic, No one ever has done this.
π: 0 β©: 0
Yeah jack and Dexter 
π: 0 β©: 0
So...jak is the descendant...of jak, i'm confused O____o
π: 0 β©: 0
I DIDN'T KNOW YOU MADE A JAK FAN COMIC! I am so reading it all!!
π: 0 β©: 0
hehe....just what I have thought when I saw the page of yours, I realize my fave, daxter was in his human so this means is was the year before Daxter became a ossel!
π: 0 β©: 0
aww, it's so adorable
i like the butterfly and little Jak
π: 0 β©: 0
I love this game. I like how your comic is starting out. I will check out the rest
π: 0 β©: 0
Hey, Keysha-chan. I love this doujinshi (hope I spelled that right. What's it mean?) I thought you should know that I'm faving this.
π: 0 β©: 0
Awww....*goes all squealy and stuff* This is too flippin' adorable! *huggles* Imma wuffing all of it! wootwoot 
π: 0 β©: 0
First of all, Iβm trying to up my comicking skills cos I wanna be JUSTLIKEMYSIS one day and make loads of manga and be everyones hero XD
That said, I almost melted. Melted like, gooshygooshgooshmelt. Cos through my diddlings with Samos in JAM, I love him to pieces. LOVE HIM TO PIECES. (And since youβve got him down SO well, I just cant OMFG WAIT to see his and Daxterβs interactions! Yeah, more like bickerings- but we love it when our sexy man gets his panties in a bundle! Even if heβs likeβ¦ THREEβ¦ *irks disturbedly and skitters off for therapy*) AND YIKES! You just explained everything in three panels which wouldβa taken me three pages >_> lucky Kai, to hold the tongue of shortness of which her sis has been deprived! You said it so aptly tooβ¦ <3
β¦ AAAA FAAAMMILLYYY!!!! X3 *dies. Just dies. No more questions. Sheβs dead.*
You have t3h SKILLZ o.o Because⦠oh. Jak is angsty cute without being angsty. Just CUTE. So unassuming! Samos is gonna take care of his little Jak-boy-Mar thing! <3
While I luff the purdy flowers and simple tones, my favie part: JAK WITH THE BUTTERFLY X3 I knew youβd put it in SOMEHOW. Jak and butterflies just FIT. Fit with a capital A for adorable o_o LIKE NYAAAH! I love how bulky his hands are, and his knobby ickle elbows! Heβs such a gawky little child <3 (This being said, I cant WAIT to see Dax DEARLORD X3 *shvvvvuhh*) I LOVE. NEXTPAGEPLZKTHX.
But ONNNNE question?
How the heck are you gonna handle the mystery of Keiraβs origin? @_@
β¦. SHE FELL FROM THE SKYβ¦ Donβt askβ¦
*plop* Samos: YAY I GOTS A BEBE!! :B
π: 0 β©: 0
Daaaaw This is great a Doujinshi of a Prequel to the FIRST game this is so great X3 may your Creativness FLOW in this Manga, Can't wait to see how you designed DAX OMG! CHIBI BUCKIE!!!! BUAHAHAHAHA!
π: 0 β©: 0
Yay for doujinshi, you made him look so cute
π: 0 β©: 0
Awwwa!! Yer gonna make a comic of Jak's child hood adventures or sumthin? Thassa cute idea!! 
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWA!!!! ::cuddles the little Jak. Starts talking to him like he was a baby.:: WHO LOOKS CUTE AND HAS AN ABSENCE OF ALL SORTS OF ECO MUTANT SUBSTENCES?!??! YOU DO!!! :
Seriously though Kai, lil Jak is ADORABLE!! Even in black and white the eyes of the characters you make are just so charming!! ^______^ I also like the little bit of shine you did on his hair too! The butterfly was a nice touch!! And once again, KUDOS to YOU on the background!! DAMN IT!!! If I could just have the fuckin energy ta make a back gorund, I kNOW it wouldn't look as HALF as goo as yours Chicky! 
π: 0 β©: 0
I will so look forward to where this is going...^^
π: 0 β©: 0
<3 Its SUCH an awsome idea to do a storyline of everything before it happened
because d'aaaaawwww <3 You draw the sweetest little!Jaks~! I love his little fingers with the butterfly
This looks excellent so far luff<3
π: 0 β©: 0
GREAT !
girl, you rock !
I've been a huge J&D fan since the beginning, and I saw already lots of your artwork
so if you don't mind, I'm going to put you in my deviantwatch-list,
so I'll know it immediately when you've put up a new J&D-artwork
π: 0 β©: 0
OOhhh! This is soo cute! X3 I really adore your pic of lil Jak holding the butterfly!
π: 0 β©: 0
*squeels loudly* Little Jaky-poo!
C. Quatre: Did she say "Jaky-poo"?
C. Wufei: It's the fangirl deep within her.
π: 0 β©: 0
he he coolness on coolbeans with a cool trend of bitcheness
π: 0 β©: 0
Squishy!!! CUTE! Squishy-cute ^___^
Aw man, I miss Sandover. *runs off to play TPL*
π: 0 β©: 0
Ohhhhhhhhhhhh, i started doing somthing like this myself !!! but, ummmm you do A LOT!!!!! better job than i did...i just scetched and i messed up ! oh well i really like it
π: 0 β©: 0
So beautiful in every respect, the story concept the text the pictures, just like the first game ^-^ I can't wait to see more.
π: 0 β©: 0
Ooooo. The backgrounds are beautiful.
π: 0 β©: 0
...don't think I've ever seen you draw Samos.... He's gonna look very interesting in your style that for sure
π: 0 β©: 0
Good good. I can't wait to see more! ^_^
π: 0 β©: 0
It's odd that I happen to be working on something like this right now. 
I really like it, sad in a happy way, I really want to see the rest of it.
I have yet to beat Jak II, but I hope I can finish it with-in the next few weeks so I can read and look at this with out and questions.
π: 0 β©: 0
T___T You draw quite possibly THE cutest Kid EVER. I can't wait to see more of this!!
π: 0 β©: 0
Aww, Jakkie gets a family! ^_^ So cute, I like thow even the buildings looked kiddish. XD
π: 0 β©: 0
Aww Cute wee Jak this is great I want more Good luck on drawing Samos he is hard
π: 0 β©: 0
Yay Doujinshi!!! I've been waiting for ever for one of these
π: 0 β©: 0
This is cool! I like it already 
π: 0 β©: 0
Yay! A dou.! This is great so far, keep it up!
π: 0 β©: 0
Yay! No one seems to appreciate the first game... just the second (or third) one u.u
The background's are beautiful... I like how you did the outlines of the clouds white in the first panel... and how you used the markers efficiently in the second panel to create a water-like effect ^^ Ah the joys of markers... if used right, they're like watercolors ^^
I don't think I've seen anyone draw a butterfly like that XD Go Kai-style butterflies~! ;.; *shot*
The dialogue is interesting... can't wait to see the next page X3
I've been curious for a while, and I hope you don't mind my asking - how different are Pro markers from any other marker brand? (Prisma, Tria, Copic etc.) and who manufactures them, are they hard to find? They look pretty smooth from what I can see here ^^
π: 0 β©: 1
To be honest, I find Pro Markers work exactly the same as Tria markers, only they're double-nibbed, and don't have that third extra EXTRA fine nib like the Tria's do. They still have the really rapid ink-flow and last longer than PrismaColors do (and they're made by the same company that do Tria Markers - Letraset).
π: 0 β©: 0
Alright! I love what you did with the background! Especially the buildings of Sandover. How long did it take you to study the background design to have it accomodate wiht your own style?
The story layout is absolutely astonishing! (sorry if I can't say anythin' anymore, but I gotta jet to school now X3)
I anxiously await the next pages!
π: 0 β©: 0
And so it begins! YAY! *throws things in happi* I'm so glad you finally got the first page of this thing done, Kai-ya. It looks great. ^^ And chibi!Jak is just plain adorable. x3 Much love to him, oui? *SNUGGLE* Can't wait to see page 2!
π: 0 β©: 0
It's off to a good start and Jak looks adorable but i have to suggest that perhaps you should get someone to read over it before you post so you don't make any more spelling mistakes
Recive = Receive
π: 0 β©: 0
Oh my goodness this is GREAT! I can't wait to read more.
π: 0 β©: 0
Ohhh, I love the first Jak&Daxter game!! I still have to finish it though...*sob*
XD I'll keep reading! Fwee!
π: 0 β©: 0
Nyu... this is gonna be so cute, so cute, I'm sure. Dangerously cute. Better get ready...
I'm very much looking forwards to the rest of the story. Your way of drawing things in sweet ways fits the Sandover childhood days perfectly.
π: 0 β©: 0
| Next =>