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This page was SO fun to tone (Lies! Filthy, Filthy LIES!) XD

Huzzah! I'm finally back into it again! *snugs her fancomic* And yes, the contest for it ends on Monday, and I should have the winner announced later this coming week, to make-way for the next page and their prize. :3

Tones: Pro and Copic Sketch Markers
Characters: Naughty Dog
Story and Art: *Keysha-chan
Previous Chapters and Pages: Look at the bottom of my main page journal entry for a link to all the past chapters and pages of the fan comic!
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Comments: 51

CookieMonstah1 [2011-08-22 06:17:04 +0000 UTC]

Dude! Whut's with all the 'Dude's' Dude? Dude! Now i'm starting to say it!! DUDE!! XD

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ayekastar [2006-07-06 02:33:41 +0000 UTC]

oh god

the surferartdude's talk is like I die, because they are just so cut and your dialouge!!11 <3 Ok, and the painting is incredibly gorgeous! :3 It really is a nice big page for the doujin!

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dizzyclown [2006-06-11 06:28:24 +0000 UTC]

Leave it to Daxter to chime in and ruin the moment with his 2 cents. He has no taste for art! Very cute... you capture their personalities so well X3 I really like the layout of this page too.. how the big dramatic picture fills the entire page and the panels are on top of it I wish I could think of stuff like that D: Speaking of thinking of stuff... the new title is pretty shweet. I was trying to come up with something but I suck at that too Oh wells. Your comics make my day :3 I looove your work *_*

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hanaraad [2006-06-09 08:24:37 +0000 UTC]

Wow! it actually looks like they are standing in that room
Im looking forward to the next page

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invisiblesolotude [2006-06-09 05:22:34 +0000 UTC]

Lurker shark... sorry daxter but it looks like a town... No insult to origonal artist just stating thought. Besides the fish the thing is awesome

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Meaki [2006-06-08 12:09:53 +0000 UTC]

Whoa, I wish I could read this from the beginning, do you think you could send me a link? I wuv daxie~

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KeyshaKitty In reply to Meaki [2006-06-08 22:47:11 +0000 UTC]

check my main-page journal for links to all the other pages.

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Meaki In reply to KeyshaKitty [2006-06-09 07:29:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank ye~ *runs over*

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interfeci [2006-06-07 16:10:40 +0000 UTC]

nice job
love this

(sorry for the late reply)

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bigblackfatcat [2006-06-06 05:13:33 +0000 UTC]

Nice painting! Love D black n white to it

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filthy-animal [2006-06-05 23:06:15 +0000 UTC]

"Filthy lies!"

I DO NOT XD (Zing!)

Beautiful work.

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KeyshaKitty In reply to filthy-animal [2006-06-06 00:05:12 +0000 UTC]

You LIE! You do lie! I've seen you do it!

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enolianslave [2006-06-04 23:54:28 +0000 UTC]

no appriecation for art that boy. i really like it actually, how much is it going for? i'll take it! i love the composion in this, the two guys look o small up against that thing in turn making the painting look huge, it's all very nicely paneled out. you can even tell from the back that jak is admiring the work.

this is great hun, dax is just so very in character here it makes me smile!

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KrimtheCeruleanAzure [2006-06-04 22:51:27 +0000 UTC]

Nyah! I like this. The painting looks great.

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maileng60 [2006-06-04 21:01:36 +0000 UTC]

lol this is good and cool

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CiyannKitty [2006-06-04 07:25:34 +0000 UTC]

Nice

--
"Why do you think they're called overalls! Is it because they go overall?"

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sarenokai [2006-06-04 06:23:03 +0000 UTC]

thats pretty good! love your style

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Ginjou [2006-06-04 05:42:18 +0000 UTC]

hahaah ....dude!

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JaksGuardianDragon [2006-06-04 04:57:48 +0000 UTC]

Awsome work! Daxter is so cuuuuute. @.@ And I love the wittle bandage on his ear; bad crabby!

And I have a question: For the contest, I still don't understand (forgive me, i'm slow!). When you said something about the "self-insert", will that be like.... one of our characters are put into the comic for a page? Or like... the charrie popping up once and so on like a mascot?

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KeyshaKitty In reply to JaksGuardianDragon [2006-06-04 05:24:10 +0000 UTC]

Noooo...it's a special kind of name self-insert, but it won't be your characters or anything like that (sorry...I'm just not keen on OC/self inserts in my comic. ). But it's still a surprise.

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JaksGuardianDragon In reply to KeyshaKitty [2006-06-04 05:29:56 +0000 UTC]

Oh! Okay, I see. ^^ Thanks.

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weaserpuff [2006-06-03 22:32:58 +0000 UTC]

hooooolly messs.
talk about crazy-gewd toning with just markers! D: i mean, it's always been drop-dead awesome, but here, we all get a taste as to just HOW blendy your marker doings can be. and with... like... MILLIONS of greys! wtf! DX stop with the sexy marker work!

srsly tho! it stood out in the inbox like crazy, and at first glance i thought it was either a touch of watercolor, or some kind of black india ink or summat. C: in any case, daxter's totally in the wrong for the insult. XP cuz it's gorgeous! and.. ominous! :0 do i sense foreshadowing? *fingerwiggle* dundunduuuun.

ah, yea... and lately, i've been lovin' the funky shapes of your speech bubbles. XP;; i'm sucha whore... they've been a mega influence on me. still diggin' the dou. <3 i love how often you update with it [the story's pace has an awesome feel to it, too!], even though i'mma lazy butt and don't comment as much as i should. [e_e fzzt.] <3 favu.

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KeyshaKitty In reply to weaserpuff [2006-06-03 23:49:32 +0000 UTC]

Wahhhhh! My Wes makes me blush!

I'm really glad to hear the story's moving at a good pace. Half the time, my biggest fear is that it's either moving too fast or too slow for people's tastes. But dun worry about comments, luff! I'm just as bad when it comes to commenting on stuff. @__@ Guuuhhhhh.

The painting wasn't too bad...just took up more toning time than usual. The brush-nibs on Copic Sketch markers make painting-like strokes alot easier to do for obvious reasons...so it was just slapping enough down to get it looking somewhat paint like. :3 So glad you like it, luff!

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AuroranWings [2006-06-03 21:30:38 +0000 UTC]

Wow, great job in this one!! ^^ I can see the effort put into it!!
Silly Dax.

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SesakaTH [2006-06-03 21:05:26 +0000 UTC]

That "dude" thing reminds me alot like Ximon!

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KeyshaKitty In reply to SesakaTH [2006-06-03 23:38:55 +0000 UTC]

Yeah....that's the first thing I thought when I was writing it! "DDDDUUUUUDDDDDEEEEEEE!" XD

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SesakaTH In reply to KeyshaKitty [2006-06-04 02:33:43 +0000 UTC]

Gosh! Ximon has to be one of my most favourite characters in the Daxter game! Him and Osmo! Gotta love Dax there too. Teh top 3!

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Timonaholic [2006-06-03 20:40:51 +0000 UTC]

Ooo, I do like the Sculptor's painting. Very nice and swooshy.

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LainaInverse [2006-06-03 19:23:13 +0000 UTC]

That painting is awesome... makes me wonder what it' look like n color... X3

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Patineitor [2006-06-03 19:14:36 +0000 UTC]

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Nuti [2006-06-03 17:36:59 +0000 UTC]

Very sad colors! I like them!

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Meowen [2006-06-03 17:26:26 +0000 UTC]

Hmmmm.
Hmmmmmm.
Hmmmmmmm...nope. Can still not figure out why Daxter thinks that painting s ugly, it's absolutely gorgeous! Hey Sculptor, do you take comissions?

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WaiLik [2006-06-03 17:24:35 +0000 UTC]

^.^

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Eva-Kasumi [2006-06-03 16:25:47 +0000 UTC]

I seriously love the Sculptor's painting. Dax clearly doesn't have an eye for art, cuz it's WIN. Uh-huh.

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neoyi [2006-06-03 16:16:40 +0000 UTC]

Maybe it's just me, but why do I have this aching feeling that painting has some sort of eerie foershadowing behind it?

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KeyshaKitty In reply to neoyi [2006-06-03 23:41:02 +0000 UTC]

hmmm...who knows.... *wiggles fingers at*

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ChRiStIaN4LiFe [2006-06-03 16:12:18 +0000 UTC]

hahaha, that's awesome!

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Ayumi250 [2006-06-03 15:22:14 +0000 UTC]

Is that a lurker shark or a goldfish- XD gotta love daxter

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meteorsummoner88 [2006-06-03 14:37:12 +0000 UTC]

Nice - that's a lot of tones used there... O__o

I thought it was something else...I guess I was wrong then!

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KeyshaKitty In reply to meteorsummoner88 [2006-06-03 23:42:52 +0000 UTC]

It's okay. XD Most people thought he was pointing at the muse, but...that would not tie-in with the original game...since their first time seeing the muse was in 'precursor legacy'. X3 I'm trying to stay as loyal to the games as I can. :3

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meteorsummoner88 In reply to KeyshaKitty [2006-06-04 01:31:33 +0000 UTC]

I only figured that out when I saw this... <__< >__> My braind is slow...

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BecSparrow [2006-06-03 14:10:47 +0000 UTC]

evein if the toning was a pain it looks fantastic you've done a great job lol doing that lil mini painting must have been fun

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SandsOfTimeTrilogy [2006-06-03 13:00:06 +0000 UTC]

Dude, stop calling me 'dude' XD

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InvaderKali [2006-06-03 12:17:45 +0000 UTC]

I like the painting, very..swishy makes Jak and Daxter really stand out. All I can think though is Im wondering what wee Jak thinks of it as hes looking at it.

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CaptainKurfuffle [2006-06-03 11:58:15 +0000 UTC]

me luffles that it's brillaint

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lawzy87 [2006-06-03 10:41:01 +0000 UTC]

That main panel really grabbed my attention, it's gorgeous and the perspective is great!

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RajaJugaro [2006-06-03 10:26:32 +0000 UTC]

Jak, you're such a critic! Actually, it's really pretty. Must've taken a looong time to do just that painting, it's really cool. But hey, at least you didn't have to color it! The rest looks awsome, too! I like Jak's face when he's insulting it, and hypicriticalism is funny, too!

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KeyshaKitty In reply to RajaJugaro [2006-06-03 11:00:09 +0000 UTC]

Um...that's Daxter who's insulting the painting. Jak's the other boy (the mute one).

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RajaJugaro In reply to KeyshaKitty [2006-06-03 11:33:54 +0000 UTC]

AAAh! So sorry! I just woke up, really! I can barely see!! I don't know what I'm saying!! TT_TT

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Alex-Hammond [2006-06-03 10:23:27 +0000 UTC]

Kool

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