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KianJimenez In reply to ??? [2012-12-21 06:57:00 +0000 UTC]

no witness D:<

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KaijuDuke In reply to KianJimenez [2012-12-28 05:11:28 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, but in the original he was able to charm her into keeping quiet (a funny moment that let ya know Kian wasn't all bad after all), and well...To be honest...If he simply hadn't removed his biker helmet and shown her his face, he wouldn't have had any reason to fear the possibility of her fingering him to the cops or anything (and considering how skilled he is compared to a normal secretary like Lucy, he could have easily dispatched her without killing her).

I'm just saying if he really cared about his secret identity, he wouldn't have shown his face, he could have just tied her up or knocked her out and been on his way (or given her a non-lethal bullet wound if absolutely necessary...But again, Lucy wouldn't have been able to go for the gun if he'd been more careful).

Sorry for the long rant, just wanted to give you an honest critique, I loved the new pages up until this particular scene (beautiful artwork, big time!). The original just made more sense to me, where this one just makes Kian look like a careless creep rather than a likable anti-hero.

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ODST-Dutch In reply to ??? [2012-12-21 06:41:40 +0000 UTC]

She should've rolled.~ : o

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KianJimenez In reply to Monserawr [2012-12-21 07:00:22 +0000 UTC]

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