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KicsterAsh β€” Keep Quiet...

Published: 2011-08-06 17:48:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 35615; Favourites: 653; Downloads: 0
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Description Perry almost regretted helping Ferb out of the mud pit to go get help. With nightfall came eerie shadows and suspicious noises. His senses were on alert more than usual. His heart beat loudly like a drum. And sitting in the thick mud for hours did absolutely no help.

But he couldn't leave the fifteen-year-old. He couldn't leave Phineas alone there, injured and catching a fever. It was bad enough Perry had sent Ferb off with an injured arm; it would have been better if they had both thought of a way helping Phineas out without infecting the cut on his leg or injuring his twisted ankle at the same time. But Perry knew more than anyone that moving Phineas without any professional help would only make his situation worse.

So he sat there, trying to keep the teenager's head above the thick mud while waiting for help to come.

Maybe it would have been better if he had never done what he had done; maybe it would have been better if Perry had left well enough alone.

Then Phineas and Ferb wouldn't be in this mess.

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You can call it an excuse if you want. I. DON'T. CARE. That made last night almost an evening I never wanted to remember. No, it has nothing to do with the movie: only the people who watched it three hours before me and come rub it in my face on notes. People will and already have given me crap about my storylines after the movie, so I've come up with a loophole.

I will be writing it in the next few weeks.




characters (c) Dan and Swampy
art (c) KicsterAsh
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Comments: 117

FireSong-49135 [2014-10-11 04:13:11 +0000 UTC]

ohhhhhh! Poor Phineas! YouΒ conveyed his painΒ and Perry's worry so well!

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DawnDewdrop [2014-04-27 19:44:22 +0000 UTC]

oh man I loved this scene, it was so intense that it scarred me almost out of my scales! (It was epic )

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Private0201 [2013-12-20 00:09:29 +0000 UTC]

I almost though that isn't Perry. My bad.

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WolfiaThunderas1841 [2013-09-10 02:04:28 +0000 UTC]

Aww, such a sad picture! D:, Poor Phinny... Great job though! Sketch or not, its still way better than mine is! xD For some reason, its super hard to create Phineas' face, considering its just a triangle basically

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transformersluna [2012-10-22 00:21:32 +0000 UTC]

wheres the story to this......btw this is so cool!!!!

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CuddlyHawk In reply to transformersluna [2013-04-24 01:40:15 +0000 UTC]

[link]

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Chaosisx [2012-07-27 20:23:08 +0000 UTC]

Excuse? Night? Movie? Errr.... What?

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amy4eve2 [2012-06-13 11:04:55 +0000 UTC]

d'aaawwwww :3 so cute and...sad,but great job!im becoming a real fan of yours

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BialoveTS [2012-06-08 23:56:37 +0000 UTC]

I love so much te story !!!

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Singing-Wolf-12 [2012-05-13 05:31:20 +0000 UTC]

I love it! Your story-with-a-picture thingies are amazing!!!

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pinktwirlz [2012-04-23 08:14:13 +0000 UTC]

aaaw

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AmyNChan [2012-04-08 22:33:54 +0000 UTC]

so sad....

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Ios-01 [2012-02-27 06:12:22 +0000 UTC]

I have read bits of other story lines KicsterAsh has done and decided to think of it like a Parallel World. They are not PnF's creator, but I have enjoyed the direction KicsterAsh has taken them in their own "world". I am tired of hearing about other people complaining that the storyline was messed up! Im sure if KicsterAsh had contact with the creators and had a close friendship with them it would be a closer story.

Otherwise: Awesome storyline!!!

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Sam1910 [2012-02-26 12:36:24 +0000 UTC]

I read the whole story of this and I drew Phineas an Ferb at the mudpit
injured... Phineas' leg was bleeding and a twisted ankle while Ferb has a shot of bullet at his arm.

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Thorned-Wolfara-Rose [2012-02-19 07:08:55 +0000 UTC]

What story is this?

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CuddlyHawk In reply to Thorned-Wolfara-Rose [2013-04-24 01:39:45 +0000 UTC]

Things I Will Risk for You [link]

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Thorned-Wolfara-Rose In reply to CuddlyHawk [2013-04-26 05:58:39 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!!

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CuddlyHawk In reply to Thorned-Wolfara-Rose [2013-04-27 18:43:08 +0000 UTC]

always willing to help out a fellow Deviant (and Kicsterash fan)

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Thorned-Wolfara-Rose In reply to CuddlyHawk [2013-05-05 03:58:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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CuddlyHawk In reply to Thorned-Wolfara-Rose [2013-05-10 13:43:38 +0000 UTC]

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cartergirl531 [2012-02-11 17:25:43 +0000 UTC]

O.o

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chocol8te [2012-02-09 22:33:21 +0000 UTC]

omigosh

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AlineeKenji [2012-01-09 21:52:11 +0000 UTC]

Linda imagem eu so queria ver o filme

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lunargirl40 [2012-01-09 03:52:05 +0000 UTC]

Good fir yoy (everyone loves loop holes...except lawyers...)

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Mannlee [2011-11-06 05:14:20 +0000 UTC]

i like that you give him all four fingers. the show gives him three. Looks better this way. Magnificent

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LionshadeSC [2011-09-27 02:42:41 +0000 UTC]

*gasps* omg it looks amazing and it brought tears to my eyes X) i luv this fic so much and im on the last chapter!!!! ur so good at this awesome job!!!!

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xXNoraMarieXx [2011-09-24 16:38:13 +0000 UTC]


I saw the picture before reading the chapter, and I read what you got in italics up there, and I sniffled.

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ageantperry [2011-09-21 01:18:52 +0000 UTC]

ok on the chapter that goes with this picture i laughed so hard my mom thought i was choking XD classic times :3

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OAGM [2011-09-20 03:33:21 +0000 UTC]

amazing pic
there will be a second version?
yes, please

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KicsterAsh In reply to OAGM [2011-09-20 05:08:01 +0000 UTC]

no, there won't be.

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OAGM In reply to KicsterAsh [2011-09-20 14:04:43 +0000 UTC]

mmmmmmmm...
ok
you are the cartoonist

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FourSonic [2011-09-17 19:58:38 +0000 UTC]

Have you written the storylines yet?

Not trying to be pushy....

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KicsterAsh In reply to FourSonic [2011-09-17 22:12:59 +0000 UTC]

I assume you haven't been checking the story I've been posting...

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FourSonic In reply to KicsterAsh [2011-09-18 03:51:00 +0000 UTC]

Oh THAT ONE.

Now I feel like a blonde... lol

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eggcitable [2011-09-06 21:32:38 +0000 UTC]

not to be stupid but... wheres ferb?

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a deviant? HMM

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KicsterAsh In reply to eggcitable [2011-09-06 21:35:11 +0000 UTC]

-____-

You need to start reading the story to find out.

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eggcitable In reply to KicsterAsh [2011-09-06 21:37:42 +0000 UTC]

ah I'm lazy at reading but i figured he's somewhere with an injured arm.. or was that Phineas? man, I'm stupid

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animeforever01 In reply to eggcitable [2011-09-22 01:53:34 +0000 UTC]

that's ferb

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eggcitable In reply to animeforever01 [2011-09-22 12:35:46 +0000 UTC]

oh....


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why did it come to the day my pinky got cold??

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zelda8DD [2011-08-22 23:00:28 +0000 UTC]

You can really write! I love every single word!

Phineas looks so weak down there. I feel bad for them. Ferb, Phineas and Perry.

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MyFanFictionPicture [2011-08-22 13:03:53 +0000 UTC]

Cute!! I hope Ferb will come quickly!^^

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PhineasPhan1 [2011-08-21 18:13:35 +0000 UTC]

i hope everything turns out alright!

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Cimorine90 [2011-08-17 02:25:46 +0000 UTC]

HOORAY!

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lagoonblue123x [2011-08-13 13:22:22 +0000 UTC]

You are too right ash! Its your art, your imagination. If people dont like the storylines you write then the should not bother reading them. Your imagination and skill are some of your key features and everyone who follows you knows that and just about all of us only know you from DA and we think you, yor art AND your storylines are magical. SO THE HATERS CAN PLEASE THEMSELVES!

They are not worth your time.

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Phineasfanlover [2011-08-09 06:05:33 +0000 UTC]

Y do people come on DA just to rub their crap in other people's faces and make them sad!? All people want to do is become better artists and show others their work!

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PerrythePlatypusGirl [2011-08-08 18:04:39 +0000 UTC]

I actually like your story of Phineas an Ferb knowing Perry's secret much better.

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QuillArtist [2011-08-08 17:23:37 +0000 UTC]

Eh. Screw them. Fans are allowed to make their own worlds in the playground of each fandom. Your world happens to be one I enjoy.

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kiki5n [2011-08-08 08:22:24 +0000 UTC]

You don't have to give them a loophole, it's your stories for cryin' out loud your world YOUR decisions! You don't have to give them what they want! Not if you don't want to. I like to please people so I know how it feels to be where you are, well not as extreme as you are now but I can imagine. And you know what? They're "forcing" you to do something you may not want to do, so if you don't want to, you don't have to.

I'm not telling you not to write the story (cuz I love your stories ) I'm telling you that you will always have us to support you. We, who aren't afraid of stepping out of real life guidelines and entering the world of imagination and wonder, where all the guidelines and rules and theories and truths can bend as much as we want to.

So, if you want to write it (and if you find the time too), I promise I'll read it as soon as I can, cuz I will. But if you don't, I'm sure I won't be the only one supporting you .

And now: The pic and the story are soo ....!!!!! Gaah!!!! I can't even begin to describe their awesomeness I loove them

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willwork4cakemix [2011-08-08 03:17:10 +0000 UTC]

GRRRRR! I HATE stuped people that cant just....oh If you need me to kick some one vertualy consider them kicked!!! I cant whate for your loophole! YOUR STORYS ARE THE BOMB!!!

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Technowolf3000 In reply to willwork4cakemix [2011-09-20 19:42:32 +0000 UTC]

stupid* virtually* wait* stories*

sorry, just had to point that out ^^'

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