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Kieraux β Redlines needed
Published: 2011-07-28 16:24:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 555; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 6
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Second WIPChanged a lot, but somethings are still really off. Also I need a lot of help with the wings. :C
Redlines and critique needed!
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It does! :βD Thank you! β₯
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The right leg on the male (our right) looks awkward. It shouldnt be turned inward. Maybe at an angle inward, but not completely to the side
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Well, feet turned out are better balanced.
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Ooooh ;u; Thank you so much, Shin!
You are amazing at wings! :βD
teach me your ways
Thank you thank you thank you β₯
Helped so much.
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The dragon on the right, his left leg, the one that's outstretched, looks a little thin at the thigh. Like, how it's a straight line on the inner thigh, I'd round/show more line detail to show the muscle there.
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Yeah I see that, now. Thanks for pointing it out! c:
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Their poses are fantastic ! I really love the scene !
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I did some redlines I hope it is clear for you to see. [link] I hope you don't mind me doing this for you. After all you are a better artist than I am. This looks a lot better than the last one.
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I donβt mind at all! c: Thank you very much. It helps a lot. β₯β₯β₯
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^v^ I'm really happ I could help.
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Wish I could help you but Im no expert at anatomy or dragon ect . X3, If anything I think the right ones chest dosent connect to the legs right , But as I said I'm no expert x3 <3<3<3
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looking pretty interesting so far ^^ the only things I see that are weird are the wings shoulders.. check out for bird anatomy images ^^ [link] [link] also the jaw of the right character is looking too thin ^^ [link] (my god XD) [link] the shoulders ofmthe left character ans the lower belly of the right one ^^
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Ooh thanks for the refs! :βDIβm reaaaally bad at wings and I needed proper refs for the muscle structure. Iβm just too scared too look at them as Iβve gotten a lot of dissection photos. Thanks for getting some for me. xD Thanks for the critique too! β₯β₯β₯
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it's always a pleasure! ^^ ho and if you want to see amaising artist at anatomy, wings, elbows, etc... check her out!
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Oh, yes. I watch her! C: He anatomy is amazing.
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There was some weight distribution problems, and the leg on the right dragon, his back leg furthest from us, is a little off, so I redlined it so he'd be centered, weight-wise.
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Thanks for the redline! Iβve been getting a lot about that leg. xD Iβll definitely fix it.
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The foot on the dragon with wings is turned backwards. The foot closest to us I mean. The wing should have some finger joints and the back of the hand is not quite big enough. It looks like it is all fingers and no hand. Wings also have some curve to them even when in a half fold. It should curve so that the tips of the fingers curve towards the body. The joints are where the curve of the wing will happen. I hope that makes sense. This curve helps wings catch air when they fly The jaw on that same dragon is droped to low. I hope all of this helps.
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I didnβt flesh out he foot, but it facing the viewer. c: The point is where the middle toes are. Thank you so much for telling me about the wing! I didnβt even notice. o: Thanks so much for the critique!
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I see the foot now sorry about that. ^.^' Your welcome.
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It looks great! I really like the wings on the dragon. I can't find anything to critique!
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ahahaahahaha i think it looks great! lol hes lik rawr imma grab ur face nowz.
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Yeah, I can't really see anything that is off either....tails look a lot better though
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