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Um...I tried the link when i couldn't find pg 10 in your gallery, and apparently DA can't find it either, so is there any way you could repost pages 9 and 10? Or possibly give me instructions on where to find them? ( I could have easilly missed them, I'm very oblivious...) Either way I love this story, and I think this is one of the best galleries I've seen. Keep up the awesome work!
~Za
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aaaaaaa so awesome!!!!!!!! aa I wanna know it, what happen next? (aaa excited!) >o<
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Huh?
Im the first person to comment? 
I didnt comment earlier 'cause I thought you were flooded with comments!
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The plot thickens! oAo
Great English!! I'll be honest though, some of the verb forms aren't quite correct, but overall you did a great job!
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I love Riku's hair. So nice. Nice emotions and the expressions are just great.
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You're English is so much better!!! I know I said it before, but it's true! Congrats!!! ^_^
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Oh, I'm really enjoying this. It's a great idea. Keep going.
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oooh i like this story so far, though if you need any help with the grammar and sentence structuring of the English I'd be happy to help you
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Thanks a lot,If doesn't trouble you a lot ,can you tell me what's wrong with the sentence?
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nice! emotion and characters are done well, and good toning!
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