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Published: 2016-10-22 13:03:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 22786; Favourites: 394; Downloads: 153
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Finally, to finish this comic enjoy it(possibly have spelling errors)
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic is owned by Hasbro
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take a whole day to do this. I'm hungry, dream and think that I have not seen the light of the Sun
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Found a few grammar mistakes:
Panel 5 (Spikes line) it could just be changed to "At the base of your wing"
Panel 7 (Twilights line) could be changed to "Oh please Spike, if I had a scar, I think I would have known"
Panel 10 (Spikes line) "How could you not of known you had a scar there?"
hope this helps
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You try to give grammar advice, and screw up your grammar. 'How could you not of known' is a meaningless term. Properly, it's 'How could you not have known' or 'How could you not've known'. Technically that second one isn't correct, but it's used in speech quite a bit to abbreviate the first way.
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He was only trying to help and you had to become a grammar-nazi. Their's no reason for your hostility. Are you proud of yourself?
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The whole point is that the grammar is corrected. Now it is. Most people don't shrink and cry and claim 'hostility' just for a grammar correction - kind of like how the artist didn't reply to Withers whining about how mean he was being. Because he wasn't. It's just a simple correction, and there's no call for you complaining and throwing around the word 'nazi'.
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Here's some grammar suggestions:
1) Um, Twilight? May I ask you a question?
3) How did you get that scar?
5) That one! Under your wings!
7) Come on, Spike! If I had a scar there I would have noticed!
10) So you don't know how you got that scar.
11) I have no idea!
12) A long time ago...
13) Well, Twilight. Close your eyes for a surprise.
14) Oh, gosh! What could it be? Maybe a new book?
16) Did you bring what I asked?
17) Okay, we have about four seconds to do this and send her back with a flash of magic or something.
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Damn it people! I somehow didn't notice any issues reading this until you pointed out the grammar errors.
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Took me so long to read this in English. Funny though! xD
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That's about how I figure, though I never pictured Luna's involvement for something so sinister, but it's not unlikely. I suppose they must be donor wings.
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From the Rainbow Factory, perhaps?
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I don't believe they'd be able to fly if they were from there.
Besides, rainbows don't need wings. 
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Wow, she must have gotten from the surgery and insert magic to add nerves in them.
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Mind telling me what's the problem ? If you don't, don't come complain when I release the translations !
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Oh!... So that's how they did that.
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Although she flies well with them after practise That's some fine sewing.
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