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Published: 2017-02-12 19:41:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 1181; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 1
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Here we go!!I thought I'd just say that the paneling and art style may change a little as the comic progresses. Part of the reason I'm doing this is to improve as an artist and storyteller so you may notice a bit of a shift in the aesthetic presentation of the pages over the next few weeks till I find a style that works best for me. Anyway, thanks for reading
Prologue
Pg 1 | Pg 2 | Pg 3
Cover
Chapter 1
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Comments: 12
Honestly, this hooked me on the moment I even saw Celebi in the prologue
AND THAT TOTODILE IS SO ADORABLE THO
no, seriously, looking forward for more pages!! This looks really interesting so far!
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Heheheheh, that mischievous Totodile... >\.*./<
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Those are some sleek looking starters. I honestly don't know which one will be taken on a journey! Hide your lunches from the Totodile though!
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I love the way you draw them! Lots of personality here
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awesome page!!
I love totodile <3
do the people understand what the pokémon are saying??
ive seen many nuzlocke's tackle it differently!
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Thanks Sara!
Yup! In this comic most pokemon can talk to humans (using English, or whatever the most common language of their region is). Among themselves they usually just use pokespeak and the majority of psychic (and some ghost) pokemon can speak telepathically.
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np!!
aaa thats cool!!
could I maybe suggest a small thing though??
if ur open to it ofc!
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like, in this page it was kinda unclear to me if the pokémon were talking 'human' or their own pokélanguage,
so my suggestion would be like, differing the lettering from one another??
like when the pokémon are talking in poke-speak, the dialog would be in italics, or bold, or a different colour or something
just to make things easier to tell the difference between
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Oh that's a good idea. Yeah I've seen a couple other comics use that strategy. I can definitely implement that in later pages. Thanks
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not a problem, im glad ur open to suggestions!!
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