judy-boo [2011-05-06 18:59:34 +0000 UTC]

My Grandma had yellow roses at her wedding thanks for reminding me of her, years let memories fade <3

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FaeLuna13 [2011-05-02 01:58:06 +0000 UTC]

It's really great! I love it!

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3wyl [2011-04-30 13:25:39 +0000 UTC]

It's really interesting how you've got somewhat ordinary things there, but they mean so much, in a way. The way you've set it out is pretty cool and I like what the ellipses represent as well, it being... like lingering thoughts, in a sense, or lingering memories.

The italics makes the last line more interesting and ... yeah, it's a pretty cool piece.

Definitely quite poignant.

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BurningRoseBud [2011-04-28 17:15:16 +0000 UTC]

aww this is so sweet!

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