MynaOphelia [2011-06-12 13:23:30 +0000 UTC]

I love what you did with the word tripped; usually I don't like that kinda wordplay but you made it work, good job! ^.^

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vainya [2011-05-13 23:57:18 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow! I admire your use of white space. I am a fan of taking the page and running with it. It looked like you really enjoyed the prompt. I don't know if this is what the second person said or the first, but I feel bad for him and whatever he fell into.

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3wyl [2011-05-13 17:59:47 +0000 UTC]

I really like how you've displayed it visually there. I think it's pretty awesome how you've managed to convey the person's tone, feelings and thoughts through the last word and how that is formatted...

It really makes you wonder what he fell into, like. At the moment, I'm imagining dog turd, but it could be anything. o.O

Lovely concept.. quite humorous.

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angelStained [2011-05-13 01:58:29 +0000 UTC]

Perhaps you can vary the positions of the letters- eg. up then down instead of all the way down? A more interesting visual effect. Also, choose between CAPs or bold- both at the same time can get overwhelming.

Also, is it supposed to be 'TRIPPED' instead of 'TRIPPEP'? Italics might help too.

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