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Published: 2011-10-08 18:19:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 517; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 17
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Sorry for the messy lines... I originally intended for this to be just a sketch, and I kind of don't want to clean the lines atmGood to know that I can still draw despite not doing so for the last 2-3 months (literally).
C-C-C-C-COMBO BREAK
I want to draw non-Persona things!
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Comments: 6
mynameisZara [2011-10-18 04:59:56 +0000 UTC]
OMG!! I have been gone for a long time, but this is such an AWESOME THING TO COME BACK TO!! I totally loooove the colors! Awesome job KRING! 👍: 0 ⏩: 1
shiroi-kamaitachi [2011-10-10 12:31:36 +0000 UTC]
KRIIING~! This is so pretty *w*
Okay~ Criticism time >8D
Good stuff:
- soft colours sets up a good, gentle mood. I like staring at the skin and background colours.
- The colours are easy on the eyes.
- nice design. The character looks pretty
- eye colour & shading
- The lips look nice & delicate
Criticism:
- careful with the roundness (shape) of the head.
- Just a suggestion: lineart colour (solid black) looks a bit too strong in contrast to the rest of the soft colours. I suggest making it either dark grey, dark brown, or a very dark red
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KRINGaling In reply to shiroi-kamaitachi [2011-10-10 13:55:52 +0000 UTC]
OMG yeah I figured that the lineart's too strong! Alright, I'll change it when I have the time
And yeah, her head. I was planning on making her hairstyle look like Amy Winehouse's, but that plan screwed up the anatomy
Thanks so much for the feedback, Shiroi! It helps a lot! And I'm sorry I haven't checked your deviations yet, I'm still on my exams week. But I'm going to be free starting this Sunday, so I'll have time to look at everything that I missed here in dA <3
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shiroi-kamaitachi In reply to KRINGaling [2011-10-11 04:37:25 +0000 UTC]
lol Glad to help XD
And don't worry. I haven't submitted anything to dA forever DDD:
Will try submit something by this weekend T^T
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Marureenu [2011-10-08 19:22:46 +0000 UTC]
Ahh, KRING ART OMG YAY <333
I love this! It's so pretty! It's amazing, you didn't draw for so long but it still looks so great *___* I love her hairstyle so much, very beautiful! Especially the upper part is fantastic!
Her serious expression adds to her beauty <33 LOVE IT!
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