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Beyond the forest's edge, there was a steep cliff, and then the vast, calm sea. Celebi rarely ventured out of the forests in the summertime, the harsh sunlight was unpleasant to her. But this day was cloudy and a cooling breeze was blowing from the sea.
She followed the cliff for a while, spanning a large stretch of the peninsula's southern edge. On the narrow space between the sea and the mountains, humans had built a road for their wheeled vehicles. In this era, they called the peninsula Galida and liked to gather there mostly in the summer months. Celebi saw several vehicles on the road, but their steady movement didn't keep her attention for long. She floated up the mountainside, intrigued by the tracks a large Pokémon must have had left behind. As the slope of the mountain turned smoother, the mossy rocks were replaced by a richer vegetation, even with trees sprinkled here and there. Dedenne and other small Pokémon scurried through the grass. Sadly, the tracks ended on the blank rock of a small field of crevices. Celebi had really wanted to find out what Pokémon it was.

Taking a deep breath and shaking out her small wings, she looked around for other impressions to follow. She had just decided to turn back and watch the Dedenne for a bit, when she heard a cry, followed by a loud cracking noise. Quickly she spun around and flew into the direction the noise had come from.
At one of the wider crevices, she came to a halt. On its edge, there were loose rocks, and at the bottom of it, there lay a Skiddo, covered in more rocks and with its neck bent to an unnatural angle. It was dead.
Celebi softly landed next to the Skiddo and stroked its face. It still felt normal now, but very soon it wouldn't be warm anymore. The Pokémon was so tiny, it had still been young. So much potential wasted, so many beautiful moments unlived. This wasn't right. This shouldn't have happened.
She launched herself up, hid in a different crevice, and with a snap of two fingers, she travelled a few moments back in time. There was the Skiddo, wandering the rocky field.
"You shouldn't go past here, it's dangerous. The ground isn't stable."
The Skiddo blinked at her, of course it had never seen such an odd Pokémon before. But she must have seemed trustworthy enough, since it turned in a different direction, towards safer grounds.
Another good deed done.




Welcome to the official NOCT2 plot!
Which I am completely responsible for. So I'm really nervous now haha ;w;
It's going to be pretty wild. Maybe you can already tell in which direction this is going.
There will be 3 more Prologue parts, I'll post them as I finish the illustrations. They were going to be in greyscale but I have no idea how to do greyscale. So everyone wins. It's also nice to know that I could probably paint a decent landscape if I put some time into it. (This looks so nice in the thumbnail ahahaha) xD

Please don't critique the writing, English isn't my native language. Edited by CyMoahk , so you don't get stabbed in the eye by gross grammar violations~

Stay tuned for the parts in which actual things happen. Your characters are going to suffer, and now that I know them I feel a little bad.
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Comments: 56

Krisantyne In reply to ??? [2015-02-12 12:23:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! ;u;

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Jenniej92 [2015-02-08 12:08:33 +0000 UTC]

this is lovely done! the colors are great, well done

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Krisantyne In reply to Jenniej92 [2015-02-08 14:58:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! >w<

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Llaren [2015-02-07 14:53:17 +0000 UTC]

Ahh, such a lovely landscape!
I really like your painting style, it looks so natural The rocks and the flora blend very nice in this scene and I like how the ocean blends into the sky <3
Despite the things that might happen there, I absolutely would visit this place for vacation x)

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Krisantyne In reply to Llaren [2015-02-07 22:40:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for the detailed comment!
It is a popular vacation spot! And most of the time, the tourists survive. : D

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mapsal313 [2015-02-06 16:51:01 +0000 UTC]

First of all, the illustration is so beautiful! Secondly, my brain is too swamped in Maths to be able to see where this is going, but I enjoyed reading it.

I hope that Celebi won't turn out as creepy as Jirachi...

Well, I shall go back to studying Maths now.

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Krisantyne In reply to mapsal313 [2015-02-06 20:30:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!! The only thing I anticipated people would take from this was "time shenanigans", there's not enough information to go deeper. xP

Nah, this time the little legendary is a cute innocent bby : D But I accidentally recycled other things. You will see soon. xD

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mapsal313 In reply to Krisantyne [2015-02-08 20:51:33 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.
Oh yeah, that should have been obvious. But, as it has been proven, the obvious is often the last thing that comes to mind.




Still, I hope Celebi won't screw up the stable time loops and ending up with dead Daves and a doomed timeline - whoops, that's Homestuck. But yeah, I hope it won't cause serious trouble - oh, who am I kidding it's a story written by you - shit will happen, in the most heartbreaking way.

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Krisantyne In reply to mapsal313 [2015-02-09 18:23:14 +0000 UTC]

I really appreciate your trust! Everything will be horrible! <3

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Miss-Arcadia [2015-02-05 02:13:58 +0000 UTC]

Ooooooh! I'm interested to see where this is going~

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Krisantyne In reply to Miss-Arcadia [2015-02-05 18:25:44 +0000 UTC]

Hehe. Soooooon~

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Pandapool [2015-02-04 15:48:46 +0000 UTC]

Are all our characters going to die and then Celebi resurrects them to fight in it's battle royal style tournament to pay off our debt? Because if so I'm all in.

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Krisantyne In reply to Pandapool [2015-02-04 22:01:50 +0000 UTC]

Not exactly. I think that should become the plot for next time haha. : D

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Pandapool In reply to Krisantyne [2015-02-04 23:21:35 +0000 UTC]

Hah, yes! That would be amazing! 

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DuchessLunaire [2015-02-04 11:49:07 +0000 UTC]

hffhdskhf hnngggg I have to wait for 3 more parts ;A; how long do you intend to kill me XD (I am always dying for plots). 
None the less it looks great and that first part is a GREAT Beginning and teach me those backgrounds 0m0 I needz to learn!

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Krisantyne In reply to DuchessLunaire [2015-02-04 15:00:28 +0000 UTC]

I committed myself to get these done by the 13th. Hopefully it will be faster. ;A;
Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far! And the key to backgrounds is references, references and references. You will cry because it doesn't end up looking like in the photo, but on its own it will look great, I promise. <3

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DuchessLunaire In reply to Krisantyne [2015-02-04 20:03:16 +0000 UTC]

I shall try to await patiently although hngg plots man.. they shall be the death of me once XD I just love to see what someone can come up with there always so creative!. 
...
references... my nemesis...
XD they do indeed never look like it haha

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Krisantyne In reply to DuchessLunaire [2015-02-05 18:40:51 +0000 UTC]

Awww! >w< It's nice to know the time frame in which a story will be completed for once, isn't it? This tournament has due dates, unlike everyone's Nuzlockes. :'D

References will never love you (the exact one you need is always hiding), but you can be better than them and embrace them! uwu

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DuchessLunaire In reply to Krisantyne [2015-02-06 07:41:18 +0000 UTC]

yes it is nice to know haha Im just really curious to the plot hihi.

well time to create a work relationship with my references then XDD

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hexblading [2015-02-04 05:00:00 +0000 UTC]

GO ON KRIS
DO A BETTER JOB WITH CELEBI THAN I DID <3

THE HYPE AAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
THAT SCENERY, AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

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Krisantyne In reply to hexblading [2015-02-04 14:52:05 +0000 UTC]

IF BY "DO A BETTER JOB" YOU MEAN "TORTURE HER", THAT CAN BE ARRANGED.

THANK YOUUUUUUUUUUU <333

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Horodragon [2015-02-04 03:54:34 +0000 UTC]

(/owo)/ Begin the hype. \(owo\)

That is also some glorious landscape art. Teach me how to nature. *bows*

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Krisantyne In reply to Horodragon [2015-02-04 14:51:03 +0000 UTC]

(\owo)\ The hype has arrived. /(owo/)

Ahhh thank you! >w< And I don't know what to tell you, your backgrounds look hella fine haha

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NeonNeoz [2015-02-04 03:36:10 +0000 UTC]

Ura~ his pic is amazing OwO

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Krisantyne In reply to NeonNeoz [2015-02-04 14:31:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!

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NeonNeoz In reply to Krisantyne [2015-02-04 23:20:10 +0000 UTC]

Yush your welcome >w<

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DMKryl [2015-02-04 03:15:44 +0000 UTC]

When you told me that you were busy with another projects I never thought you'll be taking slowly the powah of the nuzlocke groups in DA.
I, for one, welcome our new kris overlords.. or is overlady... mmmm, I think if you keep this way I'm going to catch you in nuz story huiehuehueheuheuhue 

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Krisantyne In reply to DMKryl [2015-02-04 11:31:39 +0000 UTC]

I told you right from the start of your comic that you're going to catch up. : D
Let me check when I started on the current Nuzlocke page... 23th November. That's a pretty normal production time, especially looking at ALL THE OTHER PROJECTS OH MY GOD. Now if there hadn't been the 3 months before in which I couldn't work on it all, that would be great. xD

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TruffleButter [2015-02-04 01:34:59 +0000 UTC]

OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD THERE IS NO ONE MORE EXCITED THAN TRUFFLE FOR THIS

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Krisantyne In reply to TruffleButter [2015-02-04 11:26:23 +0000 UTC]

THE TRUFFLE HAS BEEN UNLEASHED
WHICH IS GOING TO BE DANGEROUS BUT ALSO REALLY FUN

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kjo1993 [2015-02-04 01:05:04 +0000 UTC]

Oooh pretty

Hehe i've never noticed your grammer being off, i think you are exaggerating :3

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Krisantyne In reply to kjo1993 [2015-02-04 11:23:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! <3

Heh, it's just that I haven't had anyone proofread my English in years, so I'm convinced that some completely wrong rules have cemented themselves in my brain. But if you say there isn't anything striking, I'm happy. : D

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isaleha [2015-02-04 00:48:57 +0000 UTC]

I'm too excited that my characters are going to suffer. B)

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Krisantyne In reply to isaleha [2015-02-04 11:17:42 +0000 UTC]

Welcome to hell! <3 And your poor characters are so cute, too...

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Mexicoisfun [2015-02-03 23:58:27 +0000 UTC]

Wow this is my first time entering NOCT but I'll try my best to win!

I love the prologue sounds amazing and it went well with the picture!

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Krisantyne In reply to Mexicoisfun [2015-02-04 11:02:40 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot! >w< And I wish you the best of luck in the tournament!

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YoshiofRedemption [2015-02-03 23:48:46 +0000 UTC]

This is awesome!

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Krisantyne In reply to YoshiofRedemption [2015-02-04 11:02:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! : D

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YoshiofRedemption In reply to Krisantyne [2015-02-04 21:10:53 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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Dragnia [2015-02-03 23:45:03 +0000 UTC]

Ok hearing that you're the one writing the plot and reading this first part |D

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Dear god I'm getting even more and more excited for this NOCT than before \*^*/ The drawing is absolutely beautiful, by the way, my goodness. Landscape images such as this always make me shiver a bit :'D You captured it so well, I feel. I'm glad we get to see these in color >v< I have no idea how to work in grayscale, either |'D I tend to just go into color then use a grayscale filter 8'D I await eagerly! Can't wait to see what's coming up and where this is all going \*v*/

May the feels begin >v>

I swear we're all just a bunch of sadomasochists.

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Krisantyne In reply to Dragnia [2015-02-04 11:01:56 +0000 UTC]


Thank you, I hope the rest of these live up to everyone's expectations. :'D

I really enjoy seeing landscape paintings, too. But I understand why people don't do them often. At this scale, they're boring as fuck to make. Especially the rocks. They would need so much finer detail to look good. xD
I mean, I know the theory about greyscale painting; the background should be light and the nearer objects get progressively darker, but I don't see how the details would be less work than in full color?? So I might as well have everything in full color.

Hahahahaha

Yes, that's the whole point. And I'm a huge enabler.

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Dragnia In reply to Krisantyne [2015-02-07 04:11:32 +0000 UTC]

definitely by far living up to expectations *^*

Pffft--Sounds like quite the struggle x'D At least they're nice to look at? 8'D

That's how I view it ovo; It's the range of greys to be used that tend to throw me off. It's just...odd >o>;;

slowly you guys behind NOCT are just ending us XD
just ending us all XD

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Krisantyne In reply to Dragnia [2015-02-07 11:31:20 +0000 UTC]

Yayyyyy

Yes it's worth it haha. : D

Glad to be doing my job right ouo

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altimis [2015-02-03 23:19:45 +0000 UTC]

The picture is cheerfully colored, and I enjoy the soft features of the landscape.
I just keep thinking that if we gave Celebi (as depcited in this picture) a bow, we'd find ourselves Pokemon's Cupid.

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Krisantyne In reply to altimis [2015-02-04 10:45:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! <3
Ahh so that's what this pose kept reminding me of. :'D (It's the same as in the Gen 6 backsprite.)

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NikkyDash [2015-02-03 22:55:16 +0000 UTC]

IF THIS IS ANOTHER TIME TRAVEL PLOT IM GONNA S C R E A M

Kris I trust you 100%. You're a brilliant storyteller so this is only everything I've ever wanted. <3333

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Krisantyne In reply to NikkyDash [2015-02-03 23:02:29 +0000 UTC]

> SWEATS NERVOUSLY
NO WAIT IT ISN'T ACTUALLY
THERE ARE OTHER KINDS OF TIME SHENANIGANS TO BE HAD

Thank you, that is very uplifting. <3333 It's just the first time that the contentment of many people depends on me ahaha

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NikkyDash In reply to Krisantyne [2015-02-03 23:04:32 +0000 UTC]

THROWBACK TO OLD NOCT WITH FERALIGATR JESUS POPPING OUT OF THE TIME HOLE
THAT'S WHY YOU MADE AN UPDATED HOLLY RIGHT

If you're pissing us off, then it's working. Please make us suffer. That's the point of the death tournament that we were all stupid enough to join. Right?

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Krisantyne In reply to NikkyDash [2015-02-03 23:09:33 +0000 UTC]

ACTUALLY, I WOULD RATHER SET MYSELF ON FIRE

Good good. The situation is going to be very devastating. c:

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Dylanrockin2122 [2015-02-03 22:52:58 +0000 UTC]

It looks so amazing this remind me of Seabreak Path from my Pokemon Game actually ;D Except without the driveable roads and whatnot XD

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