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Published: 2012-05-18 22:59:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 5317; Favourites: 69; Downloads: 33
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Al fin otra página, a quienes esperan por mi comic perdón por la tardanza
D: No es posible.
MALCHIOR: Por supuesto que lo es querida, ahora...
MALCHIOR: MUERE!
MALCHIOR: Es una lástima pero tengo que matarte, en verdad eres una joven muy hermosa y tu escencia es maravillosa, pero si me dices tu nombre prometo hacer tu muerte menos dolorosa.
D: Nunca... esa fue la última vez que me lastimas Malchior.
Raven Forever!Finally another page from the comic, to everyone who waits for it I'm sorry to be so late
Is time for a battle to start!
TT:UF Chapter 02.2-12
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Comments: 21
Thank you, I'll try to submit as soon as I finish the page
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Thank you! I will as soon as possible
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This, once again proves how slow I am.
Nice page, take your time doing the next.
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It doesn't matter how long it takes, I'm really want you took the time to comment
Thank you, I'll try my best.
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I've just read the entire thing and i love it, i can't wait for more
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Thank you, glad you like it!
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Your art is great and your story is interesting, but I'm really waiting for a return to the present.
I like the present characters but have no idea who these lot are, so it's pretty hard to not get bored :/
That's the problem with OCs, right? Nobody knows them. If they don't start off with really entertaining characteristics they become dull.
And this story is far from humorous - it's based on some serious event that created a timeline where the BoE rule the world. It has a very serious atmosphere.
Oh, WAIT a minute. Most of these AREN'T OCs. In fact the only I've seen so far is D.
Well, either way, they aren't showing the humorous characteristics they did in the show. So they're just not sticking.
Or maybe it's because I've seen a fancomic with a story EXTREMELY similar to this before?
Okay, that's MY opinion. XD Good job on the comic so far. Looking forward to the next part - will be putting you on watch.
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Thanks for al your comments.
The return to the present will be after we finish with what's happening in the future because is important for the rest of the story, so please bear with me
Well I can't make the characters humorous like in the show, at least not now with what's happening.
I don't know about any fancomic similar to mine, this comic is based in a fic (in spanish)that I wrote a few years ago.
Thanks again, I'll try to submit soon another page.
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Oh, I'm not implying you copied anyone ^^
It's just that one of my favourite artists in this website did a Dojinshi fancomic of Dragonball Z which started off in a future where everyone was dying from some odd threat and the daughter of Goten went to the past to try and change the future.
Trunks pretty much played the role Cyborg did here.
(They never got further than a landscape view of the character first entering the past before they shut down their website)
Do you know much about Dragonball by the way?
And... if I knew spanish I could have found out the ending to this story?
DAMN. I DON'T KNOW SPANISH.
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I see, hopeful I'll draw the comic until the end.
Well, I watched all Dragon Ball (Z and GT too)
Ah yes, the sroty in spanish is complete XD
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Someone's gonna pay for that smack. I do hope Raven goes berserk on that dragon
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Indeed, D is not going to let that dragon to keep hurting her!
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Denada ^^
Subi otra pag de mi comic,solo aviso .3. 
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