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Well this is a photo of my landscape project for my drawing class..Related content
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draze [2005-01-24 23:23:31 +0000 UTC]
I think you should add some thing to your sky. I realize that you can't do something to the entire sky because of the beautiful detail you put into your tree, but maybe some cloud formations or something on the right side?
Also, I think you need something just past your "horizon." You have a one-point-perspective thing going right now, and generally speaking, the point is laying on the horizon very far off. Your point is sitting somewhere right under that center moon. Maybe a few fragments of the land popping up to give th illusion that the ground has broken away and fallen leavinf remnants and also fulfills the perspective thing you have going for yourself.
Just my two cents.
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kt4d In reply to draze [2005-01-24 23:29:31 +0000 UTC]
Well thanks very much for your two cents !
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draze In reply to kt4d [2005-01-24 23:31:42 +0000 UTC]
i DO want to be an art teacher one day, so I enjoy making constructive comments when I can
Good luck with future projects!
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kt4d In reply to draze [2005-01-25 01:40:13 +0000 UTC]
Haha i know what you mean , becasue i would like to do the same one day.
Thank-you for wishing me luck .
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