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I want to retreat into you,And hide inside the rain.
Because the world is going skewed
And those things keep me sane.
For one day, what would be the cost
To once again feel whole?
To trade in ever too much loss
For pieces of my soul?
Alas, it has been days and weeks--
Not long and yet too much--
Since I could find and search and seek
The solace of your touch.
And until you've arrived again,
My soul will just have to pretend.
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I feel ya bro, we can do sonnets but they just aren't as entertaining as old favorite such as this: [link] oh those middle school days
you've made me want to write poetry again, dear. love this <3
...also I love that we still have Darien quotes as our signatures after all this time <333
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I still love that poem!! wooooo!!!
Glad you like it! <3 *insert warm fuzzy feelings here*
...hey! you are a seven hour drive from me! just thought i'd check the old mapquest gods.
You should totally wax poetical on us
and yes, our sigs are awesome.
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haha yeah it's a classic. also check this one out, I don't think I ever sent it to you and it's on my new account: [link]
WARM FUZZY FEELINGS, WE ARE OVERWHELMED BY THEM <33
yeah I figured maybe we could meet halfway at becca's school or something! idk I don't have a car with me right now xD
actually instead of poetry I started drawing again which is just as good. More stuff to populate my new account!
I saw this guy in a Russian movie who looked kind of like a cross between Vinny and RDJ. Needless to say, he was GOOD LOOKIN' and it was also kind of creepy
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yay for population of new accounts!! or something...
love the new poem btw.
WARM FUZZIES!!!
....that would be creepy. and attractive. and creepy.
we totally should meet at dayton XDD I don't know how, but we should.
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i like the rhyme of it. and the poignant tone towards the end. the aching hollow feeling of missing someone
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definitely feeling that feeling a lot lately 
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what are you talking about you can't write anything fixed? This is wonderful! I enjoy this very much. I understand where you're coming from though. It took me awhile to like the fixed things I wrote, but keep 'em coming and you'll start to see the beauty in them, never fear!
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Thank youuuuuu! 
It was an interesting challange. May try it again sometime, when I have some real inspiration..... we'll see.
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If I'm not mistaken, this is about a special someone. You don't need anymore inspiration than that, my dear!
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I know 
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Don't worry darling, you'll find more inspiration eventually. Your heart just has to get used to the fact that you're separated. Once it does, the inspiration will come back.
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hahahahaha you can too. This is a fine sonnet! Better than some of mine, I can tell you that! I love your fixed pieces. You should write more of them.
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<3 oh why thank you becca! although, i must say, it is so much easier to just write what comes into my head than to sit there going..... okay..... this is a good first line..... what rhymes with it, and what can i stick between them that would make sense..... last bit took me ages!
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hahahahaha you are just like Anne in that respect. For some reason, unstructured poems seem unfinished to me... like blobs of ideas that has no form or function. Amoebas of thought, not yet complete enough to be called "creativity". For some reason, that bugs me. XD idk. I like reading unstructured poems, but I just can't write them without it nagging at me.
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Not that way for me!! I still have to toil over my unstructured poetry every now and then, but for the most part it really is spitting words on a page for me. Taking an excess of emotion and draining it.
Good thing you write some amazing structured poetry
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hahahahaha it's weird how differently people write. I love it. I love writing! yaaaaay!
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