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The tears that slip down my faceAre all spent on you
The hours I spend alone in the dark
Are spent allΒ Β for you
The questions I ask and never get answered
Are all brought by you
You said you want me to be happy
But why aren't you
How can I be happy
Without you?
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Comments: 32
ktleeper In reply to tophrocks88 [2012-02-29 01:03:11 +0000 UTC]
Thanks Jessica. I didn't think that it was that good, but okay ^_^
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ktleeper In reply to xXDeathVineXx [2012-01-24 00:47:11 +0000 UTC]
lol ^_^ So, are you okay with me posting the thing that I made for you, even though it didn't turn out so well?
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xXDeathVineXx In reply to ktleeper [2012-01-24 00:49:12 +0000 UTC]
of coarse! ^_^ I'd love to see it, and I'm sure it looks awesome
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ktleeper In reply to xXDeathVineXx [2012-01-24 00:51:49 +0000 UTC]
I don't know, you'll have to be the judge of that
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ktleeper In reply to xXDeathVineXx [2012-01-24 01:09:31 +0000 UTC]
Yep, told you it wasn't that good. It doesn't look anything like you. . .
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ktleeper In reply to xXDeathVineXx [2012-01-24 01:12:09 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the extra boost of confidence Sara ^_^ So, been working on any pieces lately?
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xXDeathVineXx In reply to ktleeper [2012-01-24 22:49:12 +0000 UTC]
=S not really, my friend wants me to try and draw some of the HU boys so I'm gonna try to start that. OH! and chapter 2 should be done by saturday ^_^
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ktleeper In reply to xXDeathVineXx [2012-01-24 23:51:14 +0000 UTC]
Yay! ^_^ I still can't wait I hope that your drawing goes well, wich I'm shure that it will
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xXDeathVineXx In reply to ktleeper [2012-01-26 21:05:53 +0000 UTC]
lol I almost forgot about that! ^_^
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ktleeper In reply to xXDeathVineXx [2012-01-26 21:15:25 +0000 UTC]
lol, isn't it wonderful ^_^ It makes me so happy
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ktleeper In reply to xXDeathVineXx [2012-01-26 21:31:12 +0000 UTC]
lol, I almost forgot about him to, he's pretty cute ^_^
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xXDeathVineXx In reply to ktleeper [2012-01-26 21:50:53 +0000 UTC]
lol ^_^ you know there are some pretty weird emotes, for example, this little guy is pretty....... weird to say the least ===>
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ktleeper In reply to xXDeathVineXx [2012-01-26 21:55:57 +0000 UTC]
That he is, though I don't think any weirder than this guy
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xXDeathVineXx In reply to ktleeper [2012-01-26 22:02:56 +0000 UTC]
O_O..........................
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ktleeper In reply to xXDeathVineXx [2012-01-26 22:06:36 +0000 UTC]
..... I really don't know how to respond to that one... O_o ^_^
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xXDeathVineXx In reply to ktleeper [2012-01-26 22:13:12 +0000 UTC]
o.o hmmmmmm........
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ktleeper In reply to xXDeathVineXx [2012-01-26 22:17:02 +0000 UTC]
I actually kinda like that guy ^_^
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JMDUBOSE [2012-01-23 22:13:53 +0000 UTC]
Consider adding punctuation, such as commas and double meaning hyphens but otherwise a good poem
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ktleeper In reply to JMDUBOSE [2012-01-23 22:26:41 +0000 UTC]
Oh yeah, sorry about that. I've never really understood how to use punctuation in poems Thank you for commenting though, I appreciate it
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JMDUBOSE In reply to ktleeper [2012-01-23 22:28:02 +0000 UTC]
haha it's good i really like it you have potential.
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ktleeper In reply to JMDUBOSE [2012-01-23 23:32:23 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. I've never actually written poetry before, this was my first time. Do you write it often?
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ktleeper In reply to JMDUBOSE [2012-01-24 00:12:15 +0000 UTC]
Cool Do you think mabey you could give me some tips?
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JMDUBOSE In reply to ktleeper [2012-01-24 00:14:58 +0000 UTC]
yush :3 what don't you get?
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ktleeper In reply to JMDUBOSE [2012-01-24 00:17:56 +0000 UTC]
Well, as I said before, the punctuation has always confused me, and I was also wondering if all poetry always has to come straight from your emotions. . .
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