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KuriousKitty — Dawn
Published: 2005-11-30 23:36:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 427; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 6
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Description As you rub the night
Out of your eyes
Late morning thoughts
Turn back
To plastic desires

Like a drug
It seduces
With the promise
Of escape

And you always succumb
To be disconnected
From the world
In which I dwell

Flesh and blood
Always waiting
A barrier
In your silly little game
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Comments: 5

Blizz-Kid [2005-12-01 03:09:25 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I really like this poem....the words you use are very effective.

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KuriousKitty In reply to Blizz-Kid [2005-12-01 03:15:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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SickLullabies [2005-12-01 02:47:38 +0000 UTC]

"And you always succumb
To be disconnected
From the world"

That's genius. I really feel that line.

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KuriousKitty In reply to SickLullabies [2005-12-01 03:14:04 +0000 UTC]

thank you. I'm glad.

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SickLullabies In reply to KuriousKitty [2005-12-01 03:39:30 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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