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Published: 2005-09-10 14:22:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 153; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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Darkness is the absence of lightBut even with the light
I'm in the shade with darkness
Blinding, beautiful darkness
Love is the absence of hate
But even with all this love
I'm surrounded with hatred
Horrible, gut-wrenching hatred
Laughter is the absence of depression
But even with all my laughter
I'm slowly drowning in my own sorrow
Tear-filled, self-loathing depression
Peace is the absence of war
But even with the war
I'm in my false little world of peace
Glorious, although false, peace
Death is the absence of life
But even though I'm alive, I feel dead
I'm slowly deteriorating and fading away
Floating, falling, forever gone
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Comments: 55
Cattyonines [2006-01-02 17:00:03 +0000 UTC]
I love it!
I especially like the last line of each stanza, taking a emotive subject and decribing it in as little words yet very strongly.
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gothictweetybird11 [2005-10-31 18:15:43 +0000 UTC]
I really like it alot. itz really good. Havent seen much of your work but that makes me wanna see more lol good job!! w00t!
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Kyleniebob In reply to gothictweetybird11 [2005-11-01 02:12:22 +0000 UTC]
xD Thankees!! I'm glad to see you're on Deviant Art more now.
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gothictweetybird11 In reply to Kyleniebob [2005-11-08 01:00:40 +0000 UTC]
i became more interested sence heather has been puting more of my stuff on and teaching me how to put stuff on!
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gothictweetybird11 In reply to gothictweetybird11 [2005-11-26 17:36:00 +0000 UTC]
lol very much so.
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Kyleniebob In reply to gothictweetybird11 [2005-11-11 03:39:52 +0000 UTC]
yay! (it took her forever, it seems, to learn)
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Giver [2005-09-14 22:36:02 +0000 UTC]
Very very cool. ^ ^ I love the way that you put the fake peace in a world of war. That's really true for so many people, including myself I guess. Really cool...And the absence of things were great. ^ ^v
I do think that 'Blah is the absence of blah' was a little too long for something to repeat, though.
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Kyleniebob In reply to ragdollmystery [2005-09-13 02:12:06 +0000 UTC]
You said "like me" and I didn't know what you meant.
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ragdollmystery In reply to Kyleniebob [2005-09-13 10:45:40 +0000 UTC]
no i wrote me like! haha meaning i like it! gosh you douch! hahaha
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Kyleniebob In reply to ragdollmystery [2005-09-13 11:07:14 +0000 UTC]
Oh! lol. Thankees! xDD (for liking it...not for calling me a DOUCHE hehehee...you spelled it wrong.)
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ragdollmystery In reply to Kyleniebob [2005-09-13 19:29:23 +0000 UTC]
the last one i gave you is kick ass cuz it has emoticons in it!
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Kyleniebob In reply to ragdollmystery [2005-09-13 21:40:57 +0000 UTC]
Don't get on DevArt much, do you?
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ragdollmystery In reply to Kyleniebob [2005-09-14 03:09:55 +0000 UTC]
well its like this.......THEY ARE AMUSING....and i just pulled out a tooth!
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ragdollmystery In reply to Kyleniebob [2005-09-14 10:47:06 +0000 UTC]
yeah im fine i love the feeling of a lost tooth.....i have 3 more babyteeth to do!
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ragdollmystery In reply to Kyleniebob [2005-09-15 00:32:55 +0000 UTC]
yes i am serious! hahaha what you think i would make that up?
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Kyleniebob In reply to ragdollmystery [2005-09-15 00:43:15 +0000 UTC]
That's weird...(to me.)
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ragdollmystery In reply to Kyleniebob [2005-09-15 12:43:44 +0000 UTC]
yeah it weird all around hahaha!
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ragdollmystery In reply to Kyleniebob [2005-09-16 01:35:04 +0000 UTC]
what happy that you were right about something?
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Kyleniebob In reply to ragdollmystery [2005-09-16 02:26:01 +0000 UTC]
I was right about something?
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ragdollmystery In reply to Kyleniebob [2005-11-11 16:13:57 +0000 UTC]
yes you were! and dont worry about obie and those jack ass' they are all just ass'
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Kyleniebob In reply to ragdollmystery [2005-11-12 05:05:31 +0000 UTC]
I'm still confused...but...whatever...
And I don't worry about Kyle...because he's an asshole...and I tend to ignore them and make myself as weird as I can around them...then outsmart them....I'm good at it.
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ragdollmystery In reply to Kyleniebob [2005-11-13 02:11:24 +0000 UTC]
thats good cuz obie is def. a freaking asshole!
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ragdollmystery In reply to Kyleniebob [2005-09-13 19:27:02 +0000 UTC]
all i am missing is an E so dont even dare! haha plus i said i liked it and you didnt even notice till i had to spell it out in little letters to ya!
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Kyleniebob In reply to ragdollmystery [2005-09-13 21:39:53 +0000 UTC]
Well I got dyslexic and read it weird...>.< Suhrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeehhhhhhhhhhh@!!
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ragdollmystery In reply to Kyleniebob [2005-09-14 03:10:24 +0000 UTC]
hahahs ure you are! you are not sorry (by the way thats how you spell it!) HAHAHAHAHAHA
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ragdollmystery In reply to Kyleniebob [2005-09-14 10:47:55 +0000 UTC]
sorry....you spell it like that....S.O.R.R.Y. hahahahahasorry i just feel like being a butthead today
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ragdollmystery In reply to Kyleniebob [2005-09-15 00:33:35 +0000 UTC]
haha all you can do is smile!
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ragdollmystery In reply to Kyleniebob [2005-09-15 12:44:10 +0000 UTC]
of course thats all you can do is smile! GOSH!
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ragdollmystery In reply to Kyleniebob [2005-09-16 01:35:53 +0000 UTC]
yes you are....and im good at making guys wet their pants!
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