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The books said the transformation was prolonged and extremely painful. But the reality of the situation was a slight tingling sensation brought on by the sudden change in body.
Twilight remembered what Princess Celestia said to her earlier, "The Third Task, you see, is so very different than the others. In essence you have done all of the heavy lifting to get here. For the last trial, you must simply survive the transformation."
"What? What is so bad about this?" Twilight outraged and turned around to ask her mentor after she finished channeling the spell.
Princess Celestia's head sank down, her eyes narrowed and looked away.
"Twilight, please, the spell has only begun to take hold..."
"But, I feel fine! I feel..."
Twilight fell down, her bones breaking and stretching inside her, and suddenly she realized what it was Celestia had been referring to earlier, "The transformation into an Alicorn will change you completely and wholly--it is unforgiving, and I am sure you can see how different in body we are. Perhaps you should pass out from pain, so that you musn't endure it for long, but when the spell reaches your heart, it is only the tiniest of chances that it will beat again as yours and it will be luck if it even beats again at all."
Princess Celestia whispered in Twilight's ear, "Be still, and remember your friends and that this is the only way you can save them. This was what you wanted--there is no other way."
"She has already lost consciousness, sister," said Luna.
"I know."
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Comments: 10
AndytheB-Artist [2012-05-03 17:46:29 +0000 UTC]
My idea would be that not only would Twilight have to get those stones, she'd first have to figure out the mystery of "Tau Sunflare" (spoiler: it's an anagram for Lauren Faust). I didn't think much of the transformation itself, I thought the last we'd see of Twilight Sparkle before becoming royalty was that the door that has Celestia's sun on the front, would now have Twilight's uhhhh.... Cutie mark on the front (how would you describe Twilight Sparkle's cutie mark?)
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masterchief2000 [2012-04-17 19:38:17 +0000 UTC]
logan went throught the exact same suffering when he became wolverine, the animantium injection was painfull beyond words.
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RGB64 [2012-04-08 04:38:42 +0000 UTC]
Let me tell you something. Alicorns remind me of Gold Chocobos, except they're ponies.
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maekern [2012-02-22 15:33:18 +0000 UTC]
I like the composition. The two princesses standing next to Twilight evoke a more traditional pose of a pegasus or bird facing the viewer with wings spread.
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eyecreate89 [2012-02-19 16:10:51 +0000 UTC]
These are all great pictures and descriptions. I could see this being a good story if expanded upon.
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IEatPie888 [2012-02-19 15:57:46 +0000 UTC]
What I need now is the epic-pose result of this transformation.
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