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"Spike, I have one last favor to ask you. Please take a letter:"
Spike was trying to wipe his eyes, his beloved Twilight Sparkle standing before him, transformed. His hands shaking, but he slowly dictated her words.
"My Dearest Friends,
It's been too long since I left you on the cliff side where we faced the demon God Morgalle. We all knew what we were getting into with the eternal sleep spell, but when I had finished the cast--I saw you all before me frozen in time.
I tried everything. For days, weeks, and years--to no avail. I spent all of my free time paging through the deepest archives in the Canterlot Library, until I read a very particular passage in a tome on Alicorns. The chapter was called "Blood Magic".
I knew immediately that this was what I needed: "An alicorn may, at the heart of their deepest wishes, cast a spell with their last drop of blood so powerful that it can even bring the dead back to life."
I cannot live knowing what you have sacrificed for all of Equestria and know that you are so close, and yet, so far away.
My greatest regret is that I will not be able to see you all smile again, and I can only hope that you will find some way to forgive my eternal selfishness.
Your dearest and most faithful friend,
Twilight"
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This is the end of this short little series--going out with a quiet whimper. I hope that its not *too* somber!
If anyone is inclined, please let me know what you think--of both this particular piece and the rest of the series as well, I want to improve and I need your critiques to do it. It's totally appreciated!
Technically speaking, I think Blood Magic is definitely the most complex and successful, but personally, I really liked the way that Too Soon turned out.
I hope everyone enjoyed the short series! I'm having a ton fun improving my artistic abilities and can't wait to start really ramping up my quality.
Edit - Why the long face edition: Fixed a graphical error having to do with my brain and the way it outputs hairlines.
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Comments: 25
Hydrazilla98 [2013-08-17 00:23:35 +0000 UTC]
This isn't my type of tradegy art with Twilight.
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Hydrazilla98 In reply to KyojiOgami [2013-08-20 05:41:00 +0000 UTC]
Don't get me wrong, the image is pretty
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Fallen12345 [2012-12-10 21:56:25 +0000 UTC]
U mind if i make this into fan fic? o3o like, add more details and such?? o3o i'll give u credit.
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AndytheB-Artist [2012-05-22 17:16:48 +0000 UTC]
Twilight Sparkle made it to godhood and then lets go of it before she has a chance to really enjoy it? That is incredibly bold!
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AngryKoi [2012-04-10 10:36:51 +0000 UTC]
Sad Days, is there any chance we can get her friends reactions to her final letter?
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unicorn9927 [2012-03-22 18:36:43 +0000 UTC]
please dont let her die!!!!!! on part 7 make her friends come back to life and the in part 8 make her friends find her and the power of friendship and the elements of harmony bring her back to life!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!
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metapsionic [2012-02-23 00:17:00 +0000 UTC]
Very touching and beautifully made. Thank you for sharing this with us all
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Cominotti [2012-02-22 14:14:45 +0000 UTC]
Cool drawings, but i think the story is too complex for just 5 images
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richfiles [2012-02-22 05:31:49 +0000 UTC]
You know... Seeing how magic works in equestria... I can't buy this end. Some amazing magic of friendship and harmony saved them all and they lived happily! yay! Not ever coming back to this page ever again forever and ever.
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KyojiOgami In reply to richfiles [2012-02-22 05:37:50 +0000 UTC]
Well, there is powerful enough magic to "even bring the dead back to life"
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DarkeonWarlord [2012-02-22 00:38:58 +0000 UTC]
TWILIGHT NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!
Good story, man. For some reason I just REALLY like alicorn Twilight. It seems to fit her. Anyways, very nice pic.
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Northenswede [2012-02-21 12:15:26 +0000 UTC]
These are really good, but I wonder if there's a pic that takes place before these? I think I've seen one but I can't find it in your gallery.
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KyojiOgami In reply to Northenswede [2012-02-22 05:32:16 +0000 UTC]
Nothing specifically. yet...
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bird-in-a-tux [2012-02-21 00:13:01 +0000 UTC]
ok, this is probably the most unhelpful review ever:
Manly tears have been shed.
I think the story is great. The text gives just the right amount of description. Yes, it could be expanded into a long and epic fanfic, but it works great in it's current form as well. The images compliment it all nicely. All in all I really like it
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KyojiOgami In reply to bird-in-a-tux [2012-02-21 00:58:20 +0000 UTC]
The unhelpful review bit isn't true. If I got something good going on too, that is totally a-okay in my book. Thanks for letting me know what you think!
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