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Published: 2015-02-13 14:36:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 865; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 0
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My attempt at doing a charcoal sketch of Vorcha Girl's deviation 'Walking Away (Distance)'Definitely check out her deviation here fav.me/d8grfd9Β and the fic it belongs to!
I am not quite happy with how this turned out but I just can't put my finger on what is bothering me.
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Wow, this turned out really well! Shepard turned out really beautiful, and you portrayed the emotion really well.
Gah, I'm such a Shenko sucker, it should be illegal! LOL
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Thank you!
As for being a Shenko sucker, tell me about it...*laughs*. It's all Kaidan's fault anyway, right?
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Sometimes, he's just too perfect for his own good. I mean he's not even aware of the things he does to us women. It's all because of his boyish charms, and because he's damn hot!
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Oh wow - this is really beautiful. Shepard looks gorgeous and Kaidan looks yummy!
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Thank you! I am glad you like it.
I have been working on it almost every day since last weekend because every time I wanted to upload it I kept on finding little mistakes.
And I am still not happy with it!
Doesn't Kaidan always look yummy?
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That sounds like me whenever I write a chapter of ANYTHING. Even now I'm sitting here rewriting chunks of Distance chapter 12 because I'm not happy with it.
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Exactly.
That is why I am seriously considering taking down the newest chapter of TLR again. I reread it this morning after posting it yesterday on Fanfiction.net and of course I found parts I could do better. You know, a little more description here or there, stuff like that.
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I wouldn't take it down - just update it if you feel the need. It read fine to me (though I haven't finished reading the latest version you posted) but it's a constant thing for me - updating and rewriting!
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