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Published: 2017-12-12 05:46:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 971; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 0
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Description Hooboy here we go~  (And here Salim goes, making a big mistake... 8);; )

I'm trying to find the right balance of tonal range/shading where things will read clearly, but it won't be overworked or anything... hope this works!!  Also hope... it's... not too dark on your computer screen??  urgghh I never know... u_u;;

This comic was started for 24 Hour Comics Day 2017, and is also a continuation of my happy! AU where Salim didn't die, hahaha.  

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This comic is from my story Iris .
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Comments: 14

DeeDraws [2018-02-08 16:06:21 +0000 UTC]

"salim didn't die," great, but now he's gonna lose that hand

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Laitma In reply to DeeDraws [2018-02-08 18:05:27 +0000 UTC]

Eyyyyy not..... not yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeetttttt....................... 8');;;;;;;

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DeeDraws In reply to Laitma [2018-02-09 06:20:08 +0000 UTC]

(;;;*_*)

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Floppsy1 [2017-12-13 06:00:41 +0000 UTC]

Yo this is looking so great so far! I particularly like how you'v done their hair.

Also Sariel, please don't hit my boy too hard...

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Laitma In reply to Floppsy1 [2018-01-02 20:40:52 +0000 UTC]

Aaahhhhhhhhhhh thanks!!  Lmao I still love drawing hair so much, nothin' changed.... re-did Salim's hair so many times tho as I adjusted his design for this AU xD

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MangaToons [2017-12-13 00:03:30 +0000 UTC]

Looks good to me m8

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Laitma In reply to MangaToons [2018-01-02 20:02:26 +0000 UTC]

thanks man!!

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Uinn [2017-12-12 19:49:05 +0000 UTC]

Salim, have you learned nothing? Safer to throw a pillow at her from the other side of the room. 

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Laitma In reply to Uinn [2018-01-02 20:03:05 +0000 UTC]

LMAO right???  you'd think he'd have learned by now... though, throwing a pillow at her might also just make her more mad xD

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spacerocketbunny [2017-12-12 14:56:25 +0000 UTC]

this boy's gonna get punched, I can just see it XD I really like the middle panel and how you drew Salim!

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Laitma In reply to spacerocketbunny [2018-01-02 20:03:48 +0000 UTC]

LMAO EVERYONE'S ALL READY FOR THE VIOLENCE ON POOR SALIM;;;;

And ahhhh th-thank you!!  I think I draw better when zoomed out more, I gotta widen my compositions more often!  >w<;;

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spacerocketbunny In reply to Laitma [2018-01-03 14:56:40 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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Arineange [2017-12-12 13:36:05 +0000 UTC]

Salim did something really dangerous xD
I find the dark tones balanced enough, we know the place it's dark but the drawings are still clear enough to see everything

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Laitma In reply to Arineange [2018-01-02 21:24:00 +0000 UTC]

Aahhhhhhhhh good, I just hope that it's not too dark, I can never know if my screen is calibrated close enough to other peoples'!!  And thanks hahaha, poor Salim, be careful-!  XD

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