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larrycucumber2 — tWiLiGhT DoUjIn chap1 pg1
Published: 2008-01-21 16:54:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 7816; Favourites: 85; Downloads: 0
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Chapter One: First SightTWILIGHT IS NOT MINE ---- IF IT WERE IT WOULD SUCK.
fortunately the whole thing is stephanie meyer's, so now it makes good doujin material ^^
further pagelinks are on my account page thingy, since its a pain in the ass to edit each one everytime i updated.
thanks everyone for taking the time to read this and the artist's comments. mary poppins love you all!
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Comments: 53
I don't like Twilight but this Doujin is kind a cool 
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you should put links for the pages... its hard for me to find the pages.... im sorry if i were rude
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haha ur right i should... dont worry theyll be up by the next doujin page!
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i, uh, luv you too!
thanks for the 
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You've got a great creepy atmosphere going here, you can already feel the tension of her plight, how she has lied about how her day went and feels all the worse for it. Her problems will continue to grow unless she finds a way out of the spiral. ^_^
I really like it. ^_~
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you sure you havent read the book? coz thats pretty much whats comin up!
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Oh its an already made book? 
I guess it just means your doing a good job at capturing the tales true essence then ^_~
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I really like how you're doing this; with the different angles and the movement (such as putting on the seatbelt in this page) - my only suggestion thus far is to add the text in some program on the PC so that it's easier to read for everyone
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yes, putting on your seatbelt is good for you!
thanks for the crit, ill try to figure out how to put the text
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the drawings are neat but I have trouble reading what's written ^^
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dang, way too many ppl have said that... thanks!
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anytime, I know what it feels like... ^^
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Ooh looks great so far, can't wait to see the next page!!
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yay! page one! can't wait for the next update
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^^
the next few pages will take a while, im in the middle of sols...
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Gah, I can't wait to see the first chap finished
So, you're going to release it page by page, then? o-o
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um... u have any idea how to do it side by side?
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'tlak' is an onomatopoeia!
lol, learned that for my sol exam...
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indeed it is! I just couldn't figure out that that was a door, lol
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"tlak"----she is opening the car door
"dgar"-----Her "e"s apparently look like "g"s XDDDD
Because I think it says "dear" XD
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HAPPY BIRTHDAY YESTERDAY! My birthday is Wednesday
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Really? o.o
There's lots of January birthdays, arent there? XD
Thanks! >w<
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She should take a handwriting class ._. *ish hunted down and killed by Rose*
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who was "she" that you were talking about?
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ohcrap.
Hmm, well, will have to answer that when they get back on the computer DX
IM SO SORRY,
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yeah, his name is Larry, lol...
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Well, I have Larry's permission, now, so here.
Look at this picture, and find Larry. That might clear things up about the gender-thing XD [link]
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nvm, Larry is a girl then... right?
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*sigh*
And he's gotten himself into a BIG mess, I say @___@
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how so? didn't expect a guy to have read the book huh? looool..... I just figured you were friends with him, thats why I was like, what are you talking about? haha
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Well, actully he IS my best friend....on the comp and IRL
I'm sure you're probably really confused right now... sorry XD
I guess I can just say that I call him "she" just to annoy him?
I knew he read the book since I used to go to school with him last year and now we're collaborating on this doujinshi....
GAH! Now I'm confused XD
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wow, YEAH, I am confused, lol....
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I'll let explain later, If he wants too @_@
I just hope he isn't mad at me for flooding the picture with my comments o.o
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WOW I am so excited that you are doing the TWILIGHT SERIES!!! AND, I love her expression!
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