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Artist's CommentsChapter One: First Sight
TWILIGHT IS NOT MINE ---- IF IT WERE IT WOULD SUCK.
fortunately the whole thing is stephanie meyer's, so now it makes good doujin material ^^
thanks everyone for taking the time to read this and the artist's comments. mary poppins love you all!
the last page of chapter 1 is done; thank you everyone who read this humble doujin all the way thru! and now, i pass the baton to . thanks again everybody!
further pagelinks are on my account page thingy, since its a pain in the ass to edit each one everytime i updated.
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can u put links to da next pgs? dis is confusing. . .
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all links r posted here: ~larrycucumber2
thanks for reading!
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you have to make the chapter 2!!!! its soooo exiting and your really good at it^^
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thank you very much!
however, my doujin partner, , is in charge of chapter two, so feel free to ask her about it!
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I love you. D:
xD This is an awesome Doujin...
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wow, 
tyvm!
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^^ xD You're very welcome.
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tyvm!
ps: is in charge of chapter 2!
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tyvm!
however, pls turn to for chapter 2, as she and i are taking turns.
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thank you very much!
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Wow, I love this. 
If I were to make any suggestions, it's just with Edward's eyes. When he is standing in front of Bella and glaring, it doesn't look like he's glaring at her, it looks like he's glaring at something behind her.
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glad you like it!
eyes... glaring... gotcha!
and uh... *sigh* what everyone seems to not be getting is that my doujin partner here will be doing chapter 2 (taking turns). please ask her about everything else concerning chapter 2!
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wow! This is so good! You're a great comic book artist. I love your frames. DX I'd love to make comics, but I can't think in frames. All my frames are suck-tacular.
I would only advise cleaning up some of the pencil stuff, and maybe intensifying a couple of Ed's "ANGER" moments. =3 (lovelovelove, though! Good job!)
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erase stuff, intensify, frames... got it!
thanks so much for the comment!
ps: hope that frames problem fades away!
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I hope so too.... any suggestions?
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eh, i havent exactly seen your paneling, and my advice is random bull anyway, so... heres an excellent guide, hope it helps!
[link]
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You rock. =] Can't wait for the whole thing! It's gonna be awesome. (kinda a quick read, the way it's done, but still highly enjoyable!)
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thanks for the encouragement, lizzie
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chapter 2 will be done by my good friend !
we're taking turns at this doujin
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This was so fantastic! i loved it very much! mostly i liked how you have edward staring at her car as she drove away. that was very good!
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'to jump her, or not to jump her...'
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haha. you did that very well.
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Hi!
You can draw really well!
Can't wait for Chapter 2 :]
xD
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shall be doing the 2nd chapter. thanks for your time!
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Could it be? Is this the end of Korn Boy?
Just so you know: I don't count myself to the fangirls, haha ; P
He's just not hot enough : /
Will you take turns in updating chapters?
Nice job with this one- as always!
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Ohhhhhhhhhhh, and I see that I need to refresh my English...oh dear : x
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she drives home with her old truck, and the last panel shows edward wondering whether he should jump her or run away to alaska
*we all know what happens tho...*
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LOL!"Still pissed fan girls", OMG,thanks for updating
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tiz! how come theres no butterfly pics from you?! no flowers?! russian landscape?!
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Well i was sick at first and now i have exams coming up,so no time to take photo's
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aw, no pressure
out of curiousity, whats with all the travelling?
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Long story short,mostly its because of my parents work and the fact that we have a house there that needs to be taken care of(its not old,but there is no one staying there any more).Don't worry, i'm a curious person myself
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Edward making a girl angry isn't nice
But that's ok since we all know you'll be making it up shortly
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thanks for seeing the 1st chappie thru!
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Nyuuuuuu D: *runs away from crapload of work*
XD.....I'll get to work then :3
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