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Published: 2009-08-06 00:26:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 466; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 11
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I hate this so, I'm scrapping it.I'm close to deleting it too.
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I.... I think I nosebleeded out over the whole keyboard. <3
this is so sdlgkhsdlfawesome C:
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Haha! I'm glad you like it! Thank you for the favorite!
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GAWD, have I ever mentioned how much I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE this picture?!?!!?
IT'S AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW WWWWWWWWWWWWWSOMEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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You're Spiff Apple, right? XD Awesome piece you have here.
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Yes Yes tiz i, Spiffy XD thnx youuu
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Dark guy, coooool. Although I have to admit, at first I thought he was a she. Ok, I'm actually going to give you some constructive crit. Here I go!
Ok. Anatomy wise its not bad. Of course, like many artists (including me) the hands could use a little work. They're not that bad, its just a case of figuring out how the joints in the fingers work. I know these are anime proportions, but I'll take a shot at it anyways. His arms seem long and lanky compared to the size of his head and neck. He has very feminine features, such has the width of his neck, the shape of his face, so on. The face, by that I mean the eyes the nose and the mouth, seem to be too low on the head. If you divide the length of the head in two, the eyes are supposed to be on that center axis. Chin is a tad pointy as well. As for the beads, looking at the piece I can almost see the different layer they were on. Compared to the depth you went to shade the rest of the picture, they seem rushed, having pretty much only flat colors. The shiny bits help, but maybe they're even a little excessive. The horns are on top of the hair (I believe you've already heard this bit) and the little crown seems somewhat 2D compared to everything else, almost like paper.
Okkkkkkkk now I'm done
Hope you didn't find any of what I said offensive, I'm really just trying to enlighten you on things you could use a little work on. Don't get me wrong, this piece is very nice, eye catching. Although is a he vampire or a demon? With the whole coffin thing going on I figured vampire, but vampires are not usually depicted with horns... anyways, over all good job on this! I think you got "dark" pretty much summed up with this (although its quite cliche)
One last comment, most of the people in your gallery have that shade, if not a similar shade of hair color. Would be cool to see a little diversity, blonds, red heads, so on. Ok, NOW I'm done.
Sorry for the suffocatingly long commeeeeeeeeent oops...
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No offence taken at all! ^^ I'm thrilled that you gave me some criticism! *takes notes* Please feel free any time to give me criticism, I mean how else am I gonna get better?
Thanks a lot!
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Cool, just haven't given any criticism in a while now, was kinda paranoid xD
No probs huneh C:
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WOW! Every single detail is looked into, every little shine is done on every single bead. I truly admire your patience for that, it must've taken a long time, and looks great!
I love how you coloured his hair, the shine looks very natural. I think his horns kind of stick out, like if they were plastered onto his hair. You see, around the horns, the hair doesn't ripple or move or is affected at all, but usually, hair sort of grows around the horns.
Other than that, I love how you did his clothes - every crease and fold is well drawn and precise. The bow is also very nice and realistic. His hands may be a little big compared to his body, but I'm not quite sure.
And I have simply fallen in love with his wings.
Great job!
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Believe it or not, I don't personally believe I had a lot of patients with the beads. XD; I did it really fast and with outlining details omg, I still see a lot of flaws. All because I was really lazy. xDD; I like it all the same but, I think I should have been more patient.
It makes sence what you said about the horns though, I was thinking about doing that but, I really wans't sure how to go about it.
Hmm, yeah the hands might be slightly off but. xDD I guess it's not a big deal for such a small flaw. xP
Awww so have I, I love doing all types of wings.
Thanks for taking the time to examine the drawing and comment.
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Well, they look great to me!
Yes, the horns can be quite tricky... I tried once and gave up... Maybe if the hair sort of went around, as if the strands started behind the horn and then followed around their base?
Oh no, it's nothing much! I just pointed it out. Really, they look pretty good!
Yes, I see that! You draw wings very well, you seem to have a lot of skills for this!
You're very welcome! It was my pleasure. 
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[LOL I LOVE YOUR ICON] xDD Thank you. C:
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yeah i love it to >w< youre welcome and thx
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KYAHHH SO HAWWTTT~
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X33!! I know I just love how he looks. xP! OMG A COFFIN. xD Yay. xD Thanks for commenting!!
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I WANNA MARRY HIM! ME ME ME ME MEEEE! >_<
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good job! amazing job! this looks awsome! the only thing i noticed is his horns on his wings, one's slightly bigger then the other, but it's beautiful!... SPARKLY BEADS!
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Ahh, I think what I should do from now on is keep in mind sizes of things. ._. If theres two of em, make sure they're the same size. XD
Thank you so much for saying so and commenting!!! :3
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Thank you! *bows* Thanks for commenting!!
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Amazing, love the coloring and the eyes. Although I don't know what the "white" ring around her horns are. I can't be a halo, can it?
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what are you talking about . an he's a guy . an uke. : D thanx tho
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There is this white ring around he head. The hair beneath his horns is lighter. Opps
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I can see how you can mistake that though [a halo]. xDD
*face/palm*
DAMMIT, why can I be moar patient with these big pictures? XD
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Great art takes time. Thats why I don't upload much during the summer, when school starts, then I'll be uploading more..
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HOT HOT HOOOOOOOOT. 8D
You are getting better and better, darling. I absolutely adore when artists draw ridiculously long beads / necklaces; it adds such an glamorous touch. The eyes and the hair are beautifuullll. C: And, the shoulder... thingies -- GOTTA LOVE THEM.
I just have one question: what is he laying inside of or on? : )
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a coffin. xD awwww thanx!11
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AHA I KNEW IT. : D SWEEEEEEEEETT~
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