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LeLumy — Comic Oxygen - Chapter 3 page 21
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Published: 2019-03-08 23:42:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 431; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 0
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New page and a few changes to the upload schedule. Comic pages will now be uploaded every other week (at least for a while). Because I want to work on other art projects too besides comics. So I hope you all don't mind the temporary snail pace this comic will be uploaded for now.
Long time I had to actually draw someting for my comic. I do most of the lineart for a chapter in a batch prior to coloring and some lineart I do digital. I prefer doing lineart tradtional but this page was entirely digital linearted.
Also I need to write down what the dialogue said because 9/10 times I forgot what the dialogue for the page was and I have to improv it.
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Wow you read the entire thing! Wowowowoww thank you so much owowow you are so so kiinddd! I can tell you made an entire cool looking comic right right it's even colored and very pretty! I just start reading it! But so far so good!
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Well it looked great! I really like the longer pages that make use of the modern webcomic format where you can scroll a lot! Definetly nice!
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You sure are doing a lot of cool things lately LeLumy
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Glad you think so Random!
Glad you too are back and making awesome comic pages again!
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whoosh~
the reaction of the two of them looking backwards was so nice
nice pacing!
and the effects of that first panel too! I hope we'll be able to see more of their powers soon, your magic effects are really something ^^
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Ow thank you so much! Yeah I like that bit I don't know why haha but I am glad you like it! Yeah I'd love drawing these magic effects too look so flashy! Thank you again for the kind feedback!
How about your comic any news?
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The magical effects look great as usual! I like the lighting very much! And you showed the surprise of one of the teammates really well! The other one with the sword seems not to be surprised at all, though : - ) I wonder if he knows something about "the summoning trinket"
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Ah thank you again for your profound amazing analysis! And yeah the one with the sword isn't easily suprised by anything I guess it suits his serious nature. I think he doesn't know much about summoning trinklets.
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I'm not complaining here, but we're seeing the pegasus whomp the golem's butt in that first panel, right? I think you should give us at least one outline of the winged horse in the midst of the blurry, glowing slashes. Also, I think there's a typo in the last balloon: "trinket."
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No I think it is great advice and I'll keep it in mind for further chapters. But indeed a little more ''screen time'' could have been given to the pegasus to establish it's presence. Yeah that's possible I see if I can still edit the text balloon haha
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