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Published: 2011-08-27 04:53:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 934; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 9
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Piece by piece, the machine built itself. Clamping things on, drilling holes and filling them with a perfectly fitting screw. Carving metal shapes and searing them onto a metallic body. It began to resemble a humanoid body, albeit lacking flesh and other human characteristics. But soon the machine fixed that, placing a sheet of skin over it and at first it hung loosely, but the body sucked the skin on tightly. Then it placed hair, beautiful long flowing locks of pure white hair, purer than snow, and the body too sucked that on tightly. The eyes were detailed soon after with eyelashes and such, and when they opened they were a stunning yellow, like a cat's eyes. A shirt was paced over her pale bosom and black pants that clung to artificial skin almost as tightly as the skin to the body covered her lower half. Boots were given to her, and with her own delicate hands she put them on herself and waved her hand at the machine, shooing it away. She smiled and flexed herself, testing out her mechanical muscles. So human, yet so perfect.
She walked over to a panel about twelve feet to her right that was slightly transparent, and glowing a familiar blue. She tapped the panel once and it opened to reveal a gun, but no ordinary gun. She dragged her fingers down the smooth, white outside of the gun and grinned. She took it into her hand and put her hand inside, claming it as her own as it made a whirring noise. She shot at a panel across the room, and then another panel besides her. She walked through it and laughed quietly to herself.
"Oh Chell, if you could see me now."
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Comments: 9
portal2-lbp2 [2011-08-27 16:49:02 +0000 UTC]
if chell came back shed be standig by the incinerator and say ''oh hi you must be a new test subject(if she could talk by then)'glados would say oh i kow you ChEll' glados fires a pportal under chell and over the incinerator 'bye' chell places a portal; to stop that portal and she saves herself and a neew era of portal would come into play
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StainedBarrel [2011-08-27 14:35:17 +0000 UTC]
I hope this is more then a standalone piece because this would make for a great story.
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ditistomzelf [2011-08-27 13:17:38 +0000 UTC]
would be fun if one of the cores took over now and let GLaDOS do all the testing for a change!
nice written story
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Euphreana [2011-08-27 11:55:54 +0000 UTC]
Nice!
Well written; I like it! Makes me want to know what happens next. (Is this a standalone piece, or will there be more?)
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lem0nsbr0 In reply to Euphreana [2011-08-27 16:58:13 +0000 UTC]
I think there will be some more.
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