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Published: 2007-12-23 14:52:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 7932; Favourites: 84; Downloads: 24
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I am sooo sorry! I know it took a very long time to submit that third page and that one is really not a great colored one -_-;I really didn't have time to do a better colored version(too much work...)
So maybe the future pages will have flat colors BG I don't know...
I am terribly sorry
The story happens about 3 years after Aang has defeated the firelord..
Of course, i haven't seen the end of season 3 and I began the story when it hadn't begun,so this how the situation is IN MY FANFIC(not in the show..well maybe but I'm not a fortuneteller)
When the story begins,as Katara will say later(you'll see),she and Sokka(and also Toph) haven't seen Aang for more than 8 monthes..they all are a bit worried,and disapointed(especially Katara of course)
What we'll be story
Page 01:
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Page 02:
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Avatar stuff is copyright to Nick,Mike and Brian
The story is copyright to me
Older avatar charachters' designs are copyright to me
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Comments: 37
OK! LET'S GET SOME MEAT!! >> After all these years... Sokka, you haven't changed! 
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Thank you so much
Sokka is hard to draw and I have difficulties in keeping him looking like he is "now" (in the serie) but his attitude is so fun I love drawing him ^^
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Katara looks really beautiful on the fifth pannel
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You not only have A fancomic but also A fanfiction? Is it the same title? Ohhh- I hope its just as good as this stuff
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Actually I think I'm not good enough in writting english to do a fanfic so i decided to put my storyline in a fancomic ^__^
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An excellent page indeed! I don't know why I didn't get an update alert a month ago for this page, but I've got to make sure that doesn't happen again because I love this comic. <3
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Funny enough.. 3 months ago I made a story follwoing tehm 5 years after defeating Ozai, where they haven't seen Aang either... This story is soo similar to my, that you wouldn't believe it ^^ hihi sooo funny
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That fifth panel is just stunning. I can almost feel the wind as it blows Katara's hair...you have such a lovely style
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WOW love the drawings and the stroy seems real cool^_^ take your time^^ its all good
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Thank you very much for all your comments on my draws 
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Oh wow! I love their designs and the storyline! You're amazing!
I'll be watching you! lol
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You have a really beautiful design on the older Katara, keep up the great work.
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Are u going to make another one in when Aang comes back 4 Katara? please do you have too! ( Im a huge Kataang fan)
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Don't worry it's only the beginning, Aang will be back and I exactly know how it will happen between them
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Great!! because I love your story line, and it was just with Katara and Sokka. Hurry I want too see Aang!!
P.s. Tell me when it is out!!
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Woot!!!!!!
Another page! I love this especially with the new season. Bloody roller coster. . . Please keep drawing because this is really well done.
The only issue I have is that the second row. You forgot the lines on her waist wrap.
Other than that I don't see anything else. I can't wait for you to update. You can feel the emotion in their stances and expressions.
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Thank you so much!I already noticed the absence of the lines but I think I'm too lazy (and I have too much work)
I really am happy that you like my story
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i LOVE how you do her hair
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Thank you! Actually I love their pairing but my webcomic is not only dealing with pairings,it's a part af the story..like the anime..it deals a lot with fights and adventure
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oh cool
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just on DA sorry -__- I'm coloring page 04 and inking the fifth page (coloring takes me too much time -_-)
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i shall wait patiently haha
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YAY!!! More! I want to see when she and Aang meet up again!
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I love this comic! The characters are all so... them! I love the designs even the statue of Yue was a great insert! The background makes me breathless!
YEY! Toph is coming! I can't wait to see how pretty she is in her older self! As a twelve year old she's already so pretty! ...I wish I were that pretty when I was that young...
I hope it's a Tokka too! Heheh. Sorry couldn't resist. It's my hope since there are absolutely no Tokka comics and the few that are made... and unfinished are kinda... no really bad.
Update as soon as you can!
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Ca fait 10 minutes que j'admire cette page, c'est vraiment magnifique. J'adore, c'est super fluide avec le mouvement des cheveux, vraiment c'est super beau et super agrΓ©able Γ lire ^_^
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merci beaucoup!..j'ai encore des progrès a faire.(quand je vois la vitesse à laquelle tu fais tes pages toi.)
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Moi je me fais torturer par Shinai pour aller vite ^^'
Mais surtout je ne prends pas la peine de mettre en couleur et je n'ai pas Γ rΓ©flΓ©chir Γ l'histoire ^_^ toi tu fais beaucoup plus de boulot que moi
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This is wonderful and i'm glad you went with the major couples kataang and maybe tokka it just makes it all round out so well...smiles.. The art is very well done as well! This is just how i pictured them grown-up!
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Nice work
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lol Sorry Katara, but Sokka is all about the meat.
And please tell me the next chapter will have Toph in it!
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Yes, the next page deals with Toph
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Yay! Older!Toph!
I can't wait to see your version of her!
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I pray that it ends up having Tokka in it! I can't wait to see your older version of Toph too! I'm just really hoping that this has Tokka, b/c it is great and I wouldn't want to be put off by it if it wasn't...
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Yay, Toph will be in the next chapter! Huzzah! This is awesome so far, can't wait for the next one!
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