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Published: 2012-11-02 17:24:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 3137; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 6
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Sorry, sorry,... I'm not very good in English, so if some of you want to help me correct my mistake it will be nice! ^ ^Thanks you! :hug
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Loving it so far! Great character and story. And I love Korra's facet in th first panel! <3
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Waaaah Thanks a lot! >3<
We'll see Korra soon again normally.
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Ok, so i only noticed maybe one thing that could be fixed which is on panel 4
"So I leave....."
I would say, "So I'll leave you..."
Good job, I really like it so far!
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Thank you very much for the compliment and correction. ^^
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I just started to read this and I love it. Your character is cool and you draw well. : 3
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Thank you very much for everything >///3////<
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err for korra i think she should be saying "Well If you say so, if you'll excuse me i've got to go.
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I really love the comic so far and your character.
I'm currently learning French, and trying to decipher everything in the French version, and then to see what it actually should say in the English version, is extremely helpful. It's really helped me with improving my skills when it comes to reading in French, so thanks for having both versions up! (Even though I know that's not the reason you have both versions up)
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Thank you very much >////<)
No problem! I'm glad that you render service ^^! But I'm not very good in English, so it is possible for me to make mistake ^^' XD
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Yeah it made more sense in French...XD But there were a good deal of parts that were clarified with the English version.
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Thanks >3π: 0 β©: 0
Great! I'm loving this ;D
I feel horrible doing this, but..
In the very last bubble, it should say "Just dust" 
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Thank you very much >///3///<
(thanks for the correction, and more, in the 3th bubble this was right... ! XD)
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did I say something about the 3rd bubble?!
but yes, it is correct
and it's ok!
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Non c'est moi qui dit que je l'ai écrit juste dans la 3 et pas dans le dernière >< je ne suis pas douer XD
(je met en franΓ§ais peu-Γͺtre que tu me comprendra mieux ^^') XD
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merci beaucoup!
tu est bon!
(c'est ok avec "tu", pas "vous", oui? 
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Merci ^^!
(Oui pour moi tu peu dire "tu" >3< ^^!)
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Ok! >3< Mercciiiiiii! <3
ah, j'ai besoin d'aller a ton galerie! XD Pour ton "comic"!
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*.* Ouiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!! Va voir, va voir! XD
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hey! I feel like correcting you is rude, but you asked for it >.>
in the third box, it should be "Just dust" or "Just some dust" not "Just a dust", since a dust doesn't make sense. Dust insn't really a singular thing, you know?
the fourth: "If you say so" not "If you say it" and the second sentance might sound better as "I've got to go, I'm in a hurry"
not sure what the 5th is supposed to be, but "I'll see you later" or "I'll see you around" would fit perfectly!!
I hope I helped and didn't offend you X)
Also I love this comic
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Thank you very very much for your help! It's very nice because I'm not very good in english ^^'. I change this now!
Thanks for all!
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I noticed korra said "Hev...". is that the other characters name or is she saying "Hey..."?
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No she say "heu..."
She think...
It is a... "onomatopoeia"
But maybe it doesn't say like that in English?
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Like I said before it could go ether way.
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You might try, "Huh?" It's what most English speakers say when they're surprised or notice something.
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Ok!!! XD It is impressive to see as a "sound" changes from one country to another when writing! 0.0
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Hahaha isn't it? I always think it's cool to see how a "sound" changes from one language to another.
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I completely agree!
I laughed when I read this: [link]
XD
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