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Published: 2005-03-18 10:39:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 709; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 59
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You are forbidden fruit to me,yet I can't stop thinking of you.
Whenever you smile that smile,
you just draw me in a little more.
I know that it is selfish of me,
but I wish that you were mine.
Whenever you mention your girl,
you just make me die a little more.
You said that we have chemistry,
and I feel it between the both of us.
Whenever you speak my name,
you just cage me in a little more.
I know that we can never be,
but I wish that it wasn't a truth.
Whenever you tell me goodbye,
you just make me cry a little more.
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Comments: 28
very well done piece... poignant work. great writing poetess
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Thank you so much. 
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No problem, hun! 
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hey this one is great...i know exactly how this must be...
very nice poem young girl...very nice
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Thank you very much, Ramon!
I appreciate it.
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I remember having those feelings a looooooooooong time ago.
New boyfriend... the same one you told me about whose name starts with a C?
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Yes, that's him! We're 'officially' a couple now instead of just dating.
Thank for the comment, too!
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The sentiment is true and honest but there is nothing to be said here in regards to actual POETRY. You simply summed up your feelings in a series of metered sentences.
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If that's what YOU think, then more power to you.
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so true, so god damn true!
I know that it is selfish of me,
but I wish that you were mine.
I know that we can never be,
but I wish that it wasn't a truth.
and then the guilt sets in...
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Thank you very much, I appreciate it!
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Good writing. I can definitely identify with this at the moment.
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That is really beautiful. You have very nice words here. I am soo gonna have to check out some more from you. I am gonna add you to my friends.
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Thank you so much for the comment, 
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Wow, there's so much raw emotion here.
Christ, this sends shivers down my spine, I can just imagine being in this situation...I'm so sorry that he was such a prick - couldn't see the amazing person you are
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Thank you so much for the comment!
It isn't too bad that he and I didn't end up together afterall, because now I have a great guy in my life that I love and he loves me back!
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Well, alls well that ends well then isn't it?
Glad you found someone who can see and cherise you for who you are...cliche yes but absolutely true...you're a real angel with talent
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Thank you very much, I appreciate that!
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If only he saw you through my eyes. You are full of passion and adventure. Your eyes too speak of great romance and intrigue.
If you ask me, he missed out. Definately.
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Thank you very much! 
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