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Published: 2005-03-04 11:00:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 1035; Favourites: 11; Downloads: 73
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Description You said you don’t understand
how she could hurt you that way.
You said you don’t know
what you ever did do to deserve that.

You said you loved her
with all of your heart and soul.
You said you needed her
with every fiber of your being.

You tell me that you’re sorry
for all that happened between us.
You tell me that you’re ready
to try again and that you love me.

I simply smile and deny you
since I’m tired of your sob stories.
I simply smile and walk away
leaving you to think about some things.

Karma is a lovely thing sometimes.
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Comments: 40

spiritualrocket [2008-04-13 13:58:38 +0000 UTC]

YES!

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Megza [2008-03-16 15:13:43 +0000 UTC]

I like the way that you've written about a topic which so many people can relate to. Well written!

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BEAR15 [2006-11-12 00:28:48 +0000 UTC]

i love it!

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uBrokeMeN2 [2005-04-20 01:56:31 +0000 UTC]

powerful........good stuff.............

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southern5footer [2005-03-15 16:55:29 +0000 UTC]

Amazing writing as usual

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leopardivory In reply to southern5footer [2005-03-16 00:18:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much, hun!

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virgem-suicida [2005-03-14 14:01:21 +0000 UTC]

very deep i really liked this poem a lot !

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leopardivory In reply to virgem-suicida [2005-03-15 05:12:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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fallen-princess [2005-03-14 08:00:06 +0000 UTC]

too right! karma can be beautiful, i'm just waiting for mine lol. great poem by the way

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leopardivory In reply to fallen-princess [2005-03-15 05:12:07 +0000 UTC]

Karma is wonderful, sometimes. Thank you very much for the and comment!

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6-Simplicity-9 [2005-03-08 03:49:13 +0000 UTC]

How true. Nice writing sweetie

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leopardivory In reply to 6-Simplicity-9 [2005-03-08 22:12:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you muchly, hun!

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kamijisatsu [2005-03-06 12:13:03 +0000 UTC]

Wtf? I didn't comment on this?

Anywho ..

I really can't say anything that hasn't been said by me before. Your poetry is tremendous and 100x better than my own.

You rule.

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leopardivory In reply to kamijisatsu [2005-03-06 23:16:59 +0000 UTC]

Aww, thank you.



But whatever, my poetry is so not better than yours.

you!

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kamijisatsu In reply to leopardivory [2005-03-07 03:12:52 +0000 UTC]



Is huh.

you too. [=

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missyssim [2005-03-06 03:33:33 +0000 UTC]

Love it.

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leopardivory In reply to missyssim [2005-03-06 09:17:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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missyssim In reply to leopardivory [2005-03-06 16:29:05 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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missyssim In reply to leopardivory [2005-03-06 16:29:05 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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Truth-Hurts [2005-03-05 03:28:59 +0000 UTC]

Wow, thats really powerful.

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leopardivory In reply to Truth-Hurts [2005-03-05 03:35:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much.

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ElinVerrill03 [2005-03-04 21:16:25 +0000 UTC]

i like it!

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leopardivory In reply to ElinVerrill03 [2005-03-05 01:20:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Regen [2005-03-04 20:31:43 +0000 UTC]

Good poem! It probably strikes a familiar chord in many - including myself.

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leopardivory In reply to Regen [2005-03-05 01:19:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you muchly, Tanya! I'm sure a lot of people have been in this situation.

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Regen In reply to leopardivory [2005-03-05 02:11:37 +0000 UTC]

Yah, I think I said that.

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leopardivory In reply to Regen [2005-03-05 02:16:15 +0000 UTC]

Yes, you did indeed.

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Regen In reply to leopardivory [2005-03-05 02:22:56 +0000 UTC]

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Your-Canadian-Angel [2005-03-04 20:06:18 +0000 UTC]

Wow, thats an awesome poem, i've been in that situation but wow......great poem, seriously. Keep up the good work!! *favs*

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leopardivory In reply to Your-Canadian-Angel [2005-03-05 01:18:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for the comment and the fav! I'm glad that you liked it and can relate to it.

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sleepingtodeath [2005-03-04 19:54:40 +0000 UTC]

really good poem...

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leopardivory In reply to sleepingtodeath [2005-03-05 01:17:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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larafairie [2005-03-04 14:06:24 +0000 UTC]

A very meaningful poem you've created.

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leopardivory In reply to larafairie [2005-03-05 01:16:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much, I appreciate it.

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avRedline [2005-03-04 11:07:23 +0000 UTC]

I like the message in this, you show a lot of strength and charactor that a lot of girls lack. Good on you for not listening to his "sob stories" And if that's you in the picture...

'tis all I have to say

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leopardivory In reply to avRedline [2005-03-04 11:18:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much, I appreciate it! And no, that is not me in the picture. If you'd like to see what I look like, go to my Scraps. There is a picture of me in there.

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avRedline In reply to leopardivory [2005-03-04 11:23:12 +0000 UTC]

And another for ya hah. I should go to bed

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leopardivory In reply to avRedline [2005-03-04 11:24:33 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. And I just woke up.

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avRedline In reply to leopardivory [2005-03-04 11:25:33 +0000 UTC]

darn east coasters

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leopardivory In reply to avRedline [2005-03-04 11:27:40 +0000 UTC]

Yes!

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