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Description I was too young to remember;
     maybe I still am.

But somewhere hidden,
     under layers of wax,
     it still burns.
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Comments: 39

AngelofGod87 [2009-04-05 19:31:43 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful imagery and powerful wording albeit short, its still very powerful.

TTFN
Me

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leoraigarath In reply to AngelofGod87 [2009-04-06 08:48:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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AngelofGod87 In reply to leoraigarath [2009-04-08 16:05:10 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

TTFN
Me

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Panda-Vision [2009-04-05 10:54:07 +0000 UTC]

Very very good, wax is such an excellently chosen term for so many reasons.

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leoraigarath In reply to Panda-Vision [2009-04-06 08:51:14 +0000 UTC]

I agree... Thank you for noticing it.

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Panda-Vision In reply to leoraigarath [2009-04-06 10:49:04 +0000 UTC]

I would elaborate but I guess most reasons are pretty self explanatory. Haha my first comment makes me look silly with how much of an obvious thing to point out that was

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leoraigarath In reply to Panda-Vision [2009-04-06 13:47:12 +0000 UTC]

Sometimes the obvious is something that should be mentioned
don't worry about it. Thanks

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moondrunk [2009-04-04 19:18:42 +0000 UTC]

mothers are round
and in the mouth
but fathers
slip through fingers often
why?

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leoraigarath In reply to moondrunk [2009-04-06 09:32:06 +0000 UTC]

Because there is a tendency towards the female, always. Especially in poetry, the woman figure, the feminine charm, seems to fit the smooth and "delicate" concept of poetry. well... that and in most of the world's cultures the kids are attached to the mother...

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moondrunk In reply to leoraigarath [2009-04-06 09:48:00 +0000 UTC]

took the words right outta my mouth.
can't add much more.

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leoraigarath In reply to moondrunk [2009-04-06 13:47:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for this comment... it was well in place, I think.

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moondrunk In reply to leoraigarath [2009-04-07 00:02:21 +0000 UTC]

np

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fickle-writing [2009-04-04 13:23:28 +0000 UTC]

It's short, but powerful and to the point. It's really great, actually. I'm far too verbose to pull off something like that. (see, even my remarks are longer )

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leoraigarath In reply to fickle-writing [2009-04-06 13:38:52 +0000 UTC]

I appreciate long comments, as deep as it goes the better I feel about evaluating what I pulled off, where to change what and how to look at it and my art.

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Elmara [2009-04-04 09:19:57 +0000 UTC]

very evocative

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leoraigarath In reply to Elmara [2009-04-05 20:03:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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x-x-sakura-x-x [2009-04-04 08:28:04 +0000 UTC]

i think it's beautiful. especially all the thought behind it <3

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leoraigarath In reply to x-x-sakura-x-x [2009-04-05 19:42:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Tuttlebird [2009-04-04 01:31:41 +0000 UTC]

So much emotion in such a small amount of words, very moving.

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leoraigarath In reply to Tuttlebird [2009-04-05 19:43:08 +0000 UTC]

thank you.

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LadyLincoln [2009-04-04 00:22:10 +0000 UTC]

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leoraigarath In reply to LadyLincoln [2009-04-05 19:43:37 +0000 UTC]

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Mari-xx [2009-04-04 00:21:24 +0000 UTC]

amazing.

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leoraigarath In reply to Mari-xx [2009-04-05 20:03:38 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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Mari-xx In reply to leoraigarath [2009-04-06 01:47:04 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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PoetryOD [2009-04-03 23:01:09 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful, painful, and just beautiful

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leoraigarath In reply to PoetryOD [2009-04-05 19:43:22 +0000 UTC]

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scarletwave [2009-04-03 22:24:36 +0000 UTC]

Who couldn't relate to this, Omri... well done.

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leoraigarath In reply to scarletwave [2009-04-05 20:03:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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SayFarewell [2009-04-03 20:11:47 +0000 UTC]

I think it's amazing how people can write so few words and produce and enormous amount of imagery. This is wonderful.

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leoraigarath In reply to SayFarewell [2009-04-05 20:04:37 +0000 UTC]

Sometimes I read things that make me feel just the same... thank you.

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SayFarewell In reply to leoraigarath [2009-04-05 22:07:18 +0000 UTC]

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TheBloodWriter [2009-04-03 20:10:11 +0000 UTC]

Your a master of searing short poetry.

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leoraigarath In reply to TheBloodWriter [2009-04-05 20:04:57 +0000 UTC]

heh... thank you...

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RavensQuill [2009-04-03 19:50:48 +0000 UTC]

It says a lot with so very few words. You conveyed your emotion very well.

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leoraigarath In reply to RavensQuill [2009-04-05 20:05:40 +0000 UTC]

thank you, I'm glad that you think so... it means a lot...

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RavensQuill In reply to leoraigarath [2009-04-07 07:47:56 +0000 UTC]

You are quite welcome!

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starangel0 [2009-04-03 18:48:21 +0000 UTC]

very good ...

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leoraigarath In reply to starangel0 [2009-04-05 20:05:07 +0000 UTC]

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