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Leptocyon β Monsters of Hoenn -last, unpublished page (11-3)
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Published: 2013-01-02 18:42:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 779; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 0
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This comic is abandoned.This was my long overdue debt.
And yeah, one paper is missing so you miss a part of the story (after Brendan and Wally waking up).
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Nooooo why did you end this is what made you famous >.<
But it was good while it lasted
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Yesssss the last page is here! *steals and puts under pillow*
Okay, you're right about the omnipresent walls of text. But then, your characters do have a lot of thoughts to express. xD Althea's musings about PokΓ©mon training were very insightful, and I loved the interaction between Nava and her~.
That panel with Brandon and Wally getting up has the coolest perspective. *steals for real* And I can see how you improved the paneling.
Also: Oh Wally.
Comment on journal coming soon. 0u0
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I know, I know. And what's bigger problem? I have so many philosophical questions and discussion in plan for new Nuzlocke. :iconsweetdropplz: Now I'm working on how to give more thoughts in less text. Man, you readers will have to be a veeery active readers to keep up with all I have in mind for this one. :S At least I decided that new format won't be this big. 
Yeah, I loved that panel when I drew it. Now I know that there is a bunch of errors. Don't look at them now! arghh XD
Sorry for a wall of text there too.
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Hmm... Maybe make the text more visually interesting, like on this: [link] (Okay, that's not really a ton of text. My collection of examples for everything is not big enough yetttt D: )
Very active reader count +1
Pfff, I couldn't do better anyway. xD
Long journals are the best journals. That's what journals are for. :3
PS.: Congrats on 200 watchers and 10,000 pageviews!
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Oh, I think you didn't understand that last part full of text. There were supposed to come panels which would show Brendan's and Wally's battle but instead of them giving commands you would read a phone conversation between Althea's parents. I didn't get to draw that while I was still drawing MOH and I didn't want to waist time on drawing all that stuff later so I just added dialogue.
But I think I will try to avoid adding just text without any pictures around it. Besides being so overused scheme it looks more appealing when you have to look at something else beside text. :S
P.S. so, you stalk my statistics too, huh? hehe nice, nice. And thank you. I guess.
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Nah, I understood that, I was pondering over long text passages in general.
That's what I couldn't find - an example of a long text accompanied with pictures that show something other than the talking person. Like those epic montages in animes when a plot point is revealed or a legend is told or something like that.
Me, stalking statistics? Never.
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And one last fav to send the comic on its way!
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D'X ...a good comic abandoned and lol, Wally won XD
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Well, I wasn't to pleased with how I worked on this so...
Yeah, sad but all those plot wholes would come to a payment sooner or later. :S
hehe, yeah, I wanted to go to that gym already XD
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lol, ok, i understand 
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I'm afraid I won't start it in a month at least. I still have to end the game and write all plot down. It could last even more (and probably will) since my mid terms are coming soon and I'll need to study a lot so we'll see.
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ok 
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I guess it's too late to give grammar and english corrections.
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Well, if you're willing you can always send me a note to see where I did wrong but I won't be correcting this. I must send you a special thanks for those grammar corrections. I appreciate that a ton... you can's even imagine how much.
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Oh, there are many reasons. Even more than I stated in journal but I was to green when starting this, without any serious plans for this (I only had that Rayquaza plot which I wanted to use and nothing else). With knowledge I gained in this past year I couldn't close my eyes on horrible mistake I did back then. Even if this comic is still on it's very beginning I already see so many things I would change. So yeah... I'm not completely satisfied with closing this but at this moment I think it's the best solution
My apologies to you readers. I'm sorry.
[link] -journal with further explanation
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Thank you for the explanation!
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No problem. I can understand that. 
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because Lept is losing inspiration for writing it. I'm pretty sad about it too.
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abandoned? it seems like a good story to continue.
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Well, if I don't have this another story that preoccupied my mind I would probably start this all over again but this time I would plan all stuff onward. I was to green when starting this, without any serious plans for this (I only had that Rayquaza plot which I wanted to use and nothing else). With knowledge I gained in this past year I couldn't close my eyes on horrible mistake I did back then. Even if this comic is still on it's very beginning I already see so many things I would change. So yeah... I'm not completely satisfied with closing this but at this moment I think it's the best solution
My apologies to you readers. I'm sorry.
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hey i understand. i had to reboot my own nuzlocke cause i wasnt satisfied but now its running better so i can completly relate. good luck and ill keep watch.
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